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Today i am going to explain (THAT) my hobby is soccer .I like to play as a team and help each other,   i am a defender and few beces(SOMETIMES)goalkeeper.  I (I WOULD  )like that more girls (CAN) play (FOOTBALL) but that's what ay .the truth is that the boys know it they take who is best  (????)
but i takr it for teamwork .When I grow up i want to continue playing and make a women's team and becom(BECOME)  the boss(THE CAPTAIN) so more girls open up to learn i want to be a footballer and that will be my future (?????)

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In my free time I like to read books and write short stories in a notebook that I have. Also I like to watch TV and play online videogames. I like to spend my free time with my mother in the garden playing cards.

In my free time I go to walk my dog with my mother and then we play some tables (BOARD)games. With my father I play arcade videogames and we also play a lot of soccer, basketball and we play to see who can hang the most from the bar.

I also call my friends to lot and we talk too much. Then almost always my mother scolds me but we had a great time. But I think that what I like the most in my free time is singing at the same time I reading, I can do this because I have a gift that I can sing and read at the same time, the truth is that I have a great time.

EXCELLENT JOB!

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I watch TV or Netflix, I play sports with my mother and brother, or sometimes I play with my dogs in the garden, I play with my friends or I play with my friends.

I watch Netflix with my family and sometimes horror or comedy, I play video games with my brother or help my mother (TO) cook.

GOOD JOB!

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My main hobby is basketball. I started to play basketball when I was four years old. I love playing basketball with my team. I always train basketball three times a week and I usually play a match on Saturdays. My favourite European team is FC Barcelona. My favourite North American team is Golden State Warriors. My favourite player is Stephen Curry.

My other hobby is the Formula 1. Last year was the first year I watch Formula 1 on TV. I like watching the races with my father. On Friday they do the free practise 1 and the free practise 2. On Saturday they do the free practise 3 and the Qualifying. On Sunday they do the race. My favourite motor-racing team is the Scuderia Ferrari. In my opinion, the best driver is Charles Leclerc.

EXCELLENT WORK!

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I like playing football with my friends.  My favourite team is Real Madrid.
I love watching football matches on TV.
I hate  going shopping.
I like listening to music and I (I) like playing PS4 with my friends.
I don't like playing basketball.

VERY GOOD JOB, BUT REMEMBER THAT "I" ALWAYS CAPITAL LETTER.

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In my free time I like to go to ballet classes, play with my friends and go to the beach. On sundays,my parents take me with my bike to ride it on the beach, in the evenings I play with my parrots(they are very lovely and active ,they eat too much). Some days I help my dad to go shopping for food at the supermarket, I love doing ballet at Saturday’s morning and playing with my birds in the evening.

My free time

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Hello, I am Kaoutar and today I will tell you about my free time. My free time starts at 4:30 pm when I finish the day at school. When I get home the first thing I do is shower and put on my pajamas. Then I do my homework, review what I did in class, in case I don't understand something, for the day I get that signature i ask my teacher and I prepare my backpack for the next day.

When my father arrives from work, which would be about 7:30, at dinner he would be ready and as he is already showering there then, he puts on his pajamas and while he puts on his pajamas, I take the opportunity to set the table, and when he arrives, the table would already be ready for dinner. By about eight we would have finished and the first thing I do is helping my mom to pick up the table, wash the dishes, sweep and scrub the floor.

When I finish helping my mom, as my dad has to get up at 3:00 AM to 8:15 we should go to the bedroom to sleep. I take the opportunity to take the computer for a quarter of an hour to explain my day in languages ​​that my father is teaching me, for example, German, French, Dutch which is similar to German and also English, but English is more special, because I have video calls on Saturdays and Sundays with my uncle who lives in England and we speak English. I'm finally going to sleep.

I hope you enjoyed
what I told you about my free time. Thank you for your attention!

By Kaoutar

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EXCELLENT WORK!

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I have some hobbies (HOBBIES) : reading, watching TV, doing my homework, playing... But my fabourite hobby is DRAWING. I like drawing and I enjoy doing it. I only need a pencil and a rubber.

I like to draw mithologic animals, for example faires, unicorns, nymphs, mermaids... I have a book of calligraphy so, I also "draw" different tipe of letters. I like it. Somtimes I draw booksand film characters, too. I love drawing.

EXCELLENT WORK !

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Firstly,I'd like to say that my favourite sport is football so I play football on wednesday and on fridays one hour and a half. I started to play football when I was 3 years old so I have much experience now.

I don't need many things to practice this sport,I only have to wear club Torredembarra's sportswear this year it's being a bit boring because there aren't football matches because of the covid pandemic. Finally, I will practice this sport all de time because I love it.

PAY ATTENTION AT THE MISTAKES.
YOUR WORK IS GOOD, BUT REMEMBER : DAYS OF THE WEEK ALWAYS CAPITAL LETTER.

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In my free time I like playing computer games, watching TV, reading a book...
But my favourite hobby without any doubt is playing football.
Also there are other things that I would like to do  is going fishing, playing golf [because this is very expensive.]

Besides too, there are the things that you don't like to do and  they are:
Lay the table, fold up and extend the clothes, etc
Well ,  this is my free time.
See you!
Víctor Martin

GOOD JOB, VÍCTOR! YOU'RE WORKING HARD!