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I need to make sure i have to include tie backs

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i wrote a clear explanation and need t

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yet again, I was unable to finish my essay and neatly wrap up with a conclusion

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Was instead of is

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I understand a structure of an essay.

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I need to work on having a clear topic sentence

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I need to have better grammar/punctuation 

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I need to have better grammar/punctuation 

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I need to not use contractions

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I need to work on the structure of my paragraphs and remember to tie back.

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I wrote a good introduction that prepares reader for a planned essay format.

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Bad grammar + Great explanation of film shots

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Bad grammar + Great explanation of film shots

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Clearly stated the film techniques used in a particular scene for a particular purpose

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Clearly stated the film techniques used in a particular scene for a particular purpose

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Included the director's usage of close ups, two shots, mid shots, dialogue, etc. and described the effect of these techniques.

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Something that i did well was that i had good structure in my essay and i had a introduction, 3 paragraphs, and a conclusion. And I tried my best to use the TEXT format.

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I clearly explained how the examples relate well

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Need to learn how to spell marriage and other words.

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I need to improve on writing essays

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I need to try to imput formal words instead of informal?

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Clearly explaining what each example shows 

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Clearly explaining what each example shows 

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I clearly explained my examples and film techniques in the text

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I didn't write a fully structured paragraph that relates to the question

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I am able to correctly introduce the reader to the subject matter of the essay and the topics of each paragraph

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I need to focus more in making clear topic sentences

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I need to work on my spelling because its the only thing holding me back form merit

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I need to prove on my Spelling and grammar more

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I Need To Improve On Writing Topic Sentences

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I Need To Improve On Writing Topic Sentences

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I missed out on writing a topic sentence on a paragraph.

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I used film shots to back up my ideas.

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I wrote a succinct introduction which prepares reader for a planned essay format.

I need to improve my paragraph structure.

Love Noah

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I need to work on spelling a little bit

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One thing i did well was not caring about this class lol

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I used contractions.

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I need to work on my speling.

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I used good and clear examples from the film to back up my points

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I wrote well-structure paragraphs

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I explained film techniques well and used multiple examples

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I clearly explained what each example shows

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hatetered

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I need to learn how to use punctuation properly and learn how to use punctuation so that it will be affective in my writing.

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Used Multiple Examples to Prove My Point

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Used Multiple Examples to Prove My Point

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I wrote more than two film techniques in each paragraph to prove my point.

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I wrote a good and clear introduction preparing the readers for a planned essay format

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Include the film technique(s) being discussed in the paragraph in the topic sentence.

Use "and" instead of an ampersand.