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THE GALAXY.

THIS IS THE MORE INTERESTING THAN I KNOW THAT UNTIL NOW , THE SCIENTIFIC MORE INTELLIGENT IS NOT ABLE TO UNDERSTAND ALL OF THE MAGNITUDE OF YOUR SPLENDOR. ALL PEOPLE ARE AMAZED EVERY TIME TO GET TO SHOW A CONFERENCE OF THIS TOPIC. IN REALITY ALL PEOPLE ARE INTERESTING MORE ON THIS TOPIC.

WE CAN LEARN MORE THIS TOPIC IF WE STUDY MORE ON THIS TOPIC.

hORACIO i WILL ASSIGN A 8 FOR THE EFFORT, BUT THIS IS NOT A STORY....

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THE GALAXY.

THIS IS THE MORE INTERESTING THAT I KNO

Galaxy.

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The Sirens

It is one of the stories most often repeated by generations of parents to their children; a legendary story about one of the most fascinating creatures of mythology common to almost all existing cultures. People from all places and continents, companies never interacted with each other, towns and unconnected contacts, describe the same being half woman half fish: the sirens.

NANCY 8 FOR THE EFFORT , BUT IS NOT A STORY.

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MAGIC LAKE

Once upon a time a girl named Geydi who lived on a ranch was poor and with many problems one day afternoon left home, road aimlessly along the way a gemstone with a dilemma said he found: "I'm lost please help me ". Geydi went to the place where she indicated and found a beautiful lake where he belonged stone lake came a very high tide by saying thank you for bringing the best of my life so I will reward you with a desire to just ask and I will abide geydy much happiness and asked to go home everything was happy.

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In Mapimi durango thousand years ago there were Indians that mediate 4 meters and in 1420 there was a meteor shower and went extinct almost every kind only an Indian and saved over the years died and turned into stone and became a hill Cerro de la india. . .

grade 8 check trandlations

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In a town of Durango in 1820 was invaded by zombies because of a picket Sancudo Asia a child in school and began to bite their mates and to avoid ending infect the people sent the indestructible to eliminate the zombies and terminate the virus

grade 8 good effort but check translation.

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Roger was a street dog was dirty and hungry, going through my house and fed him until he decided to adopt it, it was in September 2013. Now living with my family, at first it was difficult to adapt to the house, but now is a great loving dog and very polite, he has managed to win the affection.

GRADE 8

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Urban legend has it that in the 70s there was a girl of 14 who was in end-stage oral cancer. Doctors had already started all the hopes of the family in relation to the care of the child, so the child's mother, Ikaka Shimizu, desperate, went to all churches and cults, but getting no result started in the occult Satanism and to the end, make a pact with the devil. Provided the girl the devil to heal his daughter, he made ​​a promise to make a brand that was famous throughout the world, the Devil fulfilled his part and mother too. He created Hello Kitty.

THIS IS NOT A ORIGINAL STO

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This one is the history of a small girl who to the age of
six years old lost his father in a car accident on having returned from his
work, she and his mother suffered very much the loss of his dear being. They
had financial problems so she and his mother asking for help to his grandfather, she and
his mother went to be lived by his grandfather and both recovered this wound
little by little.

GRADE 9

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The dream of Ernesto "Che" Guevara was to create worldwide war for his country could well be the king of the world, but in his time could not defeat Mexico since our country was much bigger arms.

At the end gave up and could never fulfill his dream of creating the third world war
GRADE 9

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Once upon a see a boy named goku this man was sent to earth to save the world was one of the best warriors.

Defeated many opponents as none was as strong as it was only his strength, until one day one with the same force Oppose kill him and his history as the greatest warrior was over.

OK

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This was a young man who had a dream to be the best ninja in the world to become a Hokage like his father as the years passed he was improving their combat skills one day his father decided to put it approves, saying that if he could win this fight will inherit the throne, that a father and son battle would turn the crowd to watch the game finished shocked to see the little ninja beat powerful hokage ever since the young ninja was respected by all nations, and his father was so proud that his heir was his son who's adored and admired.

GRADE 8 ORIGINAL??

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This was the story of a man named Luis who had a

and the enormous fortune to the person who would inherit him laugh, thousands of people tried and were unsuccessful, one day, a humble young man approached serious and started with a lousy joke that Mr. Luis apparently liked it so much who described it as a lousy way to tell as he had never known such a clumsy person to tell a joke well, and once I finish laughing he named the boy as his heir. ORIGINAL???

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Long ago in a distant and lonely house lived a young man who was lonely because he had no friends or family

No one ever knew the causes of this already that he did not like to talk

Until one day he met a beautiful lady with the market and had a nice family

grade 8

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Once there was a little girl named Carla, who lived with their grandparents

She loved the animals, lived on a farm since i was a little girl, because his parents were in town to look for a better job

She had sheep, cows, dogs, cats, and ducks but in particular, had a spider wing which she wanted to much could speak to her, since she wrote words with their cobwebs and i could tell you wing girl what she wanted or thought.

grade 8 check grammar and translation

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Sonic

Sonic is a figure of the first games of SEGA, was a hedgehog look a winner, I was young and
aggressive with running shoes that allowed him to reach supersonic speeds. The game consists
of 6 completely different worlds. Sega's most ambitious project was born in 1991,

THIS IS NOT A STORY.... AND THE STORY HAS TO BE ORIGINAL ( INVENTED BY YOU) ...

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It was one day, a girl decided to be going to look for his father since the father, got lost in a mountain was in search of his father, entry and entry until he found a tool that the girl was loading always was surprised since she was thinking that it was alive followed the way and returned to find other things that his dad was using, followed even in the top of the montaña hayo his dad without life, she decided to remain with his father and some days later he died for the intense cold that it was doing in the mountain

grade 8 rolando check correct translation..... may 24,2014

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Vote for Elisa, Evelin and Caricsa

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An silent night in the old house kakkarotto
youngest son was going through the deepest sleep, wakes
a blow, falls to the ground, quickly stands up, turns
his head and looks at his father
with gun in hand
runs scared bed
.. It stops your
body is shattered by bullets

I didn't understand who killed whom? did the father kill the son, or to other person???

grade 8

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WAS YOUNGONES WERE LOOKING FOR A TREASURE AT MIDNIGHT IN A VERY ESPELUSNATE AS IS A
CEMETERY WHEN THEY ARE BEGINNING TO DIG A WOMAN APPEARS WHITE WITH A SCARY
PICTURE HANGING ON ONE SIDE OF THE FORCES WHICH ELLOS.LO RUN AND LEAVE THE
PLACE WITHOUT GETTING ANY PROFIT.

grade 8 check translation

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The story begins when a boy named Atrello when he fled from there and some guys found a book lying on the desk of the library manager called "Endless Story". Steal the book and hides in his school to read the book. He began to read a kingdom called Fantasy is where travel and discover important things, meet people, animals and great scenery that had not imagined, entrusted to sabe the world from an empress and in the course of his journey accompanied by his horse, but his horse
later dies and he too was about to die but saved with a dragon and the traveling high in the sky travesando mountains and save the world at the end of the empress and granted 3 wishes and again returns to his house in order, the end.

grade 8 original story ( did you change something??? )

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HEIDI IS ALITTLE GIRL WAS THE CARE OF YOUR TIA DETE, SHE DECIDED TO BRING A LITTLE
VILLAGE WHERE YOU LIVE YOUR GRANDFATHER Dorfi where he met a boy named PEDRO I
pastored GOATS TO VILLAGERS WEDDING WHEN GROWING BUT DIE AFTER A FEW MONTHS AND
SHE IS SINGLE

grade 8 nice effort!

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Will talk about the history of Mapimí Durang. After founding Cuencamé Agustín de Espinoza, a Jesuit priest and the captain Anton Zapata moved to Mapimí or Mapemé, saying the Indians, coming July 1598, and the 25th formal foundation was made at the foot of Bufa hill, calling Mapimí Santiago.

ruben this is not a story,,, and is not original ... you have to write 2 minisagas

for next class ...

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In the Mexican Republic for a few good war and bad for
many lives, as occurred in this war against ignorance, Peña Nieto is against
this war because he is the leader of the ignorant and therefore the main target
ultimately fired
EPN of gurp of ignorance for excess
ignorant.

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In the Mexican Republic for a few good war and bad for
many lives, as occurred in this war against ignorance, Peña Nieto is against
this war because he is the leader of the ignorant and therefore the main target
ultimately fired
EPN of gurp of ignorance for excess
ignorant.

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grade 8

jose juan

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There once was a girl who came to an orphanage because he was without parents, the girl in the orphanage was very happy because there had been great friends, one day she received news that her sad but at the same time glad a new family adopted her. End ....

grade 8

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CARICSA AYALA RAMOS

STRESS

STRESS IS A SERIOUS PROBLEM THAT TODAY IT ATTACKS MANY PEOPLE THIS DISEASE HAS BEEN CLASSIFIED IN DIFFERENT TYPES DEPENDING ON THE SYMPTOMS, IS A VERY POPULAR DISEASE IN PEOPLE OF ALL AGES, IT IS PROVEN THAT EVEN THE ANIMALS CAN SUFFER FROM THIS DISEASE,THE STRESS BY SMALL AS IT MAY SEEM, CAN CAUSE SERIOUS PROBLEMS IN THE FAMILY, WORK, SCHOOL AND CAN AFFECT OUR WHOLE ENVIRONMEN

Caricsa this is not a proper story... do it again pleas and has to be in your own words.

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Once upon a time there was a guy named Tommy Vercetti, this guy used to live in Rome but now he lives in Vice City. He is the owner of a big cocaine laboratory and its much better than the colombians.

One day he was using a rifle to kill pedestrians and suddenly a helicopter fell down on him, and that was the end of the great Tommy.

grade 10 excellent writing.

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one day I went to a magical town where I met magical and special places where the walls were painted different colors that was very nice and had a loving culture meals and values ​​were different when I return the people would not really liked and wanted to return to go

grade 8 ,,, not exactly a story but ok....

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Vote por Karen Rios

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In 1932 Batman and Robin met Vicente Fox which was fine because it was idiot child of another friend whose name fool Peña Nieto but the child fell off so I stay well ... They went to Iroshima and Nagasaki in the day that dropped a nuclear bomb and all died.

grade 8 not very clear, good effort.

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the 30th of May at a party I met a beautiful woman in blue dress with sky-colored eyes cafes clear what but she had to leave early and just stay with the smell of perfume that left me soaked in her step on me shirt tel him talk but I was wrong and never heard from her

grade 8 check grammar.

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CARICSA AYALA RAMOS

THE TECHNOLOGY IS VERY IMPORTANT TODAY .THE DAY-TO-DAY WE USE AND WE ARE INCREASINGLY DEPENDENT ON TECHNOLOGY, BEFORE PEOPLE COULD LIVE IF THE TECHNOLOGY BUT LIFE WAS MUCH LES CONFORTABLE.TODAY WE USE MANY DIFFERENT DEVICES THAT MAKE OUR LIVES EASY.

BUT THE TECHNOLOGY HAS MANY ADVANTAGES BECAUSE WE CAN COMMUNICATE MORE EASY , TRASPORTARNOS FROM ONE PLACE TO ANOTHER FASTE.

MANY PEOPLE THINK TO BE SO DEPENDENT ON TECHNOLOGY IS BAD BECAUSE WE WILL BE FOOLS.

not a story caricsa....

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THE SKIN I LIVE IN ( PEDRO ALMODOVAR )  ( LIBRO NOVELA " TARANTULA "  )

IN THE LIFE OF A SURGER RICHARD LAFARGUE ARE EXISTY TWO WOMEN VIVIANE AND EVE.
YOU DAUGHTER SUFFERS EARLY IN MANICOMIIO,
THE SECOND IS A SENSUAL
WOMAN YOU ADICCTION ARE MEN , PLACE
NEAR A YOUNG THIEF
AND KILLER INSIDE TO BOTH WOMEN AND RICHARD BY REVENGE AND KILLED THIEF .

grade 8 need to write more clearly...

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Once upon a time a boy that had for objetive finish the english homework as fast as posible in order to attend anothers. The homework was about of writing a tale or story *something that he ignored*, so for when he had finished,  he wrote it wrong and delievered his work. Then for his misfortune the teacher doesn't (didn't give) gave him a calification (grade) and told him that he have (had) to do it again and good (WELL) .  Sadly and very reluctantly he wrote a creative tale. Finally the teacher acept the work and gave him a 10 in calification :D

grade 9 well written and very original , but if the student had read the instructions would know that the minisaga is a STORY and would prevent the misfortune. and he only got a 9 for grammar errors..... sorry!

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Iori, half human half zombie.

It tells of a person who was infected with a fatal virus which infected fault and was giving supernatural force.
The virus went out of control infecting humanity but Iori knew that virus control and opted to protect humanity that are not yet infected.
Achievement protect humanity but being the last infected this Iori disappeared and never was heard of him.
grade 9

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In a place where exotic animals live, there are only 4 species that are endangered, fighting every day to try to save himself and his descendants to have memory that once existed and tried to do good for no fight between humans and them.

8 not a proper story, but is well written...

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the history most amaizing is  THE LORD OF THE RING , This story is based on an impressive world where a ring governs,  " One Ring to rule them all. One Ring to find them. One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness " bind them this motto is the principal legend in the ring ...

but what happened? what is the story??? grade 8 because you wrote 2...

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I like pirates, voting Escamilla

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good paragraph luffi

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Voto por Kyra

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Harry Potter became a very powerful wizard who is hated by everyone, Harry killed his parents that blame them for being born magician and he beat many more magicians at the end their fate change his magic was reversed against and died.
grade 9 good effort!

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One day some kids were walking
through a forest when they found a magic mirror,  told them that he would grant two wishes, the
children do not believed what had happened and decided to take her with her
parents, but the magic mirror was gone and also their two wishes.

nice work Karen grade 9

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There was a well known designer and she had a daughter of 14 years and a long time she was diagnosed with cancer of the mouth ago and the family and had no hope mom made ​​a pact with the devil and then the devil heal the child and mom kept his promise.
what was the promise? sorry Kyra but is not an original story,,,, grade 8

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One day a
ripe apple looked down and saw some cow dung right under her tree. “I don’t
want to fall on you”, she said to the dung, “You are repulsive!” Finally, she
fell next to it, but was swallowed by the cow. “See you soon!” the dung said
mischievously.
sorry jose gerardo tis is a copy paste, need to write 2 original minisagas...... NEXT WEEK IN THE LAB...

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A day of not many years ago it was witnessed a mass of Pope John Paul II done was attended by thousands of pilgrims, at the end of the mass is approached by a couple of people with the pontificate to ask for the health of the two because both individuals were not a curable disease because the only option that they decided was that the pontificate the cure and so it was by their gifts that he had the achievement cure and save them from a death a short time.

GOOD EFFORT americo 8 ( more than 50 words and some grammar mistakes)

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In June 1972, a woman  appeared at the Cedar Senai hospital in nothing but a white dress covered in blood.It was something like a dummy, but he had the skill and fluidity of a normal human being. His face was as flawless as dummies, no eyebrows or makeup.she had a tight pussy between his teeth, his jaw clenched in such a strong way to little kitten to the point where no teeth could be seen, the blood was blasting out over her dress on the floor

elisa copy- paste is not accepted you have to write 2 original minisagas nest week in the laboratory

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I've been there and agree to all you wrote. Delicious "Slow Food".

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MAIDEN WITH EYES OF BLUE

In a faraway kingdom, there was a beautiful maiden in a protected sheltered by a White Dragon, which was raised by his father the king of the shadows so that the prophecy is not fulfilled and the tower dominate the world.
What is not told his father is the maid with her ​​beautiful face and blue eyes like the dragon, win the hearts of the beast, the girl was released from the tower using the dragon and defeat his own father to goodness and light dominate the world forever.

great work, Roberto 9 ( more than 50 words)

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I Damian vote for chela

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MACHINE VAPOR

In times past people used to travel much steam, because it was the only means of transport was
faster. Most of the people traveling in, the bagones were large, very little paint and a lot of noise and
a huge force that had, that today occupies only for charging and not for travel.

SORRY ANGEL IS NOT A STORY , you hve to write an original story next week in the lab

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the magic towns are very bonbitos their cultures

Magic Towns is a program developed by the Ministry of Tourism (Tourism Ministry)

with various government agencies, and recognizes those who inhabit these cities and the work they have developed to protect and store your wealth cultural.1 program was created in the year 2001.[

this is not a story....you copied the information you have to write 2 original minisagas next week in the lab

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Gerard Lampard was a store robber. One day he was arrested
by the police for a clothing store robbery he had committed the month before,
after twelve years Gerard was released from jail. Turned out that Gerard was innocent
for that robbery, the next day, he committed suicide.

End.

PD: Voto por Kida

NICE WORK mAURICIO , ALMOST 50 ! GRADE 10

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JUSTICE AND HUMANITY

"I'm fighting for you Tuah, for justice and to topple the dictatorship," Jebat claimed.

"Let's salute the King for his immunity," Tuah replied.

"I will never bow to the dictatorship, I will die for it.

Tuah and Jebat are still fighting each other. One for the King and one for justice.

COPY PASTE OSCAR.... SORRY YOU HAVE TO WRITE 2 ORIGINAL MINISAGAS NEXT WEEK IN THE LAB

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A lot of time ago in a forest  of the Carib an old man was living and one day that went out on having walked to the forest I look at the sky and it saw that I keep silent about a light in the forest the old man was to be that it was this light and surprise one found a pretty child who was turning into monkey into the nights on having looked at the full moon.

GOOD EFFORT 8 ( MORE THAN 50 WORDS AND GRAMMAR ERRORS9

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DASSADD

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AGAINST IGNORANCE - AGAINST PEÑA NIETO BY JJ.CASTRO@LIVE.COM.MX

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AGAINST IGNORANCE - AGAINST PEÑA NIETO BY JJ.CASTRO@LIVE.COM.MX

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In the Mexican Republic for a few good war and bad for many lives, as occurred in this war against ignorance, Peña Nieto is against this war because he is the leader of the ignorant and therefore the main target.

NOT A STORY

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A nice slow restaurant in wich you can relax with their reggae, alternative rock music, etc. and eat delicius dishes. But the biggest atractive is the facade and the interior because you can see innumerable peace and love pharses in the walls and you can post something too if you find a space blank. I recommend it to cope with stress.

SORRY aNGEL, THIS IS NOT A STORY IT IS A DESCRIPTION, YOU NEED TO WRITE ONE ORIGINAL STORY, it can be something that happened in this restaurant, using your memories or your imagination.... please do it again next week in the laboratory

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voto x Antonio Cruz Posada

Once upon a time on a farm some white Smurfs that lived frightened by
a farmer who wanted to catch them because the magic of the Smurfs helped to
milk the cows he
had a dog helping you unfortunately one day catch
all the smurfs
dissected, and gave
lots of milk cows.

good effort 9....

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LUFFI  WAS A YOUNG BOY, WHO WAS ABANDONED BY HIS
PARENTS. HE EATS THE DEVIL FRUIT FOR GETS ELASTIC POWERS. THEN, FROM HIS
CHILDHOOD HE HAS A DREAM OF BECOME THE KING OF PIRAT,S. FINDING THE TREASURE OF
ONE PEACE AND FINALLY HE GET IT FIGTHING WHIT HONOR AND RESPECT.

grade 9 good writing and good work using 50 words but you need to change something from the original story

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THE BIG BATTLE BEST THAT 300

this is one big history a little girl who was returning home from her grandmother end was attkaed for the Wolf It was one battle incredible, best that 300  but out winning and arrive at your destination whit your grandmother, happy and content and  were given a big hug end.

Good effort Antonio , grammar mistakes not very clear... grade 8

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A big lion is growling. I have to stay here quietly. I am sweating a lot. It is just a few metres, but I feel like this moment will last forever. Finally the school bell rang. I closed my books, packed my bag and quickly went to the restaurant.
copy aste not allowed. you have to write 2 original minisagas next week in the lab...

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alvaro obregon cal y mayor

This story is a corridor of cars that is in a prison and has to run and kill other corridors in order to survive and continue to fight for their freedom,at the end escapes by exploiting a wall of the prison and escaped together with more defendants

grade 8 ( not very clear and grammar mistakes)

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ROMANCE CAME... IN A CHURCH

They met at Fisrt Baptist Church in Monterrey, México.

He already knew she was going to be there, but she didn't know he will.

He really look forward to get know her.

But for that first time they met, he only said "Bye Betty, hopefully I'll see you again soon"

great work 10 .

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Damian Guevara

At the beginning of time,

the caos and the pace was in war,

the pace was wonderful but she can not defend the word because the caos was powerful

then the pure souls was one with the pace and together they made the world birth as we know it now

great work 10

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In this imagen we can see a woman with other person

This woman got a spirit, but this spirit was devil.

The people town says what is the spirit the demon.

One day the family command to bring the priest, from bless the woman.

The woman follow identical to all

Great work Graciela. Grade 9 some grammar mistakes ... instead of follow continued .... and some parts are unclear.....
check this

People said that a woman had an evil spirit inside. She was mean, selfish and liked to cause pain and suffering to everybody. She enjoyed hurting and causing problems.Her family called the priest to exorcise her, but it didn´t work. She is still evil and continues hurting people.

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SAMPLE MINI-SAGA           TEACHER MAYELA   

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SAMPLE MINI-SAGA           TEACHER MAYELA   

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The girl said she was going to come back.

The boy promised to wait.

He sat on the dock and waited.

One day while he was waiting he noticed another girl sitting and looked out to sea.

"Are you waiting too?" he asked.

"Not anymore", she said.

They both smiled.

the previous example was not written by me , I took it from a website .

but the next is mine:

It was always the same : problems,  happiness,  living  in a circle.  " I have lived this before" she thought.  But once she heard a little voice inside  that told her " get up , start living !" , and she decided to change;  now  she doesn't live in black and white anymore , and she is  happy.

YOU CAN USE A PICTURE OR PAINTING FROM: www.tate.org.uk, www.louvre.fr www.moma.org

( CLICK THE LINK TO COLLECTIONS)

also you can check this website for more examples or ideas... http://sparrowsarewise.blogspot.mx/2009/10/writing-mini-sagas.html