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You should try to find key points and not read straight off power point

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Very nice presentation but would recommend not just reading off your project and interact with the audience

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You read very loudly and enthusiastically but next time try not to read straight off of the power point🖤💙

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You should look up and face the class. You shouldn't read it word for word try to summarize the big points and say additional information that you know about, but didn't put on a slide.

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Don’t read straight form the slide just try to sum up the most important parts on the slide.
Also look up at the audience so we can see your confident in your information. Great information though and very well organized.

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Don't speak directly to your iPad ! Just sum up the slides and look up to the beautiful audience. It would help to speak a bit slower. Learned more about transgender prisoners and don't be nervous !:)

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You have a lot of good information and examples on your presentation. Your slides and facts are very well organized .

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You shouldn't be looking at the PowerPoint the entire time and you shouldn't just read the slides, give more information than that on the slides. Other than that, though, you had a lot of information, which was good.

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1) great presentation but try not to read directly from the slide. Look at the crowd more
2) try speaking a bit louder and more confident
3)add some pictures

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Very good information, but you should try not reading off the slide and input your own opinion into your slide

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The information was well written.  Try summarizing slides instead of reading all of it. Overall you did a Good job!

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You need to summarize all the information on your slides when you're speaking and talk slower so the audience can take in all the information and understand it. Your presentation was very informative

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The project is good but the presentation would be better if you spoke to us and not your iPad and summarized what was on the PowerPoint not just reading it directly off the slides.

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I like how you presented your statics and research.

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Sierra~ Try to speak up more when presenting and portray your facts and beliefs about your topic. Try to not read directly off of the power point and make certain parts of interest to focus on.

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I love how you feel very strongly about this topic. I think you need to talk a little bit louder and raise your head so your voice can Project.  Very good job on your research.

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Talk a little louder and a little slower

Look and Talk towards the audience a little more.

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-Try not to look at your notes as much, and speak louder.
-You added a lot of laws, which was good.

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Face us.
Speak slower.
I like your pp layout.
Look up from your notes more.
Don't read just from the slides. Put it in your own words.
Well prepared.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY! 🎉

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Very good presentation style and astetically pleasing to see. Try not to have your back to the audience because it blocks your words, also try to have a louder volume when speaking. Try to not read directly from the screen.

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-Have more confidence when presenting
-you were looking at your iPad a lot, make sure to regularly address your audience
-I like the layout of the pp and how much research you did shows you were invested in the project.

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-You shouldn't read your slide word-for-word and moreso just summarize your ideas
-Look more at us and less at your iPad
-Pronounced "sis-gendered"
-Youn had a lot of important, good information on your slide to back up your position
-Don't speak so monotonely

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• I really like how clear your voice is when your talking.
• I like how you picked this topic.
• Very detailed information
• The layout of your PowerPoint is really good.

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- I think you should face the audience when you are speaking and speak a bit louder
-I think you should also provide a bit of additional information from what's just on your slides.
-I do like that you organized your slides by posing a question and then answering it with that you discovered from reases

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I like how you were well prepared to present right away. I like the formatting of your presentation, it is very neat and organized.  Your voice is very loud and can be heard though the room!

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HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
- Speak louder
-I like that there are different examples
- Use bullet points
- You have a lot of information on your slides
-Bringing up mental illness shows that there is internal conflict when denied the prison wanted