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Horror
Black and white, the sound (whispers) and the shot of the swings
The voices linked well with the title and the music was eerie also created sense of foreboding
I liked the fast forward bit at the end because it's atypical and don't often see it in horror sequences
I didn't like the death bit because it was a bit sudden and unclear as to why the character had died and how
It was a good structure with the therapy and then the strange things that happen in the characters mind. However some bits were unclear
I think the death part didn't fit with the rest of the sequence and the scenes walking through the school weren't needed
I'd change the death part and also make the narrative more clear
The first 2 shots were good and also good use of close ups to reveal emotion
I thought it was a short film because it was to long to be a trailer and also a full plot was established
Too long

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1. Horror
2. The black and white colours occasionally the repeating of words and the creepy sounds
3. The music was scary and built tension and it made me have goosebumps
4. I likes the overlapped of 2 camera scenes in corridor that was really good and the actors were really good and convincing and when he was dead on the floor then walking again because it showed that he was having hallucinations and maybe is mentally ill
5. Nothing I can think of really, it was really good
6. Good and I liked the repeating of words sometimes
7. Maybe all the different scenes because (if you're trying to make a horror sequence) there would be a couple of main places as I got a bit confused and overwhelmed about where he was
8. I would improve by getting the women to ask about his illness, like one quiet word or something that, if heard by some people, would give a sense of what's happing
9. I liked most of them but maybe an improvement on the scene on the football pitch because when zoomed in it was really blurry and I didn't like that
10. To me it felt like a Opening sequence because it told a lot and it lead me wanting more and an explanation to what happens next but it was too long to be the introduction
11. It was good but I did feel like it was a tad long and some of the shots were similar that maybe it didn't need so it felt a bit repetitive and could start to get bored

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1. Horror/psychological thriller
2. The fast, distorted editing and pace
3. The music built tension and suspense
4. The reveal at the end was entertaining
5. There were noticeable continuity errors like the body double under the umbrella was different
6. It was good, simple qnd effective
7. Everything fit, there were some shots which didn't really improve the narrative but didn't ruin it
8. Cut some of the shots that didn't help tell the story and replace them with shots that did
9. The focus pulls were good and the whole thing was well shot
10. At first I thought it was a trailer but at the end I thought it was more likely to be a short film as there is a major plot point revealed at the end
11. It is good but could've been longer as it was an engaging concept

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1. Horror

2. Music and the colour of scenes

3. music built up tension, helped you feel the anxiety the character was going through

4. the umbrella person. acted as a symbol for the voices.

5. the swings were a bit typical of a horror shot

6. good narrative, helped you think like the character

7.  didnt really get why the guy was dead, or why it was in the middle of the piece

8. how did he die and then back went back to school,  some explanation of this?

9. close ups were good! also the fading out of the umbrella but still being able to see it in the background.

10. a trailer, as it leaves more to be found out

11. good length, maybe abit shorter if intended as a trailer

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1. horror

2. the music, the guy with the injuries, the dark clothing

3. quite dark, makes you feel quite tense

4. the end bit where the guy is revealed under the umbrella

5. the black cuts in between some shots

6. i thought it was well put together and left on a good cliffhanger

7.I think the titles could've been made differently, maybe over the videos. Also the football/field shots did not make much sense

8. most of the scenes were similar, maybe change his actions or film inside more places

9. the zooming into the guys eye. The ending where the umbrella goes up. The fact the camera angle is constantly changing makes it interesting

10. opening sequence, as I can imagine the storyline continuing after the counselling

11. the length is good, its not too long that it drags on a bit but not too short

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1. Psychological Horror

2. The cuts between shots, the musical effect and the colour of visual

3.  It built up the mystery of the sequence and it really got you thinking about the anxiety of the character

4. The stand out part to me was when the character has 'the voices' behind him under the umbrella as this created suspense.

5. swings as cliche but also when he suddenly is on the floor with stuff around his mouth

6. It was good as it allowed the viewer to understand more about what the visuals were showing.

7. I think it flowed well

8. The part where he is suddenly on the ground may need adjusting

9. I liked the variety of angles and shots used, they are very good for this type of genre

10. I would say either short film or opening sequence as it has a storyline within itself but could also be added onto a much larger story

11. it is a good length, could potentially have been longer as there are some parts that stand out and are confusing.

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1. Horror/ Thriller
2. The music, inside thoughts voices, black and white background
3. The music was mysterious and this influenced the audience in thinking it was this type of genre
4. I enjoyed the fact that we were left on a bit of a cliffhanger
5. Too short, more aspects of the 'voices' could have been added
6. It was okay, again could've been a little more detailed
7. Why was he randomly dead?
8. Could have explained the reason he was dead, did he commit suicide? Was he murdered? How was he back at school?
9. Some good filming, kept up the suspense
10. I think it was a trailer, I don't think there was enough detail for a short film.. could argue it was an opening sequence, trailer would imply that my questions would be answered but a short film needs more detail, and opening sequence would mean for a detailed thriller
11. Too long for a trailer, too short for a short film, opening sequence would be there or there abouts

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1. Horror
2. The close ups. The music. The repetition of speech.
3. It is intense and symbolises the confusion and anxiety of the character. It makes you feel on edge and curious as to what will happen.
4. I liked the end bit where the characters experience was replayed quickly.
5. I didn't like the part with the swingset. It is quite cliché and didn't really built any suspense.
6. I thought it was important as it built to the suspense and evoked the thoughts of the character.
7. No.
8. Perhaps make the music build up throughout (get louder, more intense)
9. The close ups are important to create character empathy and also build suspense.
10. Perhaps and opening sequence because there are still questions at the end but it flows and doesn't appear like a trailer.
11. I thought it could have been shorter as the tension is hard to maintain through that amount of time. Perhaps it could have been shorter.

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Horror

2
The background music

3
The music would make the viewer assume something bad would happen.

4
I liked the repetition of the therapists voice at the end because it ties the beginning and the end together.

5
I didn't like the parts that just focused too much on the boys facial expressions.

6
I think the narratives were important because it helped the viewer understand what was happening.

7
All of the parts seemed to fit.

8
There could possibly be more narratives so it's keeps the viewer interested.

9
The camera shots were good and I don't see how they can be improved.

10
I think this is an opening sequence because you don't completely understand what's happening and why it's happening. So it seems like it's an opening sequence to make people want to watch the rest of the video.

11
The length of this was fine, however; it could be shortened because some of the scenes were repetitive.

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Horror/Thriller

2
The quick cuts between shots and the sound effects

3
The music was intense and created suspense throughout the video. It made me feel quite on edge and drawn into what was happening.

4
I liked the part where he is sitting on the log and the person is coming up behind them as it makes it very intense and draws the viewer in

5
I thought the beginning, as he was heading into the session, was a bit long and made it hard to be captured straight away.

6
I found the narrative added to the atmosphere, giving context, and made it more intense

7
The part where he is tapping his leg and then walks on the log is repeated and I think it should be of him doing another action, as it would show his state being worse, or doing the same but not using the same clip just to make it seem more like more natural repetitive behaviour

8
I would just make the beginning part shorter

9
I thought they were good, and I particularly liked the close up ones as I think they make it more intense

10
A trailer

11
I thought it was a bit long if it is a trailer as they are meant to capture their audience quickly and effectively, so if it is a trailer I would make it half the length

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Horror

2
The colours and choice of scenery used to create an atmosphere along with the variety of strange sounds.

3
The music made me feel intense and kept me anticipated to see what was going to happen next throughout the video.

4
I liked the part when it rewinded on the boys experience and showed his different emotions very clearly because it built up the tension of the video.

5
At times the acting could have been improved along with the camera stability.

6
The story line was very interesting, however, at times I did not understand what was going on during the video. I thought he had demons in his head.

7
I didn't understand why the swings were singing in the video.

8
I would change the part when the boy dies and make it clearer how he died.

9
I thought all the shots were very well laid out and had a good variety of shot angles in them. Very good overall!

10
I think it is an opening sequence as I feel as though it would later lead on to give the viewer more information on the boy and his experiences.

11
I think it was too long as I felt as though some shots were overly repeated and could do with less making it a shorter video time.