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Anders, M. "Backpack Basics" Get Geared Up, 2015

Mark Anders summarizes the basics of backpacking.

For example, he talks abut one aspect of this, the carrying capacity.
In is section, he explains how bigger is not always better and that you should prepare for the type of trip you are going on so that you are prepared.

His information can help us understand how to meet the needs of the users of the backpacks. We can take information about waist and torso length and help make the backs I better.

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Hullinger, J. "Metal as light as Styrofoam and as strong as titanium — and 5 other amazing new materials, "http://theweek .com/articles/582787/metal-light-styrofoam-strong-titanium--5-other-amazing-new-materials, 2017

My problem is to come up with a  sturdy but light material that will make the backpack durable and easy to handle.

There are three main materials that could possibly fulfill this purpose and solve the purpose. They are Graphene, Self-Healing Plastic, Data-Storing Glass, Permeable Concrete, and Vantablack.

Nicol, W. "A material supreme: How graphene will shape the world of tomorrow"https://www.digitaltrends.com/cool-tech/what-is-graphene-and-how-will-it-shape-the-future-of-tech/ 3.23.18
Graphene is probably the most reliable, helpful, durable, and strong material that fits all of the needs of the backpack. It is waterproof, stronger than steel, flexible, durable, versatile, and is two dimensional. This material would help the backpack become completely waterproof.

It could also be used for filtering unneeded microorganisms out of water. The material is also very accesible, comfortable, light, and easily manipulated.There is another kind of graphene that is not waterproof. This feature will filter the water through it but take out all of the dangerous toxins. That is because that type of graphene is completely resistant to any other fluid or particle.

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What material should i consider.
Understand -
What materials are out there
Apply -
What would make it flexible
Analyze -
How much can the strongest material take
Evaluate -
How do you know when you have the right material
Create -
How could I use this material for other parts of the backpack.

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The VentaX3 is a completely waterproof backpack with an outstanding water filtering system and many amazing features.
Some of these features include:
Built in Flashlight
Filtering System
Comfortable Padding
Waterproof Exterior
GoPro Holder
This backpack is perfect for wet and rainy environments. It allows individuals to cope with the challenges of traveling through them. On the right strap of the backpack, there are features like the built in flashlight and a GoPro holder. The backpack is made out of a material that is completely water resistant. There is an incredible filtering system that is made out of a material that only water can get through. This way, you can get filtered water. There is also a Life Straw connected to the container that the filtered water goes into. The user of the backpack can quickly and easily access the water coming from the water container. One feature of the water container is its ability to keep water hot or cold for many hours, long after any other water package would last. It is based on the principle of the Hydroflask.

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Revise your paragraph in the following ways:

Make sure you state the name of the backpack and the problem being solved in the first sentence.

Word choice selection needs improvement (wider variety of general vocab)

Clearer explanation on how your design improves or solves a specific problem.

More transitions, overall flow, and clarity