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i need more repetition in my painting and need more depth

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I could do a little more overlapping, although it is to late for that. I also need to finish with my water colors.

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I need to work on adding more depth.

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I need to just finish my artwork.

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I need to work on the depth.And do my focal point

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I just need to fix some things and i think my paper will be good

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I did well with my color scheme but I should work on my depth.

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I did well on planning and design, visual balance, movement, paper, and repetition. One thing I will work on is making my shading neater.

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Paper- I can use more news paper.

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I like the planning and design of your art work. You need to work on filling in all your white space, adding newspaper, and depth. You need more water color also.

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I need to sandpaper my work better so that there are no papers sticking up. My depth looks like crap.

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His color scheme is really unique despite using two colors his details are nice and his depth is strong

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Movement: it could be some more overlapping.
Craftsmanship; the lines could be somewhat smoother

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I love the color scheme.  The symbols in the drawing is very interesting.

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Repetition: I like the rhythm of your work which makes great movement.
Depth: I think that you added depth very well to your work. There are some places where more depth could be added though.

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His newspaper placement is nice and his depth is nice he uses a lot of bright colors

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What I can improve on tommorow is I can add more drawing to my artwork.

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I like how you used your newspaper . I think you should fill in your white space with more depth. Other then that good job.

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Movement: overlapping is a little more needed.
Craftsmanship: the edges are kinda not put down neatly.

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Planning and Design: I love how you manipulated your drawings to create symbolism. I don't see anything wrong.
Movement: The movement is great. All the shapes are overlapped creating a good guide for your eye.

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Not finished but looks nice

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Paper- The way you put your paper in your art is really interesting. The places you added it, made the art more symbolic. Your paper is also very balanced, and it brings focus to my eyes.
Repetition- I like your different patterns, it makes a good pattern and enhances the art a lot. Its also cool that you put newspaper in your patterns, to make it more interesting.

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You should add more water color at the top of the page to help balance the work better

You should add way more details around the focal point.

I really like the weathered look you used with the newspaper on the head

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I love the movement of the scissors at the bottom and the bottom. The use newspaper was good and neat.

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good details and color schemes,good overlapping

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I could see what your trying to do but it is not finished and there is no paint

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I like the flags in the middle how they overlap and create depth. I like the newspaper as fill in for paint.

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You could have added more drawing and focuses more on your color scheme as you painted the whole thing.

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I like how you add newspaper to your drawing and I also like the color also. The movement of the drawing is good also. I think you can improve on more pattern.

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Planning and design it lacks of creativity.
Color- a color has not been developed.

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Your artwork is amazing. I love the color, the background, & the way you did with the words. It's very outsatandig. The depth was achieved by shading behind most edges it match with the color schemes & all the edges are glued down neatly

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good craftsmanship, nice repetition and good work with the news paper

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Good job with the color and newspaper couldve been more overlapping

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very plain needs more color and newspaper

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Planning and Design: Several original drawings that show symbolism.

Paper: The newspaper was nicely glued down

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good overlapping ,and good color schemes. should try filling up the paper more

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Repetition- Your repetition looks really good, it  shows great symbolism. I like how you put the faces in three spots, and it guides my eyes. It looks really nice.
Paper- I liked way you put your newspaper, however you could add a little more to make it a little bit more interesting. Other than that, everything is pretty good.

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Good job with the colors , details and also the overlapping

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good color more details i think make the lines more bold 

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good color more details i think make the lines more bold 

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You could have used more drawings. You also could have used more depth. But you did really well with your color scheme.

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I like the color you add to your drawing. I think you can add more drawings and patterns to your drawing and some overlapping too. I like the patterns, I think that you can add more newspaper also to improve this drawing.

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I like how you did your background it's really neat & looks amazing need some colo on the face.

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You should add more repeating shapes and patters to add a rhythm

Also, You should add more newspaper to get a higher score in the paper criteria

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The visual balance is meets expectations because it wasn't easy for me to see what was going on behind the color. I do like the overlapping and the depth of the scissors was great.

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good depth and color schemes.good overlapping too

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There's no overlapping in your drawing, i see no type of shading on the edges.  Nice uses of newspaper.

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good details with the newspaper. Needs a little more depth

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Paper- I love how your paper fits with everything. Good color but a little bit more detail and it could be a 100.

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The back ground is really nice needs more color though. & on the face too but it looks pretty good.

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Your work is well done. There isn't much bad to say about it either. This artwork has completed most of the categories to high degree. This work will definitely receive an A.

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I like his neatness and coloring around the edges his newspaper fits well and he has many faces

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I like your color scheme and how you used your newspaper. I think you should fill in the rest of your white space with the orange water color you used.

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Depth - It's very little depth.
Planning and design - it lacks in creativity.

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Planning and Design: I think that the design is very nice and creates an interesting illustration. I can't tell what the story is though but I feel like there is one.
Repetition: There is good repetition. Your face is repeated and so are your scissors.

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good details good smooth lines good placement of the new paper

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Paper- There was a good amount of newspaper. But your paper looks a little random.

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You could have added more newspaper. You also could have used more depth in your drawing, But your did really well with your color scheme and rhythm.

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I like how you add newspaper to your drawing. I think that it will be good if you add more drawing to your artwork. I like the movement of your drawing it really makes and creates the eye to make rythm.

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good coloring and overlapping to make the artwork pop out

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You did a good job with the water coloring and the overlapping. I like how you put the newspaper in your hair.

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I really like your use of the repeating patterns, and your color scheme.

A way to improve the works movement would be to add more, smaller pieces to the right and left of the head

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Your artwork looks pretty interesting but it needs more color on the face & the background

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Color- I can see an apparent color scheme, however there are more than two hues. It also looks like you used crayons to color some of it, instead of water colors. However, it still looks nice, and your color does pop. Depth- I can tell that you did shade somewhat, but it kind of disrupts your other colors. Your face does have nice depth though.

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This artwork is great! The color and the newspaper goes very well together. The only thing that you should do is include more items overlapping to create movement and depth in your art. With that said though I feel your artwork would definitely receive a good grade.

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Planning and Design: Several original drawings that contain symbolism.

Paper: Newspaper was really balanced out in an interesting way

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Movement: you should work on adding a little bit more overlapping in your artwork to really bring it out.
Visual balance: The visual weight has not been evenly distributed , and could be worked on more.

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Repetition- meets expectations but doesn't look done
Color- also meets expectations

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Color- a clear color scheme has not been developed.
Craftsmanship - Edges are glued down somewhat neatly.

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More newspaper could have been added to cover up the stray gule that all over the place

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Her artwork is very well done. I like the color washes very much and I like the use of Newspaper coupled with the depth. I feel this paper should receive an A.

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Great job with the coloring but you could even had a little more overlapping.

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The way he flipped his newspaper over and made the picture from the bottom show was very nice.
He also added alot of movement with the overlaping.
If he wouldve finished with water color it wouldve looked alot better.

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Coloring is nice and designs and idea are unique nice display of color

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needs a little more depth but has a great detail with the news paper

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Colour: There is some colour but it is in a colouring book manner. Try putting random spurts of water colour on your paper.
Paper: There is enough paper on the art. I like how you used the paper to fill in your shirt.

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good color schemes and overlapping, did a slight good jub with the depth

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Movement - all shapes have been arranged and over lapped. Love the color artwork looks really amazing & the background is really interesting. But you should add some color on the beard or put a newspaper on it

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Color: The artwork shows good watercoloring

Craftsmanship: Most egdes are glued down. But the sharpie lines aren't neat

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Paper- newspaper was added and also was balanced. Color- the color choice was good but could improve on it

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Planning and Design: There are original drawings and I see the symbol.
Craftsmanship: The newspaper edges are sticking up.

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Craftsmanship- all edges are smooth
Movement- meets expectations the lines and objects are being overlapped by the head

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Your planning and design is great. You traced everything well and your objects are evenly placed throughout the picture. Your color, shading, and depth is good also.  The only thing I suggested is making your shading more neater. Great job.

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Paper- Newspaper application is unbalanced.
Depth - there is a little depth in this artwork.

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I think he did fine in each of the areas except, Depth and Movement. He didn't really put too many things to overlap another. Other than this though I feel his color washes were fine and that his artwork was very unique and cool. Also he didn't use Newspaper.

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You did really well with color and depth. I like the color scheme you used along with your rhythm. You could have worked on adding more original drawings along with craftsmanship with making sure the newspapers glued down.

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I like the overlapping of the two faces, it really leads the eye to another drawing. My opinion is you can add more color to your drawing. There is good visual balance in this drawing also. I think it will be great if you add some shading to this drawing to improve depth in your drawing.

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Planning and Design- Your flags show really good symbolism, and your art is very interesting.  Your creativity is very apparent, and it looks really nice.
Color- I cant really seem a color scheme, the only color I see is on the flags. Maybe you could add some color to the faces, using a couple of hues.

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You did well on using several different pieces to make a new work.

The visual balance is a little offset to the left. You could imorove this by adding some more color or shading in the top right corner

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There is no overlapping in this artwork. There is some color to the artwork but I think they could add more movement, depth and rythm to this artwork.

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Like jahari said it has good thicc sharpie lines. Good depth

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planing and design:I like the ideas of the artwork

movement: The colo

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I feel that I've done well in most of the categories but my depth should be more emphasized. I included all that I was supposed to and I feel that most of my work goes together in unity. I should be able to emphasize my depth a little bit more tomorrow in order to receive a good grade.

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1. Good thicc sharpie lines
2. Light colors

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There is a little bit of overlapping .

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I see no depth in the artwork. and there's no movement in the artwork.