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The red one looks more convincing because the steps are more clearier

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The red one is a better example, because explains how the rectangular is bigger than the circular cake.

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What makes a good write-up good is the details, explanations, informations that support the write-up.

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It's more detailed.
It has a proper explanation

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The red one have more details and explanation on how to get the answer.

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The red one have more information and detail and more math. The thing that make a good write up good is  the information you put down and the thought process of it

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The pink paper need to shows formulas and use it to solve for the volume. Should have an explanation to why they use the volume formula and describe the steps that they take to solve for the volume. Last but not least, should compare the two cake using the volume solution.

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The dark red used complete sentences

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The red is more detailed, and it has a reasonable explanation.

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The red one give a mathematics reason why the rectangle shape is bigger.
Give number to why it bigger.
Explained in detail to why is bigger

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It more convincing because when they solve for the cakes they use formula and complete and clear sentences.

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The pink should have had better explanation, shouldn't depend on the picture so much, and they should've been more clear. They need to be smart.

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Jk, it's red. It's more descriptive and just better overall.

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I think red because it is explained in more detail.

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It have more detail, and it show how you explain the question and and share the ideas