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I think it's amazing!

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What is "innovative 21st Century Catholic education"?

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What is "innovative 21st Century Catholic education"?

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The vision is clear and concise, yet open for interpretation.

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The vision is clear and concise, yet open for interpretation.

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recognized as THE leader in innovative 21st

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perhaps define 21st century for parents (they may not understand what that means)

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perhaps define 21st century for parents (they may not understand what that means)

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I embrace this vision. It is essential that we, the faculty, honor and facilitate all things 21st century.

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"Innovative 21st Century Catholic education" is too generic.

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"Innovative 21st Century Catholic education" is too generic.

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I think the mechatronics is a great example of this.

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Do we only show our faith in God in how we act?

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I would include an acknowledgement of the individual and our commitment to ensuring that each child grows into his or her best possible self.

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I would include an acknowledgement of the individual and our commitment to ensuring that each child grows into his or her best possible self.

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are we 100% settled on the term "ground breaking?"

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are we 100% settled on the term "ground breaking?"

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the leader

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"...investigate the unknown by pursuing huge problems, proposing radical solutions..." What does this mean?

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2nd sentence sounds great!!

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The phrase "ground breaking thinker" may be too open to interpretation.

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The second sentence and fourth need to be edited

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The second sentence and fourth need to be edited

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excellent, however list "spiritual" first before academic

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excellent, however list "spiritual" first before academic

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first before academic

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Third sentence is awkward because of "service ... experience."  Parallelism is incorrect.   Academic experience v. service experience.  Adjective noun v. noun noun.

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Third sentence is awkward because of "service ... experience."  Parallelism is incorrect.   Academic experience v. service experience.  Adjective noun v. noun noun.

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Motto?  What does "transformative" mean?

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Motto?  What does "transformative" mean?

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Is there a more clear term for "huge problems?" and what does those mean/look like

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Is there a more clear term for "huge problems?" and what does those mean/look like

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Could huge problems be rephrased as social issues, world problems?

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Could huge problems be rephrased as social issues, world problems?

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maybe change "our Catholic faith" to "the Catholic faith" to not exclude non catholic students/families (both here and in mission statement)

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journey toward becoming curious learners who seek to "serve" and understand

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journey toward becoming curious learners who seek to "serve" and understand

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I like the addition of the last line encouraging action in the face of injustice.

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I like the addition of the last line encouraging action in the face of injustice.

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it emphasizes that we learn from mistakes

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it emphasizes that we learn from mistakes

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"I know that process is  just as important as the end product." - Great

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... I recognize that failure is an opportunity to achieve a successful outcome.

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I think the last sentence should be rewritten. "investigate the unknown", huge problems" and "ground breaking technology seem extreme.  Perhaps we want to investigate the known, work on all problems and  use

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We problem solve to produce solutions using technology and ....