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I would  smoth out the cracks but the rest is good

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commenting on Aiden White, you need to smooth your pinch pot a little bit more. but the thing I like is how thick the bottom of the pinch pot.

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John Aiden White commenting on Lukas Treosti's 3rd attempt

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John Aiden White commenting on Lukas Treosti's 3rd attempt

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i like how you took the time to smooth it out and give it really good shape but i think that you could have smoothed it more.

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I love how it is evenly pinched and there are no cracks. I have  a suggestion that you could maybe make the hole a little bigger by pinching a little more. You did WONDERFUL!!!!!

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John Aiden White on Ethan Samuelson (Sam- yul- son) 1st attempt

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John Aiden White on Ethan Samuelson (Sam- yul- son) 1st attempt

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i like how the shape resembles a pot but you could try to smooth the top like you did on you third attempt which i have the same advice for: just smooth it out

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Your pot is very nice and i like how it's even on all sides. I really like that. But, I think you should make your pot taller and less wide. I really like your pot.

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...better pinch pot...

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Jada's 3rd attempt has very smooth walls and no cracks. She could make her walls thinner.

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commenting on Jackson fisher, at the very tip top of your pinch pot make it  more thicker ok. but the thing i like about it how thick the bottom of your pinch pot

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awsom no crack's but you could open up the top just a little.

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Makenzie Stalker Commenting on Jada's 3rd Attempt

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Your third attempt was great! I really like how your edges are smooth because it takes a while to go through every single crack there is.  A suggestion would be to make your hole a little bit bigger because it looks a little thick (I really don't know what to say cause your attempt was really well done) :3

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Izzy Fenech commenting on Connor Nelson's 1st attempt.

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Overall, for a first attempt it's great! Pretty smooth, not many cracks. Great shape. One thing you can work on would be to pinch a little less. It looked like some places look a little thinner than others. In the places that are thin just pinch lighter and the places that are thick pinch thinner. Overall great job :)

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Molly Stegall commenting on Preston LaBanca's first attempt.

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For a first attempt, it looks really good! However, the walls aren't thick around. Make sure you pinch the same all around. Also, the left side is curved out, so make sure not pinch that hard. Otherwise, good job!

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 (Kyler) commenting on Holt's third attempt

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I like how smooth the edges and the inside are very smooth because it makes it look very finished. My suggestion is make the pinch on the inside a little bit more circular. ( It was good aye.)

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Griffin commenting on Jazmin pickens 3rd attempt

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I like that I don't see any cracks,
next time even out the walls more.

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Kylie McWilliams commenting on Connor Nelson's 3rd attempt

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I like the shape of the pot and how the walls have an even thickness. One thing that you could have done is maybe smooth out the walls more

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Reece I think you could smooth out the edges some more and pinch less because your walls are a little bit thin, but so far it's good.I like that it's smooth on one of the sides.

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Rayonna Greenlee commenting on Jada Fifer's pinch pot I like how you have no cracks and it is a spherical shape. It is very smooth. I suggest that you do more pinching so the walls are thinner. It is awesome. You did Great!!!

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Rayonna Greenlee commenting on Jada Fifer's pinch pot I like how you have no cracks and it is a spherical shape. It is very smooth. I suggest that you do more pinching so the walls are thinner. It is awesome. You did Great!!!

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I like how you have no cracks and it is a spherical shape. It is very smooth. I suggest that you do more pinching so the walls are thinner. It is awesome. You did Great!!!

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Jackson Fisher on Sam Nicaud's 1st attempt 

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I really like how your pot is even on all sides. I really like your pot and everything about it. But, I think you should fill in some of your cracks on the rim to make the pot softer and more spherical. I really like your pot.

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Sahar Alshibli commenting on Jazz Pickens 3rd att.

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I love how smooth your rim was. I didn't see any cracks. If I were you I would have made your walls a little more even by pinching the left side a little bit more. :^)

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Griffin commenting on Nathan Harris 1st attempt

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I like the structure of the pot, next time smooth cracks.

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Makenzie Stalkers 1st attempt  Eliza Hammond

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Makenzie Stalkers 1st attempt  Eliza Hammond

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Your first attempt looks good but the rim is uneven so smooth it over with your thumb.

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Mackenzie's first attempt's walls are pretty thin. I think she could smooth out her cracks and bumps

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Makenzie Stalker Commenting On Abby's 1st Attempt

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I really like how you made your pinch pot spherical because usually in first attempts it's not that likely to make it spherical. A suggestion would be to smooth you cracks out with your thumb.
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Izzy  Fenech commenting on Preston Labanca's 3rd attempt.

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I really see a great improvement from the first attempt to now. You have a nice spherical shape. I also really like the amount of thickness. One thing that you could work on would be to wet your hands and smooth the rim of your pinch pot!

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it is really good but I would smooth out the cracks just a little

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Molly Stegall commenting on Jazz Pickens third attempt.

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Your pot looks really nice!  A pretty good shape, not that many cracks, and many other perfections. However, hole is not very round, so you can pinch in so it can be rounded out. The walls looks a little thin, so don't pinch as hard. Great Job! :)

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 (Kyler) commenting on Nathan's Uno attempt.

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I like the smooth outside of the pot, that really helps it look smooth and complete. I think you could make the top edges smoother and less cracked. ( it almost looks like a third attempt)

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Kylie McWilliams commenting on Rayonna's 1st attempt

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I like shape of the pot. I think that you could have pinched less at the top to make the sides more even.

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good round top but i wold smooth it out and make it shorter

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Everything looks great but I can see a couple of cracks so get some water on your fingers and smooth it out. Great Job :)

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Trevor Olandt commenting on John Aiden White's 3rd attempted.

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It looks spherical, but I really like how your hand covers half of it plus you had some thing in you teeth. Jokes aside I like it does not have many lumps.

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good walls and no crack i would round the hole on top

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Jada Fifer commeting on Connor's Nelsons 3rd att.

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I love your 3rd attempt. It looks awesome.I love how you have smooth edges and how it's a spherical shape.I can tell you pinched a lot and evenly.One thing I would suggest is that you have a wider hole.You can do that by pinching some more.

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Sahar Alshibli commenting on Makenzie Stalkers 1st att.

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I thought the bottom half of your pinch pot because it is pretty straight. If I were you I would've smoothed out the top rim of your pinch pot because it's a big lumpy and uneven. :)

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Satisfied! :3

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Camila Urbina commenting on Aiden Barkman 

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I like that is round. I think you should smooth the of your pot.

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Emery Hammer commenting  on Connor Nelson's 3rd Attempt 

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One word I would use to describe this is... perfect. The hole could be wider around but other wise, perfect. Everything is exactly symmetrical.

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Tripp Greer commenting on Jackson Fisher 1st attempt

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I like that the walls are even on the same sides, but they are too thin. You can fix that by not pinching that hard.

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Connor Nelson's commenting Sam's first attempt I like how you have a good shape with your 1st attempt I think you could of had a little thicker wall to fix this you will have to not pinch as hard.

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Connor Nelson's commenting Sam's first attempt I like how you have a good shape with your 1st attempt I think you could of had a little thicker wall to fix this you will have to not pinch as hard.

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Parker Stanley commenting on Preston LaBanca 3rd attempt 

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I like how the top of it is even also that the sides look even. One thing to fix the top side because it is a little thinner than the bottom.

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Camila Urbina commenting on Ethan Samuelson 

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I like the hight of the pot. I think you should pinch on the side on the top.

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Lukas Treosti commenting on Izzy Fenech's 1st

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I like how it is a cylinder, but i would smooth the sides out to make it look like a vase

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Reese Waltman  commenting on Izzy Fenech's third  attempt. I think you have a good round shape, but I think you could have pinched a little harder around the walls.

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Reese Waltman  commenting on Izzy Fenech's third  attempt. I think you have a good round shape, but I think you could have pinched a little harder around the walls.

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Teshauria Commenting on Jaylin story's 3rd attempt.

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Teshauria Commenting on Jaylin story's 3rd attempt.

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Jaylin, your outsides are great, but I could see from the outside that the wall thickness might be to thin, but everything else is great!

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Emery Hammer commenting on Trevor Olandt's 3rd Attempt

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Your walls are fairly even, which is good. It would be better if your edges folded more up/inward instead of out, unless it's a part of your design when you add your other features.

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elly jones commenting on reese waltman's third attempt

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i like how it has even walls at the top and how it resembles an actual pot. maybe next time smooth out your walls a little more. good job!

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Brinley Erdely commenting on Elly Jones 3rd attempt. 

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I love how smooth the walls are and the shape is just perfect! Great job!

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Kiera Blevins commenting on Kaelin Porter's first attempt

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Your pinch pot is almost the same thickness all the way around, and that's very good. If I were you, I would pinch a little less on the sides. And possibly pinch just a tiny bit harder on the bottom of the pot, just to make I evan. Overall, your pinch pot is very good, especially for a first attempt.

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Kaelin porter commenting on Kyler Misenheimer's first attempt. 

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i like that the walls and bottom are pretty smooth, and it has a good shape, but you could pinch on the corners a little more, and smooth out some cracks.

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Holt Moseley commeting on Jaelynn Story 

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Your pinch pot is round enough and it is symmetrical in sphere format and it is good for a mug or pot. If the walls aren't smooth pinch so it can be flatter and even more symmetrical

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Preston's LaBanca Commenting on Parker's 3rd attempt

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Every thing is good such as walls and the bottom, but I think your edges could be more even pinch a little more, and smooth it out with your thumb ;) overall it is good

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Lukas Treosti commenting on Eliza Hammond 1st

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I am kind of curious about the bottom, i would smooth it out with wet hands on the sides and smoosh the sides to make a base

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Sam Nicaud commenting on Tripp Greers 1st attempt.

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I like the roundness of your pot. What i would suggest about it that you pinch the same way all the way around your pot to make it even.

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Emery Hammer commenting on Brinley Erdely's 3rd Attempt

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Your pot structure is just about perfect! You did add your own design and personality to it which makes it unique. I can't find anything wrong with it, which is great! :D

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Teshauria Commenting on  Jada's first attempt.

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You pinch pot has some things that need to be fixed, but I think that you should make a bigger hole, but other than that I think that your outside's are really smooth and that is good.

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Connor Nelson commenting on Tripp's 3rd attempt I like how your walls are very even and nice. The top of your pot is a little uneven to fix this just turn it over and press down a little on the table.

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Connor Nelson commenting on Tripp's 3rd attempt I like how your walls are very even and nice. The top of your pot is a little uneven to fix this just turn it over and press down a little on the table.

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Tripp Greer commenting on Kaelin's 3rd attempt

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I like how there is no cracks. Next time I would not make the left side of the walls that thin by not pinching that hard.

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Sam Nicaud commenting on Jackson Fishers 1st attempt.

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It looks like from the inside the walls are pretty even from the looks of it, I like the roundness of the top but i think that you could pinch a little harder at the bottom.

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Preston LaBanca commenting on Parker Stanley 1st attempt

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I like that your walls are even. But the corners are to thick, so you should pinch harder on the sides. :)

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 Reese Waltman commenting on Jaelynn story's first attempt

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i think you have a nice round shape. but i also think you could have pinched a little less on the walls.

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kaelin porter commenting on Reese Waltman's 3rd attempt.

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i think your pinch pot is very good. it has a good round, smooth shape, , but i think you could make the walls a little more even

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Parker Stanley commenting on  Preston LaBanca 1st attempt

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The right wall was an okay thickness but the left was uneven a way to fix it is to have consistent pinching also not pinching really hard

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elly jones commenting on jaelynn story's 1st attempt

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i like how it looks like a pot and i can also tell you pinched in your first attempt near the top. next time maybe make your walls a little more even by pinching harder in the thicker spots and not as hard in the thin spots, but overall it was really good :)

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Brinley Erdely commenting on Emery Hammer

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I like some bumps on the pot because it makes it stand out and pretty. So, i think you should even out the edges. You could smooth them out with your thumb. Start with a ball then do the thumb thing and round the corners and walls.

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Lukas Treosti commenting on "Jazz" pickens

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I would recomends pinching harder on the right bottom corner and start with wet hands

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Kiera Blevins commenting on Sahar Alshibli 3rd Attempt

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Your pinch pot is a very evan thickness all the way around, and a good 1/8 in. thickness as well. To make your pot a perfect pinch pot, you could smooth the outside of it. You can see where you pinched the clay, especially the top.

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Your pot is good in the way to hold water or liquids, the flat part is looking sturdy enough, it looks good enough to use. If the walls are bumpy pinch it harder to make it smoother.

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WAY better than my 1st

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3rd attempt

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3rd attempt

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My 2nd was better

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attempt 3 :)

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Clay pot pt. 3

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3rd attempt