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why did you include x quote,

what is the significance of part y,

is this portion providing points emphasizing your argument

feedback should be given on a case by case basis, and no single strategy will help in every scenario

I prefer concise criticisms, that I may go back and try to amend independently for reevaluation (once), if I still miss the idea, what would some suggestions be to fix the problem?

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I prefer straight up telling me what is wrong.

I don't really care; the things I write in class I

don't have a large emotional attachment to.

Do explain why you suggest I change something

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I would want them to ask me the purpose in doing something they thought was not correct. I would also like them to ask me what my purpose was in including certain phrases and arguments.

It is important to give honest and constructive feedback that will improve my writing.

It is important to take feedback lightly and use it as a way to better yourself.

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I like when people point out something that I can improve

and I like when people make suggestions so that it gives me a

clearer idea of what they are trying to point out. I like when

people ask questions about the paper as well because it gives

me more to think about how I can improve my paper. Oh and be nice about whatever you

comment on, but don't sugarcoat it.

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Why I brought up a particular point? How can

I elaborate on that point? Why this topic matters? Be direct when giving

feedback you don't have to be rude, but criticize constructively.

When receiving feedback don't take it personal the person is just trying to help you improve your paper.

When revising someones paper be constructive and make sure whatever you add or take out adds to the writing piece as a whole.

When someone revises my paper I like them to be direct don't sugar coat just give me the honest truth. I'm not sensitive whatever you say won't hurt my feelings. I'll take it as you are helping me to improve my grade.

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Some questions I want the reader to ask me is whether or not a particular sentence is absolutely needed and whether or not my point was presented clearly.  When giving feed back I like it when people say exactly what is wrong, point out grammatical issues, and suggest how to improve certain things. Bad practices would be not giving suggestions or changing things just because it is not your type of writing.

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Why are you using a certain technique?

A good practice to use while giving feedback is to offer a solution to a problem. If you find something wrong then you should offer your opinion of what should change. It is helpful to the writer to offer constructive criticism.

Bad practices may include just pointing out the issues and not offering any helpful suggestions.

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I enjoy when people, after pointing

out something that I did wrong, tell me exactly how

I can make it better. I like when people are honest with me about what I did wrong and what I did right. I prefer when people provide suggestions as to how I could reword an otherwise wordy sentence. I think a good suggestion for peer review would be for each time you tell someone to fix something, give them an example of how you would fix it. I like when people point out something that they didn't understand or thought sounded weird. Bad practices would just be telling someone their paper is awful without giving them any idea as to how to fix it. Some questions I would like people to ask would be: Does this make sense? Is this concise? Did I understand it? How could this be done better?

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List Your Peer Review Strategies, Tips, and Suggestions

For example: the dagger sandwich

say something nice, say something constructive, say something nice