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You visuals and GIFS were relatable and fun. Great way to keep your students interacted and interested.

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Great job on your presentation. It was very memorable, and it helped me a lot with sentence writing. Good structure.

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You did awesome, I loved your lesson. It is very relatable, and your modeling was great.

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Wow- it was such a fun and creative grammar lesson which doesn’t always happen. Kids would be excited to work in groups and do this.
Wonder- I wonder if having all of us go around the room one at a time right after each other might create a sense of ryhthm and students could really hear the interrupters. Great lesson!

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wow! i liked the activity and i think this would be very helpful for students
i wonder... if students would need more examples to make their sentences

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Wow! I enjoyed the activity and your example sentences.
I wonder how this activity would play out with the table checks. I am curious to see that in action because it sound exciting.

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Wow! Your visuals were so fun and would totally engage the students! I enjoyed writing my stories so much!
Wonder- I wonder if we could have heard a before and after story to hear an example. But I loved it and will use this idea for my seniors memoir writing

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Wow, the sentences you chose really made it easy to imitate.. I like how you gave examples and did the work on your own as well, its helpful to keep track of how long students may need.

I wonder if as students we would have had a brief review of nouns verbs may be helpful for students to add more direct sayings

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Wow! I enjoyed the simple imitate assignment and it got me thinking about the concept of a comma that I never think about. I think this is especially great for ESL.

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Wow I loved how you chose something we all could relate to especially how we were all able to openly bring it back to our childhood .

I wonder how much easier this would be to add and edit using a computer document or being able to write a second draft afterwards and hand in both drafts for you to see what we changed

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Wow! I like the clarity of the sample sentences you provided.
Wonder...I wonder if there was a way to prepare a PowerPoint or Slides to clearly teach the information.
Wow...I like the idea of the Table Check.

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Wow: I really enjoyed the lesson! I like how you were very clear with explaining sensory language. I loved how you asked the class to do the do now, explained the lesson, and then had us go back and continue to it. I really felt like I was accurately implementing what I had just learned.

Wonder: I wonder is this how you would approach all your lessons in regard to all ten stories. Or is this an intro lesson to the unit plan.

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Wow! I like the small steps you take in getting the class to complete a bigger story.

I wonder how much time is enough time when students are on different paces. More time the better? Or limit time to have no one finish too early?

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wow! i liked the sensory activity and the snow day theme is relatable to students.
i wonder...what would change if students were told to be descriptive in our do now before learning about sensory language

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Wow! I like your learning objective and Success Criteria.
Wow! I like how you incorporate prior knowledge into your Success Criteria.

I wonder if you can differentiate this by providing your model without the sensory and have struggling students fill in the sensory details after the mini-lesson.

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Wow, I loved the stories you chose for us to read. I felt like I can relate very well.

I wonder if when you teach the lesson with your students, would you give other opportunities to create thesis statements

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Wow! I like the should nots that you provided. We actually did that today for central idea statements and it worked very well.
Wonder...I wonder if it would helped to have separated the descriptors slide by slide with an example for each to better illustrate it.
Wonder...I wonder if we evaluated which column would have worked best for these articles/thesis.

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Wow: I like how you used two stories about women of color, which in New York City would be very relatable to many students. I also liked how interesting and engaging the stories were. You also were very well prepared!

Wonder: I wonder where this lesson would fall in your unit? It’s introducing the thesis so is this the beginning or towards the end where you’re introducing your unit project.

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Wow! Great speaker!

I wonder if my thesis would be influenced by someone else if I worked in a group

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wow! i like how you broke everything down for the students.
i wonder... how this would play out in a real classroom with more time available for the activity.

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Jessica Wow!- I love your energy and humorous models. It helped my understanding of what to do and what not to do. 

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Jessica Wow!- I love your energy and humorous models. It helped my understanding of what to do and what not to do. 

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Wonders- I wonder if writing my thesis statement would be different if I worked with a partner.

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