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Areas You Did Well
▪️  Great delivery.
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Areas for Improvement
▪️ Text needs to be BIGGARRR!
▪️ Might have to change the text font since the background is black.

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- loud and clear
- condifent
- the font size can be increased
- sumarise content

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-increase font size
A bit too wordy
+ Includes personal experience
+Confident

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1.loud
2. Confident
1. Too wordy
2. Says urhhh too much

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+ confidence is there as well as eye contact
- too wordy and a bit hard to read

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1. good volume, article is interesting, relatable elaboration
2. wordy slides, font too small. abit stuttery and pauses here n there

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1. Confident and loud
2. well versed in knowledge in topic

1. Font could be bigger
2. Flow of slides and explanation could be smoother

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+ confident, knows what the topic is about clear and logical flow of slides
+ well done slides
- wordy introduction, can summarise and increase font size
- can have more audience interaction

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- Interesting top, seem very knowledgeable in what you are sharing
- loud and confident

2.
- Slides are a bit too wordy and fonts a bit small, could bold or highlight key words
- could have a bit of audience engagement. or ask some questions so its like relatable to us

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- good start
- pleasant looking slides
- good volume and seems confident in the way you face the audience

2.
- slides a bit too wordy please make font bigger and summarize main points
- come up w a script and memorize your key points so that you know exactly what you are going to say

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1.loud
2. Alot of research
1. Reads off slides

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Areas You Did Well
▪️  Voice is loud enough

Areas for Improvement
▪️ Some images can be bigger
▪️ Show us more different variety of content available in the media.
▪️ Change your text layout towards the left, easier to read.

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1.good clean slides
2.good voice projection
1.try to not read off slides at times
2. try to summarize the content for some slides as seem wordy

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Confident
Loud and clear
A bit unsure, maybe write a script beforehand
Can decrease the words

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+ good volume
+ LOVE THE ARTICLE
- not much of interacting

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+ confident
+ knows ur content well and is not reading off ur slides
- can summarise ur article
- increase font size

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1. interesting topic, relevant images, slides are clear and neat. shows understanding of topic, good flow.
2. abit wordy on the information. shld just highlight impt parts or summarise. shouldnt copy whole chunk of info.

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- loud and clear
- knows the topic well, interesting topic, informative

2.
- Fonts for the math video slides a little small
- maybe summaries your quote slide. or maybe put it into pointers
- maybe more audience engagement

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1. Confident and has good variation of tone
2. Knows the topic well

1. Words seem close together making it look chunky
2. Could highlight just the important parts of the quote

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- good volume and friendly disposition towards the audience
- seem like you know your content well :)
- good audience engagement
2.
- you have gr8 points but at times u might forget what to say, memorise some points perhaps?
- article slide a bit wordy maybe just include the summarized points and make the article bigger :)

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Areas You Did Well
▪️  Content is relatable
▪️ I love kpop too

Areas for Improvement
▪️ Volume can be louder
▪️ More points can be added into your slides, not too much points tho.
▪️ Show examples of kpop music, BTS or idle just sayin

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- interesting points
- points are straight to the point
- stutters a bit
- some points are a little messy

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1.clean slides
2.good use of video
1.can increase voice projection but ik u sick so gws
2.keep track of time

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areas done well
- good topic
- nice video hahah

areas to improve
- could be louder
- engage the audience more

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+has knowledge about topic
+Good use of pictures
-can be louder
-words cannot really be seen, increase font size ??

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+ gd content and have a logical flow in ur slides
+ not reading off slides, know what u are doing
- could've saved the video for the final presentation so ur trial one wouldn't be affected and u can maximise the time given
- can be louder

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1. Not reading off slides
2. Good
1. A lil soft

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+ nice topic
+ interacts with audiences
- too soft

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1. cute stickers !!! good inclusion of video.
2. too soft, slides can be more colourful. presentation was abit draggy and monotonous.

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1. Confident
2. Doesn't read off slides

1. I feel the slides lack a bit of content
2. could be more informative of the message your trying to drive forward

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- seems confident and faces the audience at most times
- good that you give personal experience
- good interaction with the audience
2.
- volume too soft pls talk louder :(
- rushed into topic a bit too quick, could you elaborate a bit more perhaps?

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kim namjoon kim seokjin min yoongi jung hoseok kim taehyung Jeon jungkook bts

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kim namjoon kim seokjin min yoongi jung hoseok kim taehyung Jeon jungkook bts

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+ makes good eye contact wth audience
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- clean slides
- relevant videos and creative visuals
- volume can be a little louder
- be more confident

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1.
- interesting topic
- reads off slides sometimes but not too bad plus good eye contact

2.
- should include audience engagement

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Areas You Did Well
▪️ Well research and informative

Areas for Improvement
▪️ Volume can be louder
▪️ Summarise content points

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- i like ur point on sustainable fasion, maybe elaborate a bit more? :)
- u have a pleasant disposition
- i like the part of the cable tie earrings (so interesting!)
2.
- try not to read off slides
- the plastic waste slide a bit too wordy
- talk a bit louder and dun stand behind table

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+simple clean slides; interesting topic
+ Great use of gifs( cute and funny)
- reads off slides quite often
- be more confident and could be a little louder; can have more audience engagement

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good
-intresting topic
- nice and nest slides

to improve
- can be louder
-readinf frm slides , eyecontact more :>

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-interesting topic, slides r noice
- can be louder, grab the attention of the audience more

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1.interesting topic
2.nice simple to understand slides
1. try to not read off slides too much
2.project voice more and have more confidence by looking at the audience more

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1.interesting topic
2.increase font size and maybe shorten the points

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1. Theres key takeaways for us
2. Interesting topic
1. Swings body too much
2. Can be louder

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1. interesting topic
2. try to maintain eye-contact with the audience instead of reading off the slides

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1. informative, interesting topic
2. slides can be more colourful, less wordy. can be louder. more audience engagement.

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1.
- interesting topic
- neat slides

2.
- Sentences could be put into points
-  Could be a little louder and more confident

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+ interesting topic
+ nice images n stu

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- slides are clean and nice
- nice use of reaction gifs
- volume is a little inconsistant, can be louder
- some slides are a little wordy, can summarise shorter

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- can be louder
- wordy, can summarise content

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+ interesting topic
+ very informative
- be louder and more confident
- can be more engaging

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1. Good bold font
2.Good background knowledge
3. Confident

1. Could project voice and articulate more
2. Swaying is  a bit distracting
3. Refers to slides and lacks audience engagement

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+ interesting topic ; talks something u can relate well to
+ very cute and funny, many body movements and voice varies throughout
- reads off screen quite often; some slides the words could be larger and the colour contrast
- can include more audience engagement

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+ cute slides
- reads off slide
- soft voice and draggy/lazy sounding

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1.good delivery to audience
2. nice slides
1. Make words contrast more and bigger
2. try to not read off slides

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1.
- so cute UWU
- i like ur article of dances relevance to society
- interesting video
2.
- try to give more personal experience
- try not to read off slide too much

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-knows content well, confident
- words can be Abit bigger,

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I like the presentation of the slides
Passionate about topic
Words are not clear, mayb increase font size change colour of words

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1. Hyped
2. Loud
3. Interesting slides

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1. good volume
2. font size too small, hard to read

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1. shows understanding of topic, interesting article and nice vid shown!!
2. volume varies throughout, refers to slides, sudden ending.

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+ knowledgeable on topic
+interesting

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+ interesting and good understanding of topic!
+good delivery
- some text too small

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1. Good voice projection
2. Articulates well

1. Font is small and colour choice makes it hard to read
2. Could use a different tone of voice ( doesnt seem 'serious')

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+ explains dance video well
+ good explanation
- font color against background is hard to read from the back
- can probably demonstrate dance types?

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- layout is guddd
- funny and entertaining
- "yah" abit often
- the flow of the presentation is a little sudden but overall okay

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+ good topic
+ very funny
- a bit hard to read bc of the colour contrast

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+ confident and know what are talking about
+
- font size can be better
- font colour can be brighter for a better contrast

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1.
- good to have audience engagement
-  interesting articles

2.
- fonts a bit small
- a bit soft

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+cool and interesting photos, slides content ; neat and clean
+ Voice level varies
-some slide the words could be larger
-reads from most slides, could be more confident :>

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Areas You Did Well
▪️ Humorous in explaining dance
▪️ Well layout slides

Areas for Improvement
▪️ Description text can be big bigger
▪️ Can show examples of different dances

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Areas You Did Well
▪️  Good talk talk
▪️ Well animated slides

Areas for Improvement
▪️ Enlarge your text
▪️ Enlarge the images (smol girl smol photo)
▪️Can talk about how global warming will affect us instead of the causes

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1. Loud enough
2 . Interesting points
1. A little shy

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1.
- slides are interesting, pleasent and easy to follow
- i like ur article of the bushfire!
2.
- try not to use singlish hehe
- could be a bit louder
- maybe to add in more facts that will be unknown to the audience (like fun facts)

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- relatable topic, confident
- abit too soft, looks at the slides abit too much

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1. interesting topic
2. simple and easy to understand
1.project voice abit louder
2.can make bigger

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2. try not to read off the slides too much and more audience engagement

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1. nicely designed slides, neat n clear, informative
2. can be abit louder, more audience engagement, could refer to slides lesser.

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1.
- Nice slides and good audience engagement
- Interesting topic

2.
- Some parts a bit sciency
- informative but point isn't very clear (for example: what are you trying to get across)

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good
- nice slides
-intresting , funny
improve
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- good info i like
- clean slides
- can be clearer about objectives
- engage the audience a lil more

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1. Font and slides were clear and easy to read
2.Good audience engagement

1. Very soft and doesn't seem confident
2. Could refer to slides less to seem more confident

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+ good neat slides
+ good topic
- a bit soft when its gg to end soon

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+ good and logical flow of content
+ confident
+ good balance of visual and words
- can be louder
- visual can be bigger
- can have more audience interaction

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+ clear and nice slides!
+ interesting topic
- can be more engaging
-can be louder and more confident!

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+ good comedic side
+ informative
- use of 'then after that'
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+loud and clear, very confident
+interesting content, great knowledge of what he is talking about
- font size could be bigger
- some slides are abit too wordy

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Areas You Did Well
▪️ Sugoi content
▪️ Sugoi photos

Areas for Improvement
▪️ Main points can be summarised and put in the slides, too much wordz.
▪️ Give too much information.

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1.
- good loud voice
- u think ur points are interesting, good facts
2.
- slides a bit too wordy
- u fumble a bit on what u are saying and u use 'er' (maybe try to learn to gather everything you want to say through a script)

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goood
- loud and clear
- dope topic
imprve
-words can b little bigger

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- grab audience attention, interesting topic
- small words BIGER pls, looks into slides alot

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1. Loud enough
2. Confident
1. Keeps saying " what uh what uh"
2. Too much "errrrr"

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Loud and clear
Passionate about the topic
-increase font size
-read off slide too much ??

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1. good knowledge of the topic
2. font size is a bit too small for people at the back to read

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+ interesting topic
+ good volume
- stutter a bit much

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+ interesting topic!
+ very knowledgeable on topic

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1. large fan base, interesting topic, good research and shows understanding of topic.
2. words can be bigger
stuttered.

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+ have good understanding of the topic!
+ good and clear content
- slides too wordy
-stuttered a bit

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+ interesting topic even tho I can't relate
+ confidence sister!
- wordy, can summarise, increase font size
- contrast in background can be better
- reading off slides on computer
- maybe is ur habit but maybe u can cut down on the amount of time u say "err" or "how to say ah" cos it seems like u are unsure