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i can improve my blog post by including more creditable sources and quotes. also i can improve my grammar

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I can improve my blog post by keeping it on the same topic and keeping it short but sweet. Also detailed at the same time.

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i can find more information from different sources

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I can improve my blogpost by connecting my topic and research to my post.

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I can improve my blog by adding more details and being more discriptive in my examples

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I can improve my blog post by adding good and accurate details and making my sentences better.

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I can improve my blog post by picking something that i can write about and being sure my sources are reliable

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I can improve my blog by adding more support or personal experiences.

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I can improve my blog post by using stronger evidence, not getting too personal when I add a personal experience to my blog, and write better introductions.

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I can improve the quality of my blog by rereading it and having a peer review my post.

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I can improve my blog post by improving on the introduction to my topic.

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I can improve my blog post by writing better, more thorough sentences, especially with my introduction paragraph.

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I could be more professional with my writing and have more people check my work before i officially post it.

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I can improve the quality of my blog by doing more research and making sure to cite my sources.

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I can improve my blog post by having more resources to my subject. I use a few websites and other blogs, but I don't include much more than that.

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I can improve my blog post by finding more evidence or doing more research on the topic

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I can improve the quality of my blog post by citing my sources and using correct vocabulary

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I can improve my blog post by writing better introduction and conclusion paragraphs. By making my intro really strong and interesting, and making my conclusion just sum up everything.

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I can improve the quality of my blog post by using quality sources, research, and evidence to explain my genius hour topic.

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I can improve my blog post by making my introduction and closing better. Instead of just ending it.

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I can improve the quality of my blog post by explaining my information better.

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I can improve my blog post by making sure my source is credible and by using more evidence.

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I can make my blog post better by finding sources that better support my topic.

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I can improve my blog post by doing better research and expanding my vocabulary yet still showing a strong understanding for my topic.

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I can improve my blog by organizing my thoughts before I write and using information from the my sources.

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I can improve my blog post by citing all my research and making sure that i'm using credible websites to get my information

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I can improve the quality of my blog post by citing my sources and adding more interesting facts.

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I can improve by remembering to cite my sources and to use strong evidence. Not only that but, to not to put too much information on one post. Therefore, I will something to discuss in the next post.

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I can improve my blog post by dividing it into paragraphs and overall make it more interesting.

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i can make my blog posts better by citing my sources, and taking my time and finding good facts.

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I can improve the quality of my blog post by using multiple resources and expanding my vocabulary.

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I can improve the quality of my blog post by going more into detail about why I chose to write about the topic I picked, showing why I am passionate about it.

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I can make sure my grammar is correct and give important details that support my topic.

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I can improve the quality of my blog post by adding details and give background information.

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Stick to the topic

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I can make my blog post better by making sure i stay on topic and include details related to my topic.

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I can improve my blog post by using multiple sources.

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I can make my blog post better by keeping the focus on what I am talking about and not get off topic.

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I can improve the quality of my blog by including more evidence from my research and by going into greater detail about my topic.

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I can improve my blog post by remembering to cite my sources. Also, doing more research on the topic.

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To improve my blog post by having more support, citing my research correctly and make sure it is credible

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I can improve my blog post by including more information and evidence. Also, I can make sure my cites are credible so people who think my blog is interesting can get more info off the website thats 100% true

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I can improve my blog post by explaining more. Some of the equine vocabulary isn't familiar for everyone so I could do a better job explaining myself.

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I can improve the qu

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I could do more research on my topic. Also, I can have someone look over it before I publish it.

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I can improve my blog post by making sure i stay on topic and include interesting facts.

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To improve my blog i could organize it better and site my sources.

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I can improve the quality of my blog post by using stronger sources and better evidence.

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I can improve my blog post by making it appealing to the audience (pathos) and using others experiences to make it more interesting.

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i can add more information and actually do my work.

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I can improve my blog by finding more valuable evidence supporting my topic.

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I can create a post in which is more interesting to read and has an ability to pull people in.

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In order to improve the quality of my blog I must research more information while keeping my sources listed and organized .

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I can improve the quality of my blog post by citing my sources, as well as adding more information, for example my last blog posts I did not know a lot of information or did a lot of research about that topic. This time i'm doing research and going to cite my sources. I'm also going to organize it better.

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I can improve my blog by giving more information and evidence and making sure my sources are credible.

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i can improve my blog post by citing evidence to how i knew what i know which allows viewers to verify that i know what im talking about.

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i can improve my blog by citing my sources, using stronger vocabs words and getting strong information

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By making sure our sources are reliable.

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I can improve my blog post  by keeping my focus on one subject at a time and giving more examples/ sources.

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I can improve the quality of my blog post by citing my resources and adding a little more details to explain my reasoning.

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I can use better grammar and make sure I have credible sources.

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By making sure i have reliable sources

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i can improve my blog by adding more details, and also doing more research.

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I can add more detail and more information. I can also cite my sources . I also need to check my draft to make sure everything is correct

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I can improve the quality of my blog by citing my sources correctly and making sure my websites that i get information from are credible.

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To improve the quality of my blog is to use more detail, sight my sources, and stay focused.

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Use more info and bring in more interesting facts on it. to help people understand better on what is going on in my blog post with what i said.

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To improve the quality of my blog I need to stay focused.

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I can add a lot more detail to it. Such as more facts and other research I have concluded. I might also need to check my draft before I do post it.

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Getting more research for my topic .

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stick to the topic

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add more words ;0

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I can improve my spelling and make sure to add more details to my post

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I can improve my blog post  by keeping my focus and using important sources

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check the date and source info.

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Remember to cite my sources and get more research.

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By adding good details and by citing my sources.

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I can improve my blog posts by researching more information about the topic and to remember to cite my sources.

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I can improve my spelling and grammar also a little more detail.

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I can improve the quality of my blog by using legit cites.

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Use better wording and grammar. Make sure all information is credible. Always cite sources.

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Remember to cite your source and use information that goes along with the topic you chose.

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Using reliable sources including .gov or org, and researching on the aurthor of the post to make sure there a reliable source

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I can improve my blog posts by keeping my focus and using more than one source.