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- It needs a stronger sense of pulse overall.
- I need more character in the line before the theme.
- I don't have enough power at the end of the arpeggios.
- The sforzandos need to be more pronounced.
- I need to use more bow hair overall!!

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- There's a persistent rhythm issue in the theme -- it's not exact in the groups of three notes at this tempo.
There needs to be more connection between bows throughout, but especially in the arpeggios up.
- There's also a glaring rhythm issue I'm noticing in the line before the theme. I'm holding the dotted quarters for too long.
- I need more dynamic contrast in the same section.

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- My opening dynamic was NOT pianissimo!
- I need clarity when the theme happens (in both octaves).
- My fingering looks uncomfortable in the section just before that -- I'm sure it feels that way too but I haven't noticed it yet.
- Needs more rit. at the very end.
- The up arpeggios are out of tune.
- I should take two bows for the high note at the end.