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My name is Julia .I am 20 years old. I live in Lima. It is a (small or big) city.

I am an/a teacher. I study English. I live with my (mother and father).  My mother's name is Maria. She is a/an nurse. My father's name is Mario.  He is a/an lawyer. I have a pet. It is a dog.  My pet's name is Peluche.

I don’t have a pet.

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My name is David .I am 39 years old. I live in Medelli. It is a big city.

I am an/a Enginner (an enginner) . I study English. I live with (my mother). My mother's name is Nelly. She is a seamstress. My father's name is Emiro. He is a mechanic. I don"t a pet.

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My name is Diego. I am 14 years old. I live in Lima. It is a big city.

I am a student. I study English. I live with my mother and father. My mother's name is Roxana. She is a civil engineering (engineer). My father's name is Victor. He is a civil engineering (engineer). . I have a pet. It is a dog. My pet's name is Mia.

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My name is Cristina. I am 62 years old. I live in Huacho. It is a big city. I AM(am) a Psychologist, but now I work as a housewife. I study English. I live with my husband. My husband 's name is Gene. Hi is a(ya no colocar el articulo "a", por el sentido de la oración) retired.

I don't have a pet.

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My name is alixon .I am 14 years old. I live in Colombia.

I am an/a student (solo colocar un articulo "a"). I study English. I live with my (mother and father). My mother's name is Deiva. She is a/an (solo colocar un articulo "an"). economics. My father's name is Dany. He is a/an (solo colocar un articulo "an").agriculture. I have a pet. It is a dog. My pet's name is Sabrina

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My name is shannel,I am 29 years old

I live in Cusco.It is a small City.

I am a seller.I study english.

I live With my Mother and brother.My Mother's name is juana aydee (mayúsculas en los nombre propios). She is a teacher.

My brother's name is Roger fernando

He is a student.

I have a pet's. (como mencionan 2 mascotas la oracion correcta es "I have two pets). They is (A cat and a dog)cat and dog.

My pet's (recuerda que como mencionas dos mascotas la palabra pet debe ir el plural "pets" y como estas usando el apostrofe para indicar sus nombres seria "pets' names" ) name's is are Tiger and osiris

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My name is Yolanda. I am 53 years old.

 I live in Lima. It is a big city.

I am an accountant.

I study English. I live with my mother and father.

  My mother's name is Dionisia. She is a teacher.

 My father's name is Leandro.  He is a lawyer.

I have a pet. It is a dog.  My pet's name is Maya


Great job!

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My name is lia (mayúscula en los nombres propios).I am 20 years old. I live in cusco. It is a (small or big) elegir solo un adjetivo city.

I am an/a teacher (usar solo el articulo "a"). I study English. I live with my (mother and father). My mother's name is Rosa . She is a/an(usar solo el articulo "a")housewife My father's name is Antonio. He is a/an usar solo el articulo "a")teacher. I have a pet. It is a cat. My pet's name is ayca.

I don’t have a pet. (ya no colocar esta oración ya que arriba, afirmas tener una mascota)

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Hi! my name is Luis Martinez. I am 20 years old. I live in Colombia, Bogotá. I am a nurse I study English and health administration. I live with my Mother and father, my mother's name is María Ospino, she is an various trades, my father's name is Álvaro Martínez, he is a lawyer, I have a pet. It is a dog, my pet's name is moon

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My name is Rosa. I am 59 years old. I live in Lima Peru.it is a big city.Iam a nurse. I study englis (english Basic 1) Basico 1.I live with my mother and my father. my mother' s name is Ria she is a teacher ,My father's name is Marcos he is a (utilizar el articulo "an")engineer,I don't have any pets

(english Basic 1)

Feedback: Recuerda utilizar los puntos seguidos o apartes para separar algunas oraciones.

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My name is Raquel ,last name Sosa.I am 20 years old. I live in Puno. It is a (small and beautiful) elegir solo un adjetivo city.

I am (recuerda si estas utilizando un verb to be, al costado no puedes usar un verbo de acción como "study") study English. I live with my (sister and brother). My Siste(sister's) name is Mary. She is study (studies) Adminstrator business. My brother name is Mayker. He is a mechanic.

I have a pet. It is a dog. My pet's name is tobi.

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My name is Carlos. I am 20 years old. I live in Lima. It is a big city.

I study English. I live with my mother and father.  My mother's name is Rocio. She is a nurse. My father's name is Jose.  He is a (an) Engineer. I have a pet. It is a dog.

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My name is karolayne . I am 25 Years old . I Live in Arequipa .it is big city peru . I am student. I Study English . I Live witch (with) my father and mother . My fathers (father's) name is ruben, he is a(an) engineer .

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My name is Maycol, I am 32 years old, for work reasons I live in Guyana.

Guyana is a great country, with a very beautiful culture, I am an Industrial Engineer, I work in the city of Georgetown.

For now (At the moment)I am studying English. I have two little dogs that are Kili and Glendon.

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My name is Jaime. I am 40 years old. I live in Cusco. It is a big city. I am student. i study English. I live with my (brother) . My brother's name is Alex. He is enginner. M y mother's name is Vicenta. She is a farmer. I have a pet. It is cat. My pet's is Mihino

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My name is Nubia Esperanza I am 35 years old I live in Bogota Colombia, I work in a kindergarten, I also study foreign languages with emphasis in English, I live with my family, my mom's name is Maria, she is a teacher, my dad's name is Pedro, he is a veterinarian, I have pets, one dog and two cats, my dog is called Bongo and my cats are called chimuela and Paulito.

Feedback: Las ideas son claras pero te recomiendo usar puntos seguidos o apartes para separar una idea de la otra.

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My name is  Jesús . I am 34 years old . I live in  pichanaki - Junín  . It is a small city .

I am a mechanical technician . I study English . I live with my father and mother . My mother mame is  Julia . She is a housewife . My father name is Jesus . He is an farmer .
I don't have a pet.

Great job!