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She explained the story really good of what had happend.

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A lot of detail

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He did very good

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Gavin hey

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The story was well constructed

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Brianna
I  think it was written well.

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Making people cry😭😭

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The author gave really good  description.

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The author did ok stuff

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it was trash

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It was kinda sad when he was writing

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Mood
Detail
Feeling

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Making people cry 😭😭

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Yeet

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This story was emotional and really good with all the detail, and desciption.

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The story was sad but the author did a good job staying on track with the story i think the author could have put more detail because it makes everthing more interresting

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That the author told us everones names

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He made the story interesting

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Brianna
I think the author did very well on writting about how she felt and it ws kind of discripted.

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It was good but sad.

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The over all story was very well writen.I liked how the person was explaning it, how it made you feel like you were right there

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Made you think how lucky you actully are and good details

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Nothing

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Put lots of details

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I thinnk the athour made the transitions in the story really good i also think the aouther did an outstaning gob with the details.

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Things the author did well. Thing the author did well was explaining what was going on.

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The
put good details

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I like it❤️

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It was a good story amd good punctuation

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It was a good story.

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It was@

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It was just a good store

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The story was ritten well but it was vary sad

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It was made with alot of detail

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That he put  good punctuation marks and did not forget to put sume

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That he put  good punctuation marks and did not forget to put sume

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The details in the story

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Spelling
Detail
Feeling
The mode

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The story was a good writen story and it was emotional

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Put lots of details

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The one thing the author did good was, they had good punctuation

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For a sxith grader it was very well written and very sad but also a amazing story i loved it but sad 👍🏻

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It was good it made me remind me of my grandpa

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It was very sad with all the details in it mad more sad.

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The story was ritten well but it almost mand me cry. The spelling is good

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How they show back then and now and how they made you feel like you were there.

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It felt like it was to me it was so emotional and it was such a good story.

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One thing that the author did good was putting the good details in it like the part where they said, my whole body was shaking as i put the dirt over her casket

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The story was very very well written,and i like
how she made you think you where right next to her crying with her.