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What did you like about your time with us?

Who's work did you see and what did you like about it?

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i saw yen’s work and it was very fun and funny to read :D

it was fun talking about spoo and friends to other people without feeling embarrassed

edit: hi

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I changed the setting, theme, mood, and color coordination.
Miracle

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I changed the story

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script is private no more sneak peeks for anyone

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script is private no more sneak peeks for anyone

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Tammy

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Exposition
We are astronauts

Conflict
There is an alien among us

Rising Action
Somebody is eliminated, we don't know who

Climax
We call a meeting

Falling Action
We vote someone out

Resolution
We kicked the wrong person out.

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Exposition: Introducing each character and the setting

Conflict/First Act: 9/11 orphanages Mohammed and his brother. Mohammed is separated from his brother and taken to Iran, his home country, by an elderly couple escaping violence because his brother was reportedly dead to Mohammed. The same thing happened with Ali, except  he turned out homeless

Second Act: Mohammed’s caregivers pass away and he is left by himself. He decides to go to America and sees all the racism present. He then becomes inspired to make a change. After, he becomes a Senator and pushes many reforms.

Third Act: Mohammed is now running for president. He becomes president and reforms many things over an 8-yr span. He faces many enemies and corruption along the way. At the end, Mohammed retires knowing he has made a change in the world.

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The parts i changed from Casted was i made it so the entire empire of Sacrene Kingdom is ruled by a dictator named Harrison Hilford and made a smal settlement where rebels lived

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In progress all I have are character names, settings, Name of story, and chapter 1’s name my name of the story is the title
-miracle

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They meet the Nifo Tribe a tribe of bugs or small half human half critter people

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I added characters and switched the plot to be more cohesive

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There was a kingdom in the Eastern Islands in the “Serene Kingdom” also known as the “Peace Kingdom”, where they only knew peace. Due to this peace they were capable of creating significant advancements which benefited for all races and animals. There was no such thing as war just beauty. It flourished with luscious plants and flowers which encased the landscape. The sky and water were always clean and crystal clear. Until One Day there was a mysterious figure who wore a black cloak and a handkerchief. They was swift and stealthy. They sneakily entered the castle through an opened window and assassinated the royal family and overthrew the kingdom by manipulating the guards to kidnap all the babies in the kingdom from villagers. Where he later told them when they were older lies saying that people who adored and followed The former king were bad people and should be exterminated. When they were all in their teen years they were forced to be personal knights and he ordered them to kill anyone who follows the former king. Anybody who followed the former king were considered rebels. Whilst the people who followed the new king were called heroes. The kingdom was broken into regions the top was where the king and nobles lived while the middle region was the home to the poor and was also the war zone, leading to a massacre of many innocent civilians. The survivors and rebels of the mass genocide then fled down south of the Land where they made base and were living as refugees.  -Sunny Lim

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https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1IZ1MvhcbGpdSba7CvV2RvIpkb8ioxijnEW4ZXQq11FU/edit?usp=sharing

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I added a setting,a character and I added personallity

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dybzpCZAq2kpP3GxaZ_DwrHps-PjSA5g9Nji4P6y6nI/edit

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I love doing storyboard, and I could upgrade writing. I changed some things in storyboard. I made a mistake in it as you can see here in the link. I really need to upgrade my writing skills because it’s kinda bad.  https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1IZ1MvhcbGpdSba7CvV2RvIpkb8ioxijnEW4ZXQq11FU/edit

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writing is the fun part right now even when i don’t have any ideas, when i do have ideas my creativity explodes and i try every thought and scenario in my head

i hope that i build up the story well enough that it will be unpredictable yet fun to read

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it change twice! plot : brotherly loe turned to one sided fam love/ very sad and evil MIDDLE SCHOOL AND UP
i have characters twins, enemies and friends turned evil it is horrible and sad warnig the comic version may be very weird and have bad drwaing pls do not judge the artistry and the way it is set up it is kinda intense for younger viewers again pls DONT JUDGE ME THOSE WHO JUDGE WILL BE EXICUTED!?! ad it is fun to express my feels throgh muh story oof

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I changed my whole story

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What I enjoy most about my wow is the thrill of the plot and its a really interesting story I made up. it's a story of a facility of where you can only be happy which I won't say anymore since it's a surprise. I want to improve on the steps my mc has to go through and the struggle he has to face to achieve his new found goal.

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I changed the beginning of the story to be more exposition than event

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What I really like about my story is the plot and the creative abilities that will be unlocked to the characters. The way that the general will adventure to different fantasy lands to recruit a team of strong loyal people who can take on the Dictator of New”. He is really rich and Powerful who uses dark magic the strongest and dangerous magic there is.

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I changed the beginning of the story to be more exposition than event

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https://plotfactory.com/app/universes/22160

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Write 3-5 sentences on:
–Where you are at in your WOW (ex: rising action, conflict, falling action, etc.)
–What is developed so far? (ex: setting, characters, morals, etc.)

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-still on the first chapter
-did not develop anything yet

i am going to remove a few conflicts and transitions. i might speed up the story a bit so it might be fast paced. it’s not going to be digital anymore.

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For my wow I am almost finished on revising on my conflict and I am starting to try making it sound right. In addition, I am trying to work out how my story Happy is going to go and what kinds of events the mc has to trigger. As well as making the story more interesting since it seemed really boring.

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I’m about in the middle. It is very tragic and is not for viewers under the age of 13 YEARS OF AGE. If you have had a glimps of it you would know how tragic it is. I believe I am almost done but I will be making and written version and a drawn version.

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I am almost finished with my story I just need to add a few more characters and more clips. I also want to add more characters

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I’m in the conflict and about to get into the juice of things

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I am making a new story because my original one was too long. I have about 16 characters names and personalities finished. So I’m going to make a murder mystery which could have simple concepts. There will be a twist at the end.

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I’m kinda done I might add more story to it. I’m just gonna do one more story then I can complete my WOW project. Also I might fix some bugs in my story because I make errors a lot.

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I’m in the middle of my story. I am developing my characters and setting. The main event is happening right now and I am letting it have its effect.

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Slideshow/lesson:
Your work:

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 Creative Writing week 7 Supplemental material

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link: to your progress

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PlotFactory: https://plotfactory.com/app/stories/50585/

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https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1-L2GUKl9jBFqlKBLT-enAQDsdona6wzKrSvPVv4NOjQ/edit

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diptrus spoiler
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Background drawn by my friend
Everything else is drawn by me

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Copy of Creative Writing week 7 SUPER Supplement

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https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1GsZ7636kS9nPvrthcojjypUXXdRORPhLdZDZbG5N5Gk/edit

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My board :3 https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/15LJJ_rAyKK6VBc9h4czfM7zXsSNLFItQLOosLaDwyWo/edit

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LINK TO YOUR PROJECT (Google Slides, Google Doc)

Make sure to share it with: dronilehiraldo@citizenschools.org

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https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/18IpIIKn_C3-NZBidl_m_Wgs3Ve0S-372xHIbF93_VM0/edit  (Ps I’m still in the process of transferring from plot factory)

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https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1O2T5t-_E-QYM2T3dQImMhv4RbFpjCnKpRqZi9egO6OE/edit
(Not done)

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https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1YSb8mLm1ttYgJlo64HnMqvnSc1OaF-8sRjyKG8-MvT0/edit#slide=id.p

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https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1PaM6py1IhqVXU9YlUriXnWKPrz0OyzjJ9Ulh85TWwyE/edit
it won’t make sense right because i’m not done with the story yet 😅

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“Brothers Forever”
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/10okp-neWOONUf-GWRHkCvsG1zq7INYNVOF7eEpD94o8/edit

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Title of your WOW
LINK TO YOUR WOW

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2001
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1To-Y7KUBOqKOyHhgkXi_rIk3Qxqd8mpelq_0leumLfU/edit

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spoo & friends a
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1Qq1GJrzyCYmnXpxn-kpPw2TlCR5hapZGvxosLKUQ4gI/edit

i need help with:
-fly’s character development
-using the word “flew” less

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Among us (not done)
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1elY8elt0QZmKyqdz5sT-T1wgEpQwK8rn5HBBR60KHO4/edit
Spellings and grammar (if there is any)

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1m4rFFOZQyg7qQUCHDHhFdxetIgz9YYMeXHGeuCe_C_0/edit?usp=sharing

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Wow project (done) https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1uFB3QbkO32S78oh4saTLZwwwJLSBC6ufknyKW-7isuA/edit

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Ollie the Panda and Lola the Lion
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1YSb8mLm1ttYgJlo64HnMqvnSc1OaF-8sRjyKG8-MvT0/edit?usp=sharing

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My favorite moment in creative writing is the amount of support and encouragement that the staff and other students in it have given me.

One of the work I found interesting was Tammy’s. Hers is a story about bugs who have simple designs but really detailed stories or plots.

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When you needed to turn in your wow projects early so that you still have more time to fix the things you did wrong and fix it.

I really likes Miracles project because she shows a lot of details. and explains what the characters prespective is about.

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Well to be honest I didn’t see much of other people’s Wow but I really like Tammy’s Wow slide I read it a bunch of times if something get change over time also I really like a the memes and the art work

Probably the part when I got encouraged (sorry if I was always silent I didn’t want to say much 😅I am trying to be more confident please no hate ^-^ I also love how we always say such random things that is funny at the end of the day lol

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I like doing my WOW project, and I like sharing my opinion with other people.

I like Angelina’s story because it has the same style “cartoony”
I like cartoony story’s:

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It was a great experience in Creative Writing. I got to communicate and it was fun doing my wow.

I checked Niko’s work and it was really creative and it looked like it took a lot of work.