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Finding a good area to put quotes. Everything, its horrible.

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making it longer

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the transitions and I think I did

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I could improve on my run on sentences because I love to right really descriptive sentences . And Im good a describing, and creating imagery for the reader.

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I think I need to work on describe the setting and environment of my narrative better.

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I probably need to show and not tell and make it more suspenseful and dramatic.

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An areas of my narrative I feel I need ore revision on is on my 2 paragraph because I think I repeated "and" & "I" too much. I really like my introduction because its gets the reader thinking.

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i should probably finish my narrative and work on some more character development.

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I feel that my narrative is pretty decent aside from adding more description but other than that and a better conclusion its good. Its boring and its basic like omg this life changing experience so effective but it really wasn't and I'm just trying to not fail this class

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The details/body paragraphs.
My opening/introduction

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I think I could improve more on  introducing the character and add more literary devices

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I feel like th🅰️t I needed to h🅰️ve 🅱️etter voc🆎ul🅰️ry.

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I need to work on the legenth of the narrative and not repeating myself and saying the same thing.

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I need to work on the story telling (telling it more like a story than an essay)
I am strong in the use of describing the scene and imagery

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I feel like it could be longer. I think I did well writing the dialogue even though there wasn't much. I also believe I wrote the conflict well especially with the emotion.

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I think the areas that could be improved is adding more dialogue in my piece. I could also work on the ending a bout more. I think the beginning is really strong and that the setting is clear.

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I think what I call my characters is confusing to the reader. I don't really feel strongly about any piece of my narrative because it's not my best work

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I could use some more imagery and I think the dialogue could be better, but the plot and characters are good.

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I think I could add more imagery, but I also introduce the characters as soon as the story starts. I should also add mare description in my main character's actions.

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My narrative itself is so boring. I hate the topic and I feel like no one will be interested in it. I don't really like any of it.

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What areas of your narrative do you feel need more revision or development?

What areas do you feel strongly about?

Be specific (dialogue, use of imagery, setting, plot, action, exposition, etc...)