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My video is about my personal narrative story and my favourite strategy while writing it.

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This is my video on Personal Narrative, about my favorite strategy:

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This my video on Personal narrative, my favourite strategy:

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My Strategy

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My Video on my favorite strategy while writing my Personal Narrative

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My Video on my favorite strategy while writing my Personal Narrative

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Here it is

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I explained my favourite strategy which I used while writing this. Find my personal narrative attached below. Hope that you like it :)

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Mehar Makkar - Final story draft for publishing

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siddarth varun- When I got stung by a jelly fish

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by samridh

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Nishtha Maheshwari - 23_7_2021-Personal Narrative- Completed draft

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My favorite strategy in my personal narrative

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Wow, I can feel and see you because this story is beautifully written and I can picture myself in your shoes Abhay,
Good job

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I like the way you visualized the basmet. great job

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Your story idea is very good. I like how describe yourself when you are running the race. But I feel that the starting needs some tweaking. It feels a bit quick. But overall it is very nice

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It's a wonderful story. I can really see everything happening inside my brain when I read the story. You can add a few more dialogues and a little more of inner thinking. Apart from that, the story is quite nice!

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Aarav.Gupta I like your favorite strategy it was amazing

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I liked the way you expressed your emotions in your story but I think you could have added a bit more Show Not Tell.

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I like your story Abhyuday! It has most of the strategies given! I have only one feedback. You can make the important parts longer and the unimportant ones shorter. Apart from that, it is a very good story!

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Swara, I think you should have had a bit lesser dialogues and have a balance in SAID strategy

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wow Nishtha but you added very little inner thinking in your story but other than that it was great!

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Good story, Andre. It is perfect, the way you have described every bit of your story! You can add a little bit more show not tell. Great story!

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Advaith I liked how you used the SAID Strategy

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nice story Arav. I like how you showed what pain you felt when you got scratched by the cat

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I absolutely love your story advaith!

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I really understand how you falt Abhay, It is written perfectly!

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Wow, Asees I can really feel how you felt and see what you could see!

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Wow riya,I really liked your description

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shaurya i like your story a lot i liked how you stretched it and i could visualize every word that you wrote

over all great work

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I like how u described the voice in your head so nicely with so much small action. Maybe add more paragraphing because with the voice and your thoughts it becomes hard and confusing.

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I like ur story Abhyuday its a little too dramatic but its very well written and i can see you put in a lot of work
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Wow, I can put myself in your shoes. It is very detailed and I like how you interact with the reader a little. Very well described.

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wow, i could imagine the dentist pull the teeth out. over all i thought that it was a great story

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Advaith your story was awesome you could of added a bit less actions but overall good job Advaith

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Advaith I really liked your story because you put so much detail in it I felt like I was quite literally in the scene *winces* the show not tell was implemented perfectly while the powerful words were what made me feel like I was there *winces*.

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I liked how you described your feelings when you got stung by the jellyfish nice job!

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I think the story was very touching mainly becuase you you felt diya as a nice. I think you can make the book longer by showing your emoion a little more.

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Wow this story is realy really expressive abhay i can understand the way you are feeling and i think this is one of the most beautiful stories i have ever read :)

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Very touching story, I could really feel your sadness.

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Shyam your story is awesome I like how you expressed your emotions but I think you can stretch the heart of the story and use show not tell.

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Aiyana I think your story was great and I liked how you described your feelings though I think you could describe the setting a little more. Great and touching story!

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Wow , I your story is good how you described how everything was happening and how in the end you were happy becuase naughty nikil was not there next year.

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Great job Rishika, I loved how you used your flashback in your story!! Please tell me how you convinced your mom so I can get a puppy too :)

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Good story Andre it was perfect but you could add a little bit more of show not tell otherwise it is perfect

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Great story riddhi,
I can really imagine how scary getting teeth pulled out is, I really loved it. :)

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Rimi this story is really interesting, I love how detailed it is!

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I loved the story Shyam,I felt what you felt and saw what you saw! I am very sorry about your niece.

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Wow teisha your story is really interesting! I never would have thought of such a unique idea!

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Wow,samridh Getting lost in a supermarket is scary! I really like your strategies!

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Awwwwww, I felt like I was there!!