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Good afternoon,

With the completion of the activity number 10 this virtual course is over. I hope this blog and platform have been very useful to you and I would like to encourage you to continue improving your knowledge in English. As you know, speaking a second language has many advantages not only when finding a job but also in your personal life. This will open many opportunities to you in the near future, so do not waste this knowledge acquired!

Continue practicing!

Good Luck,

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Hi
Thanks for sharing some of your pictures. I can see how your writing skills are improving because you are using grammar correctly with different kind of connectors and complex vocabulary. I just advise you to practice the other skills which are also important; those are speaking, reading and listening.

Keep working :)

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All right, Checked!

You are doing it well. Keep going on the lessons. We almost finish the course and the final exam is just right on the corner.
Try to do the activities proposed on my resources section; there you will find different kind of excersices to practice different skill.
Best regards,

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Ivan Camilo Gonzalez G.
Centro de lenguas ECCI
Instructor Virtual

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https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BzpcybX-Bo-ibW9TM1NPUEtDQUk/view?usp=sharing

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Hi!

The participation in the second task is quite well written in terms of punctuation and sequency. However it is not difficult to know that you used a translator to do the activity because there are many coherence, cohesion problems and also some wrong sentences traduced from Spanish to English. Next activities be careful and check several times what you write. I also hope you try to write by yourself your ideas.
Here some examples:

-I allow myself to write this letter to do the favor that the complaint for the bad service ( this part doesn't make sence)
-I attended Mr. Pepe Perez who was my waiter. (What do you mean?)
-we were informed that in their establishment already Had presented this type of complaints ( Grammar is not clear here!)

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Hi!
Thanks for the video. It is interesting the way you speak you are trying to be fluent; you know how to share personal information and talk about yourself your family and future plans. On the other hand, it was a bit difficult to understand because because you are pronouncing exactly as you read. Study the sounds SH, CH, TH, INITIAL S AND Z for now.

I hope I can see progress in the next video activity.

Best regards,

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Hello,

Your CV is interesting it would impress to anyone hiring people. However, you used a very Colombian Model; it looks like you just translated your current curriculum from Spanish to English. I want you to follow the American style following the five steps model I shared on my blog.  Please repeat the activity and post it again.