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Diction: The use of the words "treacherous" and "unattainable"

Allusion: Quotes from famous shows or people (Hannah Montana and Kelly Clarkson)

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Uses elevated language to emphasize and support specific sentences and claims.

Uses personal experience as evidence to support her defensible thesis.

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The writer uses an anecdote of soccer from her childhood to illustrate her point and relate to her audience.

The writer also uses allusion to pop culture in order to further connect with her audience

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Transition words: the use of however was used in two paragraphs to change the topic of each paragraph

cumulative sentence: when the writer talks about how perfection is used in a positive and negative tone it's not just used for one specific subject

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Uses elevated language to emphasize the claims and evidence that she is using to support the claims that they are making.

The writer uses allusions by having quotes from famous/well known people in the text which supports the claims that she is making

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-personal experience to support her thesis

"I scored 2 goals....."

-writer uses allusion with quotes from famous people/TV shows

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Juxtaposes the difference in perfection between a Fashion designers and a Doctor.

Defends the value of striving for perfection through real life examples such as Thomas Edison and Space X explorer.

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The writer uses real life scenarios as examples to support their claim. "If no value was placed upon striving for perfection, doctors would have no need to go through years of schooling and residency to ensure they are prepared to perform."

Uses transitions words and has a topic sentence for each paragraph regarding to the prompt.

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Uses emphatic language to emphasize her claim and the evidence she uses to support it.

The writer uses Allusions by using famous quotes from famous people/TV Shows.

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The Author presents a defensible thesis "The value of perfection is none because it simply doesn't exist".

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reformed argument: provides apporirateand relevent evidences examples like using how doctors and fashions designers need to strive for perfection.
Uses transitons between each paragraph.

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Elevated language was used such as "Arrogance" "Connotation" "Unenviable"

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Effective use of a metaphor "Bombarded with resources".

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Substitution based on word choice.

"..concept that several people strive for.."

"..the value of perfection is none.."

Good use of counterargument

"Negative when regarding comparison in a negative light or positive when praising someone for other extravagant work"