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"I'm coming" blasted Jayne before she jumped out of the front door  in to chilly morning  

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"I'm coming" blasted Jayne before she jumped out of the front door  in to chilly morning  

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Owain jenkins

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I'm coming grumbled Jayne as she zoomed out the door on the cold frosty morning

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I'm coming grumbled Jayne as she zoomed out the door on the cold frosty morning

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Logan Price

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"I'm coming", screeched Jayne before she barged out of the front door in to the cold morning.
James Jones

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"I'm coming"bellowed Jayne as she stormed out into the cold morning air.                     

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"I'm coming"bellowed Jayne as she stormed out into the cold morning air.                     

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Isabel Lloyd-Davies

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"I'm coming" replied Jayne as she exited the house into the brisk morning air.

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"I'm coming" replied Jayne as she exited the house into the brisk morning air.

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Dylan Landry

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"I'm coming" screamed Jayne before she burst out of the door in to the brisk morning.                       

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"I'm coming" screamed Jayne before she burst out of the door in to the brisk morning.                       

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Poppi-lil

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I'm coming uttered   Jane before she tierdly walked though the door into the icy morning 

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I'm coming uttered   Jane before she tierdly walked though the door into the icy morning 

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Hannah Edwards

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"I'm coming", screeched Jayne  before she sprinted out of the front door into the frosty morning.

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"I'm coming", screeched Jayne  before she sprinted out of the front door into the frosty morning.

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Ryan

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"I'm coming"  blasted out Jayne before she burst out of the front door in to the icy cold.

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"I'm coming"  blasted out Jayne before she burst out of the front door in to the icy cold.

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Iestyn Phillips

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"I'm coming", hollered Jayne , as she scampered out the front door toward the bleak morning.

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"I'm coming"bellowed Jayne as she scrambled out of the door into the ice cold air.

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"I'm coming"bellowed Jayne as she scrambled out of the door into the ice cold air.

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Rubi Skeels

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I'm coming shivered Jayne as she rushed out of the door into frosty morning

Nia branwen

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"I'm coming", said Jayne before she ran out of the front door in to the cold morning.

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"I'm coming", said Jayne before she ran out of the front door in to the cold morning.

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Can you improve upon my opening sentence?
Mrs James

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"I'm coming" mumbled Jayne as she staggered out of the front door into the bitter cold
Gwenllian L

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'I'm coming' shivered Harry while plodding into the cozy house for some nice warm hot chocolate.
Milly Walters

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"I'm coming" wispered Jayne before  jogging out of the front door into the brisk cold morning.

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"I'm coming" wispered Jayne before  jogging out of the front door into the brisk cold morning.

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Daniel Harris

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"I`m coming" screamed Jayne as she darted out of the front door into the bitter cold  morning.

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"I`m coming" screamed Jayne as she darted out of the front door into the bitter cold  morning.

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Rhys Jones

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I'm coming" shouted Jayne before she stumbled out of the front door in to the bitterly cold morning.
Heledd phillips

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Jayne shouted "I'm coming" as she marched out of the front door into the frosty morning.

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Jayne shouted "I'm coming" as she marched out of the front door into the frosty morning.

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Charlie-Rose 😀

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" I'm coming " screeched Jayne before she sprinted

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" I'm coming " screeched Jayne before she sprinted

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out of the front door in to the chilly morning.

Rhydian Dazely

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"I'm coming" moaned Jayne as she sluggishly walked out of the front door into the freezing morning

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"I'm coming" moaned Jayne as she sluggishly walked out of the front door into the freezing morning

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Gwenan Brewer

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Shouted

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"I'm coming" moaned  Jayne before she stumbled out into the cold morning.

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"I'm coming" moaned  Jayne before she stumbled out into the cold morning.

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Tayla lee parry

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I'm coming moaned Jayne before she walked slowly out of the front door in the freezing cold morning.
Madi-Mae Chivers

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I'm coming protested Jayne before she disappeared out of the front door in the cold morning 

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I'm coming protested Jayne before she disappeared out of the front door in the cold morning 

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Harvey Lee May

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I'm coming yelled Jayne before she sprinted out of the front door in the cold morning. 

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I'm coming yelled Jayne before she sprinted out of the front door in the cold morning. 

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Rhodri Morgan

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"I'm coming", said Jayne before she ran out of the front door in to the cold morning.

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"I'm coming", said Jayne before she ran out of the front door in to the cold morning.