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Should university students live away from their parents?

Agree – students should live away

Disagree – students shouldn’t live away

Argument – explain opinion

Explanation – explain argument

Evidence – Provide facts / example to prove explanation

We need to acknowledge that living away from parents bring a lot of benefits.

Agree:

We need to acknowledge that (emphasis lead-in) living away from parents while in university can help students become more independent. This is because when they are all alone, students will have to deal with life’s problems all by themselves, and thus gaining more experience in how to lead a life on their own. (explain argument) As a matter of fact, many Vietnamese students studying in the US have to work part time in order to pay for their living expenses, which allows them to learn how to manage their own financial situations years before graduating from school.

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In my opinion, education systems have to reduce the number of subjects for student in the age of 15, which make students very stress and worry about graduation. I advocate that each student must have enough subjects to go to high school but too many subjects in high school are not necessary. The explaination for this could be the fact that in the age of 15 or ealier, students often find their future field and focus to pass it well and they do not want to spend too much time on other subjects excessively. As the matter of fact, some countries have done a practical work for students, US’s  government allow students to choose their futute work and they do not need to study other subjects

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There is no denying that focusing on certain lesson can substantially help students acquire in-depth understanding. The explanation for this could be the fact that students will have more time to achieve certain subjects that they have motivation instead of pour the hours into subjects that they have no interest or ability to keep up with, which can cause lose sight of the goal and waste away their time. For instance, when the young just learn a few courses, have so much time to investigate it deeply and they being able to expand their savvy in a particular area.

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We need to admit that international news gives a boost for your knowledge to catch up with the developing of the world. The basis of this is the fact that international news allowed you to access to a tremendous amount of information about what is happening around the world and thus facilitating your process in becoming a global citizen. For evidence, North Korea, the country that the government bar the common public from the international news leads to the consequence of becoming one of the most underdeveloped country in the world.

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We must to acknowledge that news is very important with human’s life but we should focus on news in our country first because of its import.This is because news in our country is easier for the common public to take it, while international news is harder and unreachable. But I admit that international is not important but in fact that not many people watch it but the government facilitate some channel on TV to broadcasting international news for people in need. Anyway, the percentage of peole in a country that watch news in their country is higher, that means they prefect problems about their country more. In fact, news in VN concentrate more about problems in VN, they just add 2 or 3 international news that really important.

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It is an incontrovertible fact the age of 15 marks the start of the period in which teenagers strongly seek for their own ideology, and thus focusing on specific subjects gives teenagers more time to form their worldview. What we have to realize is that teenagers in the age of 15 meet their adolescence, when both their mind and body face substantially changes, and therefore time for experiencing and discovering about the world is exceptionally more crucial than unnecessary time spent on studying subjects that is not so important.

More appreciably, as long as students over 15 years old are allowed to study only core subjects such as language or mathematics, lacking in time and ineffective studying approaches might no longer an obstacle for students to achieve good results at school. What we have to realize is that distributed concentration on a plethora of subjects and great intensity of studying are likely to prompt counterproductive effects, which despite pouring enormous hours into studying, good marks still seem unreachable. Conversely, more time focusing on a particular subject and fewer subjects had to be studied would obviously be a more efficient and practical learning method.

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There is no denying that domestic news is more relevant and impactful to people’s daily life – which they focus on. For instance, during the Covid-19 pandemic, domestic news helps update new cases in the area, solutions to avoid infection such as reducing the exposure of people, vaccinating to achieve community immunity, 5K, ... or helping those who are economically disadvantaged. This is because to be more detailed, domestic news mainly focuses on local issues and allows the common public to express their concerns and discuss issues – which directly affect their lives.

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We need to acknowledge that without studying a plenty of subjects, students would be dubious about what subjects they exceptionally like of or have aptitude of, and thus, hardly could them determine whether or not to pursue a professional development later in life. Beyond no doubt, a student could never know he is gifted in literature if he just focuses on math or chemistry. On the basis of this, adding every possible subject into the school curriculum would practically and effectively assists students in achieving happiness and avoiding any regrets of them for choosing the wrong occupation.

More appreciably, it is an indisputable fact that without studying a wide span of subjects, students could never gain deep understanding of their major, on the basis that every subject is considerably associated with each other. In particular, learning language in the absence of history, geography as well as literature is absolutely lacking of insight and dilettante, as beyond no doubt, a language was formed then, spread under specific situations, and thus excluding those subjects from the school’s curriculum might advocate serious lacks in the context and framework of the language itself.

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We need to acknowledge that international news allows common public to know the fluctuations of the world situation, thereby some people such as politicians, investors, ... take appropriate actions to reduce the damage. The basis of this is the fact that the countries in the world have close relationships so the actions of these countries will affect other countries, including the country where they live. For instance, if the USA – which is expanding and prevailing in the economic market, has problems, it will affect the value of currencies, stocks, ... and expose many countries that are dealing with encounter an obstacle.

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We need to admit that student pour hours into a small number of subjects is a professional development in those area which are being focused. The basis of this could be from the fact that spending a tremendous amount of time in a significant subjects will give a boost for your understanding in that area. In contrast, learning in a wide range of subject will bar you from being mastery in a subject in order to make you lose sight from your goal. In fact, professors are the expert in their platform because of studying depth enough of their subject.

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We need to acknowledge that domestic news is attracted by the common public because of its reliability. The explanation for this could be the fact that these information are rigorously chosen and inspect many times by the media headquarters therefore reduce the exposure of a tremendous amount of fake news in the area and thus gaining belief in people. In the Covid 19 pandemic, domestic news are taking an important role in propagandizing and stating the exact situation in order to facilitate the process of overcoming hard time.

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There is no denying that grasp of homeland’s news is far more practical than paying attention to foreign media, on the basis that domestic situation highly relates to citizen’s life. In particular, as every region has its own climate and terrain, a country’s downturn in agricultural production would neither affect another country’s upswing in the crop yield nor is linked to the crop failure of another different country. Hence, if people focus on news in their native country, they will gain a better understanding of their country status quo and therefore, have the preparation for any up-coming changes to their normal lives.

More appreciably, reading internal news could considerably facilitate and accelerate progress towards the country’s common targets. This is because reading domestic news could raise people concern of their national goals, and therefore makes them feel duty-bound to dedicate effort to achieve these aims. Particularly, the chief reason why countries such as New Zealand, Vietnam and China succeed to fight against the Covid-19 pandemic is the care of the common public about governments' recommendation on health care and rigorous restricted rules posted on domestic newspaper and other media sites.

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It is worth mentioning that studying a wide range of subjects allows students to get a good job and achieve career success after graduation. This is because the complementarity between subjects not only expands understanding of other aspects, in-depth knowledge but also facilitates practical skills such as communication, creativity, leadership, … - which companies and employers require. As a matter of fact, Stanford University has topped the QS Graduate Employability Rankings 2020 by this educational system.

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There is no denying that grasp of global news would facilitate both internal and external commerce. This is because reading world news could largely contribute to entrepreneurs’ understanding about new trade agreements between countries, besides changes in different market’ supply and demand, and therefore every enterprise can make the most appropriate decision according to the situation. Significance of being well informed about global news could be proved by looking at big corporation such as Walmart Inc, Apple or Amazon, where the department whose duty is collecting and analyzing news around the world, always involves the largest number of the company employees.

More appreciably, reading international news advocates people surmounting obstacle to distance, and thus assist people in gaining a better insight of other culture and community. Despite the miles apart, reading global news increases the exposure of different economies, social issues, norms as well as novel facts among citizens of isolated countries. Hence, reading world news makes understanding about a specific culture far more practical and straightforward for the common public, and thus facilitates learning dissimilar cultures in the world.

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We need to recognize that letting students focus on specific subjects makes it easier for them to absorb knowledge and deepen their understanding. The basis of this is to easily absorb a small amount of knowledge and make the teacher's lectures practical and true to life. Moreover, studying a small number of subjects allows students to spend more time achieving their goals, and doing well on the goals will motivate them. On the other hand, studying too many subjects will make students exhausted of having to pour the hours into subjects that they are not interested in. For example, when students focus on specific subjects, their time will be more for each subject which will make them able to study thoroughly and delve deeper into the lesson.

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There is no denying that domestic news plays an important role in the lives of people in a country. What we have to realize is that people tend to read news related to themselves first eg about their country, economy - professional development in their country,... Now when the covid19 epidemic is attracting people's attention all over the world, domestic news is even more important prevail. It brings a lot of utility information to people such as: how to prevent the epidemic, reduce the exposure of the body's contact with the environment, the number of infections a day, ...