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I really agree because who wants to stare at somone's head and we should get to stand by are friends.

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you had me at the title

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I agree because who wants to stare at some ones head I love your story

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I totally agree that we should not have to walk in lines because as you said it can get so boring just to stare at the back of peoples heads while you either go from class to class or from coming inside from recess. Your story really hooked my attention when I read the first sentence of the essay and then it just got better and better the more i read your essay. I think the school should consider your opinion that  we should not have to walk in lines at school any more. finally I think that your sentences were very clear that we should no longer have to walk in lines at this school

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Your story was amazing but you forgot to indent on your 5th paragraph. What I liked was you did correct spelling and you caught the readers attention

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I really agree with you we shoulden't walk in striaght lines.Your story was great!

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Your story is very agree able.Your reasons was were very conceiving.I agree with you that we should not have to walk in straight lines.I am not trying to be rude but I kinda think that you should think of a different reason then we can talk till we get inside.The reason I think that is because we kinda already talk when we are coming in.But over all your story is a great story.I hope you will keep writing your awesome stories.Your best friend Ayla.

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cool story because i really like it it was amazing.

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cool story i wish i could make slime.

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I like the part ware you said what is his problem and how did you ever get that slim out of your hair I cant get it of with out getting on my shoos great story.

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I think this is a wonderful story!!! You have a great talent of writing story's.

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this is a very good story l wish I could write as good story as you did. I think it is the best story i have ever

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This was a great story I liked the part were you shrank the words it made me under stand that you were kinda whispering that

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That was a HILARIOUS story. I liked how you change the size and the color of the text that really made the text stand out if I had to judge  I would say 10/10 that was really COMEDY GOLD

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I like when you said it's not ok it is Amazing,Awesome that was funny

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'I like when you said " OK,OK whats his problem." Now THAT'S funny!!!