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How to Participate

1. Post your essay topic - Vultures or Feral Swine

2. Help your classmates - Read other students’ topics and suggest thesis statements or hooks in the comments

3. Build together - Use the collaborative feedback to develop strong essay foundations

Remember: A good thesis statement makes a clear argument, and a strong hook grabs the reader’s attention!

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Reminder: A thesis statement should clearly present your main argument or point of view on a topic. A hook sentence should grab the reader's attention.

Example Thesis: "Although vultures are often seen as pests, they play a crucial role in maintaining ecosystem balance by disposing of carcasses, thereby preventing the spread of disease."

Example Hook: "In a world without nature’s clean-up crew, the balance and health of our ecosystems would face dire consequences."

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My essay is about vultures and how they are harmful to agirculture 

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My essay is about vultures and how they are harmful to agirculture 

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Sounds like the most fun option.

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essays about vultures

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super bowls are not easy to win it cost getting star players, veterans and rookies that are good.

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becuase it is causing stress to people trying to do it.

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Vultures sounds interesting and could hook readers.

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homework is not good for teens because it causes stress anxiety and sometimes cause teen to lose sleep do to the amount of work and having to stay up late trying to complete the assignment

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Because they can kill any prey they want.

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games we all know them and love them they are a key for joy or rage depending on how you play image this your mom got you a new game lets say minecraft and when you start you do everything build a massive base xp farms etc but after 2 weeks you feel empty and you stop playing due to the feeling of you did everything and thats the "2 week phase" everyone goes through this in some way even outside of games but it is mostly seen in games this 2wp (short for 2 week phase) is when you think you did everything there is to do in a game leaving much more to desired but the way to fix it take time don't rush to finish the game take time to enjoy it.