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We asked some fellow classmates to watch our rough cut and leave criticisms/improvements 

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We asked some fellow classmates to watch our rough cut and leave criticisms/improvements 

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When singing with the mic I look too happy, it's a bit out of place.

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You should show more about her trying to be the band and make

it as a star, to help the storyline.

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The section with the wall- is that supposed to be in public? You need to add a scene with people in it to seem more realistic.

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I like the first half, the second half isn't as interesting because it looks the same. You need more shot variation.