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AP Workshops are particularly important as AP style writing can be very difficult as it requires attention to detail and a good sense of  writing and its nuance. Ryan and I along with Paul are gonna lead a workshop for AP Lang.

- Joe Shapiro

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Such a large amount of students struggle with making smooth conclusions that are not repetitive.  Many writers don't really know what to include in a conclusion so they become repetitive and start to summarize body paragraphs.  A workshop that includes the basic needs for a conclusion would benefit lots of students.
-Chloe Barr

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A lot of students don't quite understand what MLA formatting is- despite the fact that the librarians have worked tirelessly to teach us. It would be beneficial for students to be reminded how to put numbers at the bottom of pages, and how to correctly cite an article. Also touching on how to format an MLA bibliography would be helpful to students who write wonderful papers, but get points taken off for mistakes in MLA structure.

-Katherine Weiss

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How to attack different prompts and brainstorm ideas. Also teach them the proper organization for the essay.

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Guide to what topics for college essays are good and how to structure essays. Additional info on what to put into applications.

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Many underclassmen write DBQ essays or paragraphs in their World History Classes and need help with the translation of document analysis into a well crafted paragraph with new ideas stemming from the documents. -abby snowden

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Many students will have to do some sort of research project for their English class whether it's a presentation or essay.  I know that the librarians help with setting the students on the right track, but maybe some additional help or further elaboration on the do's and don'ts of research could be helpful. Including pointers on what you need for a research piece and how to piece it together could be helpful.
-Natalie Siewick

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Many times I will come across essays where the assertion is either weak or a factual statement (it should be able to be debated) . As one's entire paper/paragraph is created to support a thesis, it is important that a writer know how to create a strong starting point for their essay.
-London Tuma

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Many students who are just entering high school are not sure what MLA even means (i know I dont) so a workshop on this can help

-Dario Tariafa

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I think we could host a workshop with how to diversify and better plan creative writing.

- Lylon SV

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For younger students (or not!) still struggling on how to properly write an AEC paragraph, and for those who are still unclear as to what each part of AEC means.
- Taylor Brokesh

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everyone writes differently and has a unique style. In this workshop, we could help the attendees master how they let their voice shine through in their writing, and show pieces of themselves through their personal style.
-k8

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Writing essays can be hard for English learners. I think that if we teach intermediate level ESL students we could have a positive impact on their writing. With them we could focus mainly on accuracy and grammar rather than only organization. This is because with English being their second language, these are the glaring mistakes they commit.

-Olvin Abrego

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Commentary is a crucial part of almost every writing assignment, yet a lot of times students find themselves stuck on where to start and how to add original thoughts instead of simply a summary.  Since the quality of commentary can make or break an essay, I think that this workshop could benefit everyone!

-Rachel Silverman

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Quotes and the rules surrounding them can be difficult, so we could help with writing context, explaining when to use commas vs colons vs nothing before a quote, showing how to write MLA in-text citation.

—Maddie Ewers

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At the writing center, we focus on big ideas, not as much on the flow or attractiveness of the writing. Nobody wants to read a boring paper, and a little (correct) comma action and transition words can go a long way.
- Carter Williamson :)

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I'm not sure if the history classes will do this again, but a lot of people seem to come in for this assignment. I think it could be beneficial to have a workshop on this so when people come in with them, the regular tutoring sessions run smoother.
-Shannon Lehrke

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Being a French 4 student, I know PALS in general can be difficult, so I think making a workshop on what teachers are looking for in a Writing PALS would be beneficial. The difficult part in starting this workshop is finding tutors confident in their Spanish or French writing skills.

- Bella Hammond

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Getting a Jump Start on Your College Essay

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Getting a Jump Start on Your College Essay

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We've done this workshop in the past for current Juniors/rising Seniors in the Spring. We could do a one-part or two-part workshop.

-Ms. Hutton

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We could have a workshop focusing on AP Lang essay questions, specifically helping with commentary.
-Paul Favre