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The  person I admire the most is Kris Wu. Kris Wu is a Mainland Chinese star. He is very handsome. He likes to play his own music, and his music affects all of Asia. He was a former member of South Korea's EXO, and during the summer he was selected as a producer of hip-hop in China. He is also a fashion trendsetter. He has been working very hard, so he has made today's achievements. He is also good at basketball. In 2017 he went to NBA All Star Game. Wasn't that amazing?

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The man I admired the most is my dad. He is not very tall nor thin, he looks just like a common person in the crowd, but he is the man I have been admiring the most. He is the vice-president of Carat China now.

He doesn’t have special talents in most of the things, but communication. He works harder than any one else. It is very rare to see him coming back home before 11 P.M. He got on a business travel once or twice every month in the last few years. He knows a lot about alcohols and steaks, and he really likes to cook American food for us. Though he doesn't usually work at home, I know he works really hard.

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The person I admire the most is my father. He is the person who is closest to me. Although he is always out on business, his concern for me and his family continues unabated. I think he is the most powerful man in the world. As my mother is a housewife, the family’s financial resources are being borne by my father. He also seems to be my friend. We have many common hobbies, such as music, basketball, travelling and so on. If I have something happy or unhappy, I can share with my father. He is the best listener in the world. In general, my father is the person I admire the most in the world.

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The person I admire most is Lucifer·NB·Waltz.

He is one of the best E-sport players in this world.

He started his E-sport Journey when he was 18.

At that time, E-sport was not like now.

They didn’t have Training Base, and got the lowest wage.

They trained themselves in Internet Cafes which is the cheapest in their city.

They lived there and sometimes eat nothing just for get a better rank in the E-sport competition.

He trained everyday every time for his dream. To help China win the championship.

But finally, he failed, his team get second ranking in the world cup.

He didn’t cry at first, he just comfort his team mate.

However, he cried at last.

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The person I admire most is Lucifer·NB·Waltz.

He is one of the best E-sport players in this world.

He started his E-sport Journey when he was 18.

At that time, E-sport was not like now.

They didn’t have Training Base, and got the lowest wage.

They trained themselves in Internet Cafes which is the cheapest in their city.

They lived there and sometimes eat nothing just for get a better rank in the E-sport competition.

He trained everyday every time for his dream. To help China win the championship.

But finally, he failed, his team get second ranking in the world cup.

He didn’t cry at first, he just comfort his team mate.

However, he cried at last.

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Since I was a little girl, I’ve adored my dad. My dad is knowledgeable in Chinese literature, he writes me poems on my every birthday, which express his deep love and expectation to me.

Before every Spring Festival, relatives all come to my dad to ask him to write spring couplets for them. My dad is also good at making up stories. He told me bedtime stories every night when I was very young, and the stories contained some good characters and good habits he hoped I could form. What’s more, my dad is a brave man as well. He always protects me from things I am afraid of. Once a snake glared at me for a long time in a park. I was scared but I couldn't move. I shouted to my dad in fear. He ran to me, hit the snake with a stick and I was saved!

My father is always there to protect me. He is my hero, the person I admire the most.

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The person I admire the most is my mom. she is very
knowledgeable. When I'm in trouble, she always helps me get out of all the things that worry me and her advice is always very valuable. She works very hard. Even when she got sick, she still went to work because she is really responsible for her job.

This is what I have learned from her. I remember one day I did my homework very fast so that I could go and play basketball with my friends. I made a lot of careless mistakes in my homework. This time my mom said to me, “Everything needs to be taken seriously.‘’ So she is such a  mentor in my life and I really admire her very much.

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The person I admire the most is my father. Since I was a little girl, my father has taught me a lot of things that are very important in my life， such as politeness，seriousness and striving. Everyday i can feel his love and I am so happy. When I grow up, he helps me with my study. He is so knowledgeable and I want to be a person like him. My father also likes sports. Every week he always goes the the stadium to play basketball and badminton. He is good at these. My father is also good at cooking. He often cooks some delicious food for me and I like it very much.
This is my father, a perfect man in my mind. I love him and he is my role model.

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The person I admire best is my brother. He is very erudite and clever, he can do every things. He is good at photography,  the picture he shoot always very beautiful, I can't do that at all.
My brother is good at basketball, he always teach me his skill.He is very strong and agile, he can do the best work.He is a good player.
When I need assistance, my brother will help me. When I have doubt, he will tell me the answer. He is the best brother. My brother is the person I admire the most, he is my proud brother.

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The person I admire the most is my brother. He is interested in basketball . His location is the center.

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The people I admire the most is my best friend. Her name is Icy. She is one of the most important people in my life. She’s a helpful, kind and positive girl.

She is good at studying and always gives me a hand on my study. One time, I was confused about a new section on math. She taught me again and again in patience and helped me to figure out every single problem on my homework. She encouraged me to study hard and to try more problems.

Icy loves animals. She has two dogs at home. One’s name is Hope and the other is Happy. She volunteers in an animal shelter to take care of dogs and cats for two years. She tried her best to help them find a new home.

She’s the person I really admire. I can always learn something from her and improve myself.

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Well... emmm... First i want to apologize to my Primary School English teacher. I'm still making the mistake which i made in Primary School. Well... Actually my writing is more likely a speaking. So i have to change it into a right way.

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关于这次的小作文呢， 真的发现了很多的问题，很多简单的日常用语都出现了很多错误，现在如果没有意识甚至不去改正的话，可能会被笑话死吧。 就比如最基本的时态，从头到尾一件事情我居然用了不同的好几个时态，老师帮忙讲解改正之后才发现自己写的真的是乱七八糟的。希望啊自己以后写的时候要多多注意，低级错误不要犯，要越来越好才行，不然写多少篇作文也都是乱七八糟的吧

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个人觉得自己的语法并不是很好，初中的英语底子不扎实，所以不会运用。 这次的写作，隐藏着许多问题，平常都不会太在意，这次老师提出来之后，发现了这些问题，而且以后会注意这些错误， 尽量不再发生这样的愚蠢错误。

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这次练习中语法错误有很多，结构也不对，不注意的话根本不会发现，以后一定要注意细节问题。

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这次小作文中总有这些那些的小错误体现了出来。像语法、句子结构等都应该更加完善，多多注意，争取做到更好，语法什么的最好不要再错了。另外在写内容的时候所花时间比较长，从以后有空要多看看范文，增加点题材并记记好的范句，多练习练习。

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这次练习我的语法错误的地方有许多 不该有的问题都犯了 如果没有老师的纠正 肯定不会发现自己的口语有那么多的错误 以后写完练习 我会认真的检查自己的语法 不让这些小错误又继续发生的 希望我下次的练习能因为这次的练习犯下的错误所改正 尽量不再粗心了。

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我认为，这次的作文写的不是很好。发现了许多的语法错误，以及一些口语化的chinglish。这显然是不好的。通过这次的作文，我明白了做任何东西都不能大意，要认真对待。写完作文以后要仔细检查，确认是否有语法和其他的小错误。所以，我希望能够改进自己的写作技巧，下次写的好一点。

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有一些语法错误 内容也很一般 单词量还是太小了 看起来像小学生作文 以后注意语法 并尽量用一些准确的单词啦

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I don't know what I really got wrong