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AAS Reflective journal Entry 5 Feedback - Rotimi Muhammed Akinwumi

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AAS Reflective journal Entry 4 Feedback - Rotimi Muhammed Akinwumi

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AAS Reflective journal Entry 3 Feedback - Rotimi Muhammed Akinwumi

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Generally a good reflection. More focus on the plan and the outcomes of the plan would make it even better.

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AAS Reflective journal Entry 3 Feedback - Rotimi Muhammed Akinwumi

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DESCRIPTION:
In fulfilling my task on my research project essay, i made sure i took my time to understand what i am being asked write, in other not to deviate or be confused. I then structured the essay based on lessons i have been lectured on in the academic style and made sure I maintained academic language.
ANALYSIS:
At this stage I'll rate my organisation on a scale of 1 to 10: 6, because i still have difficulties in organizing my thesis and introduction paragraph.
My essay question was developed based on common issues around me therefore, i think i have fairly developed it well.
In addressing the essay question, i made sure I gave all explanation about what the essay, gave definitions and all necessary informations needed for an average reader to understand what I have written.
IDENTIFICATION
I did very good in the body structure and concluding part of the essay but for the introduction paragraph ive really struggled to give a good thesis and infuse an outline and i think this is because i am dealing with a problem-solution essay.
ACTION PLAN:
I think i can improve on the areas where i am having problem by having some tutorials with my tutor so i can gather ideas on  what best for my essay.  And i have taken the step of notifying my tutor of my need for tutorials.
EVALUATION:
i think if i follow my action plan diligently, I'll be able to develop an excellent essay.
I think asking for help on whatever I'm stucked in my future area of study will help me positively and will also have same effect in other areas of my life.

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Reflective Journal Entry 2 - My Academic Writing

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Reflective Journal Entry 2 - My Academic Writing

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Dear Rotimi,

Thank you for sharing your second journal entry with me.

I am attaching your feedback here.

Best wishes,

Heather

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AAS Reflective journal Entry 2 Rotimi Marksheet

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Thank you for sharing your first reflective journal entry with me. Here is your feedback. Best wishes, Heather 

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Thank you for sharing your first reflective journal entry with me. Here is your feedback. Best wishes, Heather 

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AAS Reflective journal Entry 1 Rotimi Marksheet