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sania aslam

1. Is there a citation in the text? yes
2. Has the writer successfully summarised/paraphrased the original? yes
3. Has the writer summarised/paraphrased ALL of the ideas from the original?yes
4. Has the writer extended the ideas from the writer? no just explain in short form
5. Has the writer presented a topic and summary sentence? tes

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1. There is no citation.
2. no.
3. no.
4.yes
5.yes
6. paraphrasing

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Is there a citation in the text?
Ans:yes

2. Has the writer successfully summarised/paraphrased the original?
Ans:little bit

3. Has the writer summarised/paraphrased ALL of the ideas from the original?
Ans:No

4. Has the writer extended the ideas from the writer?
Ans:yes

5. Has the writer presented a topic and summary sentence?
Ans:No

6. How does this writing compare to yours?
Ans:key point

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1. Is there a citation in the text?
ans: YES
2. Has the writer successfully summarised/paraphrased the original?
ans: YES
3. Has the writer summarised/paraphrased ALL of the ideas from the original?
ans: YES
4. Has the writer extended the ideas from the writer?
ans:NO
5. Has the writer presented a topic and summary sentence?
ans: YES
6. How does this writing compare to yours?
ans: Paterson (2018) indicates the benefits of driverless taxis. This would significantly drive down the costs of hiring these cars as there are no driver expenses

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1. Is there a citation in the text? Ans; Yes
2. Has the writer successfully summarised
/paraphrased the original? Ans -Little bit.
3. Has the writer summarised/paraphrased ALL of the ideas from the original?Ans  - NO
4. Has the writer extended the ideas from the writer? Ans-Yes
5. Has the writer presented a topic and summary sentence? Ans -NO
6. How does this writing compare to yours? Ans -Key point.

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2. Has the writer successfully summarised/paraphrased the original? yes
3. Has the writer summarised/paraphrased ALL of the ideas from the original?yes 
4. Has the writer extended the ideas from the writer? Yes
5. Has the writer presented a 

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MD Aminul Islam Khan
1. Is there a citation in the text? yes
2. Has the writer successfully summarised/paraphrased the original? yes
3. Has the writer summarised/paraphrased ALL of the ideas from the original?yes
4. Has the writer extended the ideas from the writer? Yes
5. Has the writer presented a topic and summary sentence? Yes
6. How does this writing compare to yours?

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Md Anwar Hussain
1. Is there a citation in the text? yes
2. Has the writer successfully summarised/paraphrased the original? yes
3. Has the writer summarised/paraphrased ALL of the ideas from the original?yes
4. Has the writer extended the ideas from the writer? no just exp
5. Has the writer presented a topic and summary sentence?
6. How does this writing compare to yours?

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1. Is there a citation in the text? yes
2. Has the writer successfully summarised/paraphrased the original? yes
3. Has the writer summarised/paraphrased ALL of the ideas from the original?yes
4. Has the writer extended the ideas from the writer? no just explain in short form
5. Has the writer presented a topic and summary sentence? tes
6. How does this writing compare to yours?my writing more shorter than this model writing becouse i missed some points

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2. Paterson wrote it amazingly.
3.writer was summarized it from the reality as well as original.
4.No I think it was sufficient.
5.writer presented it in right truck
5.it was a fantastic writing If i will write it I would be followed this writing.

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1. Is there a citation in the text?
Ans.Yes
2. Has the writer successfully summarised/paraphrased the original?
Ans .Little bit
3. Has the writer summarised/paraphrased ALL of the ideas from the original?
Ans.NO
4. Has the writer extended the ideas from the writer?
Ans.Yes
5. Has the writer presented a topic and summary sentence?
Ans.No
6. How does this writing compare to yours?
Ans.By summarise,key point,heading

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Akbar Ali
Write 4-5 sentences in response to the essay question: What are the main solutions to traffic congestion?

We know human drivers often bend rules and take risks, even breaking laws, but driverless cars will obey every rule and posted speed limit, making the roads safer for everyone. It’s also control by GPS tracker. In USA it play an important rule.

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Hasin Ahmed Nabil
Section.1  Traffic problem is becoming a major issue in Bangladesh and day by day Problems are increasing.  I believe that Following  the instructions from traffic Police can be a good help and Public can use the transport and avoid the private car

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Paterson (2018) state that, numerous changes will appear on the problem caused by traffic in the upcoming days. Driverless car has been invented by the USA and they are already testing in the field. Dramatically, it will reduce the purchasing rate of vehicle cause in the future people will only hire the taxies because they do not have to pay for the driver fee. In addition, traffic congestion will also decrease gradually because of driverless car traffic police will find it easy to control the road.

section 2
Shamsher, R. & Abdullah, M.N. (2013) ‘Traffic Congestion in Bangladesh- Causes and Solutions: A study of Chittagong Metropolitan City. Asian Business Review, vol. 2(1), pp. 13-18.
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Akbar Ali
PROGRESS TEST
Section 1 - using a citation into your text using summarising/paraphrasing skills.
There will be significant changes to traffic problems in the future. In the USA they have been trialling driverless cars. The sensors that the cars use have, to a large extent these cars have been successful. This could mean that instead of people buying cars they will hire taxis at affordable prices as there is no driver costs. Furthermore, if the majority of cars are driverless it means that the traffic can be regulated more effectively through GPS and potentially there will be fewer accidents.   (Paterson, 2018)
Write 4-5 sentences in response to the essay question: What are the main solutions to traffic congestion?

We know human drivers often bend rules and take risks, even breaking laws, but driverless cars will obey every rule and posted speed limit, making the roads safer for everyone. It’s also control by GPS tracker. In USA it play an important rule.

Summarise or paraphrase a section of the text above
Extend the points made by (Paterson, 2018) by stating WHY? You think the solutions are useful.
Include a citation.

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Fahim Ahmed
As we all know, the traffic problem is increasing day by day in big cities. There are many main reasons for this. Distorted urbanization, the increase in population, and the increase in the number of vehicles are the 3 biggest factors causing traffic problems in cities.

With the formation of crooked urbanization, the roads are not wide enough and not linear enough to provide traffic flow quickly. As a result, we see blocked roads, big queues, and angry drivers.

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Shamsher, R. and Abdullah, M.N.( 2013). ‘Traffic congestion in Bangladesh-causes and solutions, : A study of Chittagong metropolitan city. Asian Business Review, vol. 2(1), pp.(13-18.)

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Traffic congestion has become one of the most complicated issues in bangladesh  is increasing in alarming rate .chitagong one of the largest city of bangladesh ,is faceing challenges due to congestion .the objective of thus study is to investigate the impactof physical feaature on traffic congestion under mixed traffic condition .to carry out the study a specific segment khulna chitagong highway was taken as study route.A survey was conducted to assess the condition of phucsical feature .Traffic volume was determinde by manual method survey with tally sheet.finally ,the volume of different mood of transport are converted in passanger car unit .different indices were used measure the congestion rate at different segment of the study route showing a realtion between the volume of vehicles at desing hour of the capacity of the road .A comaprasion among there intersection point in the study rout was the done identify the most congest aegment .

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The traffic problem has become to a dangerous in future.In the bangladesh are increasing at an alarming rate.Therefore if majority use public transport it will be helpfull for general people..

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the traffic problem has become to a dangerous in future. in the bangladesh are increasing at an alarming rate. Therefore if majorty use public transport it will be helpfull for all

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There will be significant changes to traffic problems in the future. In the USA they have been trialling driverless cars. The sensors that the cars use have, to a large extent these cars have been successful. This could mean that instead of people buying cars they will hire taxis at affordable prices as there is no driver costs. Furthermore, if the majority of cars are driverless it means that the traffic can be regulated more effectively through GPS and potentially there will be fewer accidents.   (Paterson, 2018)

In future modern technology will be vital things for changing traffic problem,by using modern invention such as sensors cars.In the USA they already has been trialling(Driverless car) and which is really important for reduce traffic problem.
Morever, general people can affort easily and traffic systm will be very smooth.

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Answer 1:
1) Use of the driverless car will be an effective way to reduce traffic jam
2)People will hire driverless instead of buying  which will reduce the number of cars in the city

3) Al cars will prevail a more regulated system using gps by monitoring traffic of  a city and go for the traffic free routes.

Answer 2:
Shamsher, R. and Abdullah, M.N., (2013). ''Traffic congestion in Bangladesh-causes and solutions: a study of Chittagong metropolitan city''. Asian Business Review, vol 2(1), pp.13-18

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There will be significant changes to traffic problems in the future. In the USA they have been trialling driverless cars. The sensors that the cars use have, to a large extent these cars have been successful. This could mean that instead of people buying cars they will hire taxis at affordable prices as there is no driver costs. Furthermore, if the majority of cars are driverless it means that the traffic can be regulated more effectively through GPS and potentially there will be fewer accidents.   (Paterson, 2018)