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Here is some information about Ireland, Ireland is a very beautifull place and I have choose these place because I have been there and I love Ireland.

Ireland is located in Europe, next to  United Kingdom . The capital of Ireland is Dublin.

Dublin was founded by the bikings, they founded a new town on the south bank of the liffey in 841. The name "Dublin" in those years where called dublin linn, wich it means "Black pool".

The popullation have grow in these last 15 years ego, for example in 2005 the popullation was of 4,112 millon of persons, in 2010 the popullation was of 4,549 millons, in 2015 of 4,678 and on the 2020 this year,, the popullation is of 4,904. THAT´S A LOT!!
Some importants persons in Ireland are: Oscar wilde that it´s a writer, poet and playwright I love he ,another famous is Bram Stoker who is a novelist, Peter O´toole that is a actor and I love he too.

Some activities you can do in Ireland are: loughcrew adventure centre, another activitie is rafting down the rapids in longford.
Also you can some festivals like the Dublin horse festival, this festival is only to ride horses so if you liked horses it is a very interesting festival, another festival is Dublin st. Patriks day parade, in this festival you have to chance to witness traditional irish music, dancing, and taste some of the best beer in the world.

Some places you can go in Ireland to visit are: Dingle, Dingle sits sandwiched between the beachces and cliffs of country kerny. The town is beset by bobbing fishing boats travelers can opt to explore the beautifull panoramas. Another place is Sligo, Sligo is a small and welcoming town, it´s famous because it have a  charming medieval core, arched stone bridges, lichenspotted abbey.

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Hi, margarita
Here’s some information about Bilbao,  a very beautiful city. It’s  situated in north of Spain, it  is the capital of Vizcaya, it is one of the most populates cities.

Bilbao has many a lot of  beautiful and famous places to visit such as:
•the Guggenheim museum, which is world famous for its many visitor, that was built on October 18, 1997. which is   famous in the world and that was built in October,1997.
•"el casco viejo" the old town is one of the most important areas ps  in Bilbao, with traditional and modern shops and numerous restaurants.
•la plaza elíptica the elliptic square or also called “plaza Moyúa” it’s  is located in the center of Bilbao, there is one of the most beautiful monuments of the city; “el palacio Chavarri” of the century XlX century.
• between the churches we can see the “cathedral of Santiago” that is a gothic temple ps  from the century XlV. the XIV century

Bilbao also has architectonic works like :

•the towers Sozaki that are two twins towers of 83meters high of height with 23plants floors. And finally there is the bridge “Zubizuri” that means white bridge ;since they they built it , it was a symbol  for Bilbao.

This is all abult  about this amazing city, t  I visit it every summers and from my point of view there are many  a lot of things to see and do in this fantastic city.

I invite you to visit it!

By: Hiba Dazi

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Hi, Tom
Here is some info about Sidney where I, I'm m living now , however my hometown is Melbourne .

The best of Sidney is the Opera house , it was created in the 1973 , you can also visit the Sidney Harbour Bridge it goes from the city centre to the North shore . I really love cross  crossing the bridge at nigth  night to see its lights.

The first people who live here were Australian aboriginals  aborigines. Later the British arrived and settled Sidney . Part of this people were prisoners , they brought new diseases and it was bad for the locals. Nowadays Sidney is the biggest city in Australia.

How If you practise surf , I am sure you will love the marvelous beaches in this city ,but be careful with the sarks SHARKS .Also you ALSOhave have to try kangaroo meat,  IT is tasty , .we can go to a famous restaurant and eat the best kangaroo burger in the city .

I hope you enjoy yourself visiting my city the next summer . I am waiting for you

See you soon !

PEDRO AUSEJO
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Hi Alicia!

Here is some information about Quito, the place where my mother was born.

Quito is the capital of Ecuador, it’s located in the lower part of a volcano. And it’s the oldest and most populous city in the country with two million habitants  inhabitants in the urban area and 2.8 million inhabitants in the canton. Quito's economy is mainly based on agriculture.

Quito has 11 churches, 9 chapels and 2 convents. It also has a historical center, and  it is one of the most important in America, with 130 monuments.

One place to visit is "La ronda" . It is a street in the center. The music show really starts at night, but there is a show during the day too. It’s a very old street with ancient architecture that is thousands of years old.

Also "El panecillo" is also  a very visited mountain that also has "La Virgen Apocalíptica" at the top, and it  is located in the center of the city.

There are also museums, swimming pools, restaurants, bars and markets.

Goodbye Alicia!
I hope to see you soon.

Carla Trapero.
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Hi John here’s some info you might find useful:

Lardero is a big village south of Logroño in La Rioja (Spain).

If you’re going to visit it  I advise you that you should  come on in summer because the temperature allows us to do many things outside ,for example going to the swimming pools with slides that are very fun, riding  the bike to a river called Iregua and getting into the cold water. also We can also  visit cultural places like: the two churches, the  “Crucero with templete” ,we can also visit the cultural house, the different expos  that  sometimes change sometimes during the year.
You can visit Logroño too, because it’s close to Lardero.

In Lardero it’s very typical to go to the “Monte de las Bodegas” with your friends and family. The “Monte de las Bodegas” is a little hill on  at the outsides outskirts of Lardero. Wee call “Bodegas” as places they make wine but they are also used to cook and eat with your family/friends.

I hope that this info is useful for you. See you when you decide to come.

Matías.
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Hi Giorno!

Here´s some info about Ortigosa de Cameros, my father's  village.

Ortigosa is a small village situated in the northeast of Spain. It´s in La Rioja and it´s in the region of Nuevo Camero.

There´re three very old churches, a temporal museum in one church, some little shops with handmade products and also some amazing caves.

You can go to one of its parks to have fun, or if you´ve got thirst are thirsty you can go to the San Martin fountain or to the principal square too.
When you walk the streets,you can see a lot of old houses that are so beautiful! One interesting place is the swamp that has a nautic club.

In July  we celebrates the Virgin of Carmen and we go to the principal square were  where we´ve got a very fun mobile diskco and we dance all the nights every night too.

I´ll show you all the village in July...
See you then!!!

HUGO
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Hi Alberto,
Santillana is a bueautiful  beautiful village in Cantabria with 1.472 habitants. inhabitants.

It is famouse  because of "Las Cuevas de Altamira" , very old caves in which prehistorical people dra ew amazing pictures many years ago. My mother has been there two times , but now they're closed for better conservation.

Trough Santillana passes a very famouse path called "Camino de Santiago" , it passes trough the village , as well as  trough my grandparents' house in the outskirts of it.

You can go to the amazing zoo it has, it is full of all types of animals , reptails , wolwes ... It's pretty huge! I  went there this  last summer with my cousins and their friends. I had a lot of fun!

Moreover , you have two amazing beaches fifteen minutes by car from Santillana. They are  in Suances , one of them is called  "Playa de la concha"  and the other one , my favourite , "Playa de los Locos" with very big waves.

For  To finishing with you have a lot of shops were you can buy some presents.

So you see , Santillana is an amazing place to visit with friends or family.

AINARA DIAZ
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Hi Laura
Here is some information about El-Yadida, my mum´s city and my favourite city in Morocco

It´s located in the center of Morocco and 194.934 people live in it.

This city has a historical point to the rest of Morocco's cities different because it was taken in 1502 by the Portuguese, who owned the city until 1769, this is why the design of the city is Portuguese too.

One of the places most visited places by tourists is the "Mellah", a Portuguese place too, where the richest Portuguese lived and in which the Portuguese and Moroccan culture are are mixed. They Tourists also visist the Sidi Bouzid beach.

There are a lot of big markets in which you can buy Moroccan traditional dresses, food, spices,vegetables...

I invite you to come!
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Hi, Margarita
Here is some information about Alberite, my village.

Alberite is located in La Rioja, in the north of Spain. It`s a village with almost 2.500 inhabitants. Its economy is mainly based on agriculture.

In Alberite you can walk though streets with buildings from centuries ago, with shields on its front walls, and you  can also take a walk along the Iregua river, where you can enjoy the calm.

There are also several monuments of interest such as the Church of our Lady of the old, or the Tower of the "Urraca", and there is a hermitage too.

It may not be a big place but almost every day people organize activities and everyone is wellcome, and there is a main festival too, in September, in honor of our patron Saint Patron.

Children also have a park to meet and enjoy toguether, and a pool too, but it only opens in summer.

I invite  you all to come, you will be welcome.

Sofía Gallo
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Hi, Claudia
I'm going to talk about Cartagena de Indias ,the place in where parents were  born.This place is located in the Shout  south part of Colombia.This is one of the most beautifull and important places in Colombia

Now ,I'm going to tell you about the more important cities in Colombia. The first one is Castillo San Felipe de Barajas, it was created in 1657, also Islas del Rosario , this is a little "archipielago" archipelago formed by twenty- eight islands. And an other  another place that is very,very beautifull is the Cathedral de  of Santa Catalina  de Alejandria, It was created by Simon Gonzalez in 1577

This place is very beautifull because it have s a lot of places to visit , they  have a very big beach where you can go with the bycicle your bicycle. Also, the streets are very colorfull and very bigs .

Some important characteristics are that always they always  have music in the streets. There are always a lot of people selling many things like clothes , glasses and food

I love this place and I would like that you like it too. you like it too

Saray Gutierrez
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Hi Elena!
Here is some information about Autol, my grandfather's village.
Autol is a village situated in the notheast of Spain, in La Rioja.
It's a village with 4.500 habitants.inhabitants

Autol's economy is based on mushrooms cultivation.

It has the ruins of a castle, in which Celtiberian ceramic remains and the current remains (probably Arab) were founded. There are two hermitges  hermitagesand there is also a church created built in the XVI century too.

There is a green way to walk or practice a sport that goes from Calahorra to Arnedillo, passing through Autol, there is also a beautifull natural park with a duck pond, along with the two mosat  most important stone figures in Autol, which are " El Picuezo y la Picueza"

On February 3th San Blas is celebrated, where the "Barzón" * is typical.
Starting on September 7th , the patron saint festivities are held in honor of San Adrián and Santa Natalia.
ll  I'll show  you everything when you come in September.
See you then!
Leyre.
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Hello Marta!
Here is some information about Albelda de Iregua, my village.
Albelda de Iregua is located in La Rioja, in  the northeast of Spain.
In Albelda, there is a  an old monastery made up of rocks, also there are also  some old streets and  next to the river there are paths to walk and go biking.In my town we tell this paths "paseos".
Also there are also  some parks and a swimingpool. It is fantastic!!!
There are some  famous people born here famous too, for example Carlos Coloma, the famous cyclist who wons the bronze medal in The Olympic Games of Rio, also here was born Javier Camara was also born here, who wons  one  Goya Award.
We have also a square were all the childen go there at the weekend, also in the saquare there are some bars were  where the parents go there at the weekend.
The parties  festivals of my  town are in April and in Augoust August , we celebrated  our town Saint Patron  called San Prudencio.
Here we have a supermarket callled Dia  where  ther is only  you can buy food, also we have also a bazaar and a candies candy shop.
I love my town because there population the people  is fantastic and the town is fantastic, too.

See you Marta!
bye bye Marta 🥰💖

ARIADNA MARTINEZ PASCUAL
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Hi Angel!

Here is some
information about Ginebra, I love Ginebra!

Ginebra is a city
located in the south west of Switzerland.

There are a lot of
expensive stores (Rolex, Gucci...) There is   also is a very big lake with a water
source in the middle that is very powerful.Around the lake there is a clock but  it is a
different clock,  it is a clock with a lot of flowers! Also there is  also a beautiful
cathedral (Cathedral of San Pedro) and  there is a palace of the nations too.

There is a
trampoline with three levels: the highest level can measure 10 meters, it´s very
funny! The lake has little beaches too and in summer it  is hot and you can  have a bath.

Near Ginebra it  is
Lausana, there is an Olympic museum and an Olympic park too. Also there is also  the
Sauvabelin Tower that is a wooden tower with panoramic views.

Ginebra is very beautiful
and a very rich town; I hope I have convinced you to visit it .
Regards

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Hi Martina!
Here's some information about Cadiz, a city that I visit a lot in summer and I love it.

- Cadiz is a city located in southern Spain, it's a province of Andalusia.

- There're some beautiful monuments, such as, "Gran Teatro Falla", "The Cathedral of Cadiz" and also "The monument to the Constitution of 1812", that it's  a monument that commemorates its Centennial and is located in the Plaza de España in Cadiz. Also Cadiz is considered the oldest living city from the west.

- Many things can be highlighted about Cadiz: its beaches and its parties too. But the ideal is to spend a summer night eating pinchos* in the "Barrio de La Viña" or the "Barrio del Pópulo."

- The Cadiz carnival is one of the most important in Spain, one of the best known in the world and declared a festival of international tourist interest too.

I hope it has convinced you and that we will see each other in August, I really want!!!I can't wait!

Pinchos*: It's like an aperitif and each bar has it's  its speciality, it's very typical in Spain!

Aitana Ortigosa, a hug!🥰

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Hi Simon!

Here is some information about Sofia, my favourite city.

Sofia is the capital and largest city of Bulgaria. It is situated in the western part of the country on the Iskar river.

In Sofia you can visit ancient churches, museums and galleries. The most famous is the Alexander Nevsky Cathedral. It is the largest orthodox cathedral in Europe.

There are also two very beautiful bridges: the Lion's bridge and the Eagle's bridge.
Very famous are the mineral water springs of Sofia. There are drinking fountains in the streets and you can drink mineral water for free.

Sofia is a very green capital. You can find a lot of niece   nice parks and gardens. There is a zoo too.
Near to Sofia is Vitosha mountain. You can go there hiking, climbing, mountain biking or doing winter sports.

Sofia is really a great city. There is a lot to see, to visit and to taste.
I'll be happy to share my city with you.

Yordan

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Hello Tom!
I'm giving you  some information about Zaragoza.It  Is the capital of Aragón and  it is the city in which I was born, but I don’t live there.

It has a lot of important places like   "The Cathedral-Basilica of Our Lady of the Pillar", “The Aljafería Palace” and also an important river, “El Ebro” that is the longest river of Spain and most abundant  the largest one too.

The city was created by the Roman people more than 2000 years ago. There is a very important festival on the 12th of October where people bring flowers to the Virgin. In the 2008 there was an international exposition  exhibition about “The Water”. In Zaragoza there  are  is a tradicional candy called “Adoquin” and also the “Aragon Fruits” that are fruits with sugar and chocolate.

This is all about my city. I hope you like it Tom.

By Jaime Frontiñán Peña

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Hello Emma!!
Here´s some information about Madrid, I had visited Madrid 3 months ago.
It Is a big town with 6,6 of population, and it´s the capital of Spain.

You can visit a lot of things like:
- The Gran Vía, it  is the street of Madrid with a lot of shops, restaurants and cinemas too.
The Plaza Mayor where there are a lot of coffee shops,  and in at Christmas there is a christmas market.
- The Prado Museum, it has got  is 200 years old and it has got pictures very famous pictures  like Las Meninas of  by Velázquez.
- The Reina Sofía Museum, is the museum most visited museums  of all the city, it has pictures of people  famous painters like Picasso, Van Gogh,...
- The Retiro: it´s an historical park in the city center, if you  pay some money you can enter to a little lake and ride a little boat.
- The Real Palace, it was the official residence of the kings before going to The Zarzuela.
- Puerta del Sol, in this square it  is recorded the year-end Chimes,  it is very beautiful.

I like Madrid because I think that  it is a very beautiful city and with a lot of people too.

Bye, bye Emma!! See you soon!!
INÉS RUIZ

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Hello Lili!
Here´s some info about Estambul. It  Is situated in Turquía Turkey,  it is one of the biggest cities of Turquía Turkey.
There you can do a lot of things like:
- Go to the GRAN BAZAR labyrinth.
- Visit the Hagia Sofia , the Blue Mosque , the Cisterna Basilica.
- You can also sail the Bósforo Strait at  sunset.
-And if you are older and you go without your parents you can go to have dinner and go party in Taksim and Beyoglu.

The typical  food are the 'KEBABS' all the people eat it.

A lot of them have muslim beliefs ,the others believe in someone too but we don´t know expecifically. for sure.

The best season to visit it for me is winter beco ause you don´t have  so many people there aren't  many people and you can to walk , to  you don't have to wait , to buy....
You should go! You are going to learn a lot of new things and     you´re going to have fun too.

Bye Lili! If you need more info you can write me back!
Thank you and see you soon!

CLAUDIA LAS HERAS
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Hello Buda!!
Here's some information about Thailand, a  country town that I was visited 3 years ago.
Bangkok is a very big tow town and beautiful too. It  Is situated on  in the centre of Thailand.

It is the capital of Thailand.
The popular things in Bangkok are the buddhist temples and the very impotant river Chao Phraya where there  are a lot of boats.

The streets of Bangkok are very populated. In this  these steets there are a lot of food stalls, clothes stalls, shoes stalls... And the food of Bangkok is incredible.

Here in Bangkok the people drive the cars in  on the other side of the car and sometimes you think that a ghost is driving the car.

Here in bangkok it  there isn't any beach but in some pleces of the nature  in the open air  there are some hot nature pools that are fantastic, I recommend you to go. And if you and your parents like elefants elephants I also recommended you also go to ride elephants.them.

See you in Bangkok Buda!!!
Omar

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Hello Marta!!
I will give you a little information for when you come!
Barcelona is a very large city located in the northeast of Spain.
It is the capital of Cataluña.
There are very popular buildings as well as beautiful ones, such as ... Sagrada Família, Torre Agbar or La Pedrera-Casa Milà too.
Its streets are also full of people, most of them tourists.
The best known street is called "Las Ramblas", it  is one of the main arteries of Barcelona, ​​it is a pleasant walk of 1.3 kilometers.
( Tienes que decir que  tiene playa primero)Near the beach, there are almost always a few shops selling souvenirs of the city.
Oh I forgot the beach, as you can imagine ... every summer there are a lot of people being there all day, thanks to the bars that are nearby.
Generally, Barcelona is known for its art and architecture.
The Picasso Museum and the Joan Miró Foundation show the modern art of the artists who give rise to their names.

I'm so excited for you to come!!...
But don't worry, I'll show you all this summer!

See you !! 😊😊
ADRIANA ROMERO
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Hi Lucy!

Here’s some information about London, a very beautiful city.
It's a city situated in the south-east of England,on the banks of the river Thames.
It’s the capital and largest city of England.This city was founded in 50 A.D.,by the Romans.

William Shakespeare like other important people, was from London too,he was an important writer in all around the world.
There are so many buildings in London,such as museums.A very popular museum in London is the Sherlock Holmes Museum, as the books of this character were very popular. This museum houses several ancient artifacts that, if this character had existed, would have used them.
We can visit the London Eye too, which is a Ferris wheel from which we can see all of London, in good weather.
In this city there is a very important tower called Big Ben, which houses the largest four-sided clock in the world.

There are palaces,gardens,parks...that we can also visit.
See you next week!
Malak
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Hello everybody, I’m going to tell you about Burgos, my mum’s town. Burgos is a big town situated in the north of Spain, in Castilla y Leon.  Even though it's one of the most beautiful cities in Spain, its climate it’s  is very cold because it’s very high, over eight hundred metres.

Burgos is a very ancient town with a very rich history. It was funded  founded by Diego Rodríguez Porcelos in 884, and soon it became the capital of the county of Castilla and also of the Cristian Spain. This is the reason of its beauty, it‘s full of churches, palaces, statues and many other monuments that have come down to us in perfect conditions to enjoy them. With no doubt, the most important, and for me the best place in this marvellous city, is the Cathedral, with two special squares around it, you can rest there for hours feeling in other time.

But despite all this beauty what I prefer to do when I go to visit my grandparents it’s to walk down the river that cross the city. It’s very special too.
I hope we can travel together soon and I'll show you everything.
Alvaro.
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Hi Ana!
Here's some information about Logroño, my town.
Logroño is a big town situated in the norteast of Spain. It's the capital of La Rioja.
There are some beautiful ancient churches , a nice museum and very nice old streets. Saint James Way crosses  Logroño too and a lot of pilgrims visit us in their way to Santiago de Compostela.
General Espartero was an important politician born here in the XIX century.
There  are also a lot of parks to ride your bike or walk.
We've also got a very famous street called "La Laurel" which has got a lot of bars and restaurants where you can taste very yummy "tapas"*.
In September we celebrate San Mateo ,our Saint Patron and it's the grapes harvest time. Wine is really important in La Rioja!
There are also a lot of shopping centres , cinemas and a great theater too.
I'll show  you everything when you come in September.
See you then!
Margarita
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