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Dear Tommy, you did a good job!

Your pronunciation and fluency are much better!
Very good for the reasons, next time please provide a little bit more of detail. Great tips also. Next time please in the same way you did an introduction you need to make a stronger closing!!

Keep up the good job! DL

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1. Greeting and introduction:
Hello to everyone, thank you for being here. Today I will be talking
about waterpower and the ways we can save it.
2. Give two reasons why we should save water:
You might be wondering why water could save the world, well there are two
main reasons I would like to share with you:
1.  shere(share) water whit with living things
2. less water will be wasted
because is so important water to the animal and plants and if we dont haveplants not have oxigien
3. Give two ideas about how to save water:
So, if we want to be part of the change we could:
1.   in the moment of
brushing teeth
2.
4. Closing and conclusion:
Message to raise awareness: In conclusion I invite you to be part of the change
You want to see in the world. Let`s save the water together.    https://voca.ro/168QYnZ04v0B

FEEDBACK:
Dear Martin you did a great job! I have some comments for you:
1. the reasons you are providing can be mixed to create just one. Example: because everyone needs water, if we share it with other living things less water will be wasted.
2 You gave just one tip to save water and you were supposed to write two tips.
3. you could add something new to the closing sentence.
4. Your speech have been improving a lot, great! Keep the good job up.

I know you will do it better each time! DD

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1. Greeting and introduction:
Hello to everyone, thank you for being here. Today I will be talking
about waterpower and the ways we can save it.
2. Give two reasons why we should save water:
You might be wondering why water could save the world, well there are two
main reasons I would like to share with you:
1.Because if we don't save the water we can not live
2. because is so important to the animals and plants, and if we don't have plants we can not have oxygen so we can die.
3. Give two ideas about how to save water:
So, if we want to be part of the change we could:
1.  Do not waste and put it to good use
2.  no using a lot of time  the water because we need them to have live.
4. Closing and conclusion:
Message to raise awareness: In conclusion I invite you to be part of the change
You want to see in the world. Let`s save the water together.

FEEDBACK

Dear Vale, you did a great job!

Your pronunciation is great. There were some titles that were not necessary to be read, next time practice it and make decisions about what should be said.

Great examples, next time provide more details and examples about what does it mean good use and enough time.

Finally, I would like you to add a little bit more on the closing sentence so that it can be more powerful.

Great job, keep it up! DL

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hello every one .
Greetings ladies and gentleman today i´ ll tell you;
why should we save water.

So i´ ll give you two reasons to save water
live happy.
1.  Without water we could die.
2.  Some people don´ t have water and we are so
lucky to have it but they don´ t.

So, if we want to save water we should
do this:

1.  Close the sink while brushing your teeth.
2.  Take shorter showers.
3. Collect cold water on a bucket for the plants.

My message for you: Save water and help all
the oceans, rivers, lakes, etc.

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hello every one .
Greetings ladies and gentleman today i´ ll tell you;
why should we save water.

So i´ ll give you two reasons to save water
live happy.
1.  Without water we could die.
2.  Some people don´ t have water and we are so
lucky to have it but they don´ t.

So, if we want to save water we should
do this:

1.  Close the sink while brushing your teeth.
2.  Take shorter showers.
3. Collect cold water on a bucket for the plants.

My message for you: Save water and help all
the oceans, rivers, lakes, etc.

https://voca.ro/1cgsNNGFyTmc

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Your script is incredible well organized and structured. Your intonation is awesome, it is engaging. Be careful with pronunciation and following punctuation marks, so that you can do the appropriate pauses.

Keep up the great job! DL

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Dear Sofi, you did an outstanding job! you were able to provide reasons why we should save the water. You were also able to give great tips about how to save it! Great closing sentence, I could feel the emotions there hahaha. The only comment I have is:
PLEASE do not do the team work alone. It is okay that you are the leader of the group but you do not need to di everything and then just send the work completed. Be careful with that.

Great job! DL

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Hello to everyone, thank you for being here. Today I will be talking
about waterpower and the ways we can save it.
2. Give two reasons why we should save water:
You might be wondering why water could save the world, well there are two
main reasons I would like to share with you:
1.  Because water provide energy to all living tings.
2.  Les water will be wasted
3. Give two ideas about how to save water:
So, if we want to be part of the change we could:
1.  Many laws help to save the water
2.  The water will be more are clean
4. Closing and conclusion:
Message to raise awareness: In conclusion I invite you to be part of the change
You want to see in the world. Let`s save the water together.    https://voca.ro/1dZ8v5MOFbYL

FEEDBACK:

Dear Martin you did a good job! It was necessary to receive an extra help when writing the script and that is great, but you should practice more, because the idea was to speak more about your understanding on the reasons and proposals you made. We will keep working on pronunciation and fluency.

Good job! DD

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1. Greeting and introduction:
Hello to everyone, thank you for being here. Today I will be talking
about waterpower and the ways we can save it.
2. Give two reasons why we should save water:
You might be wondering why water could save the world, well there are two
main reasons I would like to share with you:
1._______if we no save water we can die
2._________we can't eat fish

3. Give two ideas about how to save water:
So, if we want to be part of the change we could:
1.dont use so much water
2.use clean fonts
4. Closing and conclusion:
Message to raise awareness: In conclusion I invite you to be part of the change
You want to see in the world. Let`s save the water together.
https://voca.ro/123vmAelmvvO

FEEDBACK:

Dear Dani, I am so happy you have been improving a lot! Now you are speaking more therefore your pronunciation is better as well as your fluency.

About the reasons and the ideas to save the water, I would recommend to provide more detailed information to support your ideas, provide examples so that the audience can better understand.

Finally, please do not forget using because in your answers and next time include a sentence for the closure.

Keep up the good job! DD

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Greetings ladies and gentleman today i´ ll tell you;
why should we save water.

So i´ ll give you two reasons to save water
live happy.
1.  Without water we could die.
2.  Some people don´ t have water and we are so
lucky to have it but they don´ t.

So, if we want to save water we should
do this:

1.  Close the sink while brushing your teeth.
2.  Take shorter showers.
3. Collect cold water on a bucket for the plants.

My message for you: Save water and help all
the oceans, rivers, lakes, etc. manu good dl

FEEDBACK:

Dear Manu, your script is perfectly structured. I know you wrote it with Sofi and Gabi, very good for that, but please:

1. Read and practice what was written, it is important to have some extra time to listen what was recorded.

2. Make sure you understand the words you included in your writing and practice its pronunciation.

We will be continue working on fluency, pronunciation and how ti speak up in front of a big audience.

Keep the good job up! DD

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Dear Fabi, your pronunciation improved a lot! Great for all the solutions you are providing, they are powerful! Nevertheless, I think you did not include or you mixed the reasons why we should save the water. Remember also, that closing should be for inviting others to make part of the change they would like to see in the world.

I know you will keep improving! Good job! DD

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saving the water

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Dear Isa, you were able to give the asked reasons, I really appreciate the intonation and laughs that you included. Your tips are also well structured. Nevertheless I would suggest to introduce and close your speech in a better way, so that you can engage the audience and you can also invite them to be part of the change they would like to see in the world. DL

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Dear Juliet, you did a great job! You were able to provide and support the reasons why we should save the water. Great explanation. I really appreciate that more than reading you were exposing your ideas, you gave some tips also, that would be really engaging. The only recommendation is to practice a little bit more so that you can follow and mention all your ideas.

Keep up the great job! DL

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Dear Martin, you did a great job! You were able to provide strong and clear reasons why we should save the water. Also I would like to highlight how well you could provide actions that can be taken to save the water. Lovely pronunciation and fluency.

Keep up the excellent job! DL

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Dear Emi, you did a great job! Your reasons are clear and well exposed. Very good for providing concrete actions to contribute to that cause. The only recommendation is to close it a little bit better by exposing a final sentences that summarizes everything or that empowers your audience.

Keep up the good job! DL

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Giuliana tortorella

FEEDBACK:
Dear Giuli! Great voice tone. You provided strong reasons, please remember that instead of using no you should use do not. On the other hand, the alternatives were not that clear, and you could add a little more to the closing sentence.

I know practice could help you more to better organize and express your ideas.

Keep up the good job! DD

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Greeting and introduction:
Hello to everyone, thank you for being here. Today I will be talking
about water power and the ways we can save it.
2. Give two reasons why we should save water:
You might be wondering why water could save the world, well there are two
main reasons I would like to share with you:
1.  we have to save the water because without water  the humans can died
2.We have to save the water bicause we need to hydrate our bodys.
3. Give two ideas about how to save water:
So, if we want to be part of the change we could:
1.  We can Reuse, Reduce and Reuse.
2. We can use the water only if we need it.
.4. Closing   to raise awareness: In conclusion I invite you to be part of the change
You want to see in the world. Let`s save the water together.
https://voca.ro/1fyPahKjc0gA

FEEDBACK

Juan Fe you did a great job! You were able to provide two reasons why we should save the water. and two solutions. Great for providing more details about the solutions you wrote. You were just missing the closing with the powerful message. Please trust more on yourself you are so good speaking. Remember to practice before recording your voice so that you can know when to do the pauses.

Keep up the good job!

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1. Greeting and introduction:
Hello to everyone, thank you for being here. Today I will be talking
about water power and the ways we can save it.
2. Give two reasons why we should save water:
You might be wondering why water could save the world, well there are two
main reasons I would like to share with you:
1.   We have to save the water bicause we need to hydrate our bodys.
2.    We need to drink water bicause with out water the humans can be died.
3. Give two ideas about how to save water:
So, if we want to be part of the change we could:
1.   We can Reuse, Reduce and Reuse.
2.   We can use the water only if we need it.

4. Closing
Message to raise awareness: In conclusion we need to save the water bicause we need to drink water and we need to use the water.

FEEDBACK:

Dear Gabi, you did a great job! You were able to provide two great reasons to save the water and two ways in which we can save it . Next time try to be more specific when giving the examples (reduce the plastic by using a glass water bottle). Great pronunciation and fluency, try please to practice the speech before delivering it so that you can plan when to make the pauses.

Keep up the excellent job! DL

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1. Greeting and introduction:
Hello to everyone, thank you for being here. Today I will be talking
about water power and the ways we can save it.
2.   You might be wondering why water could save the world, well there are two
main reasons I would like to share with you:
1.  We need to save the water because with not water we will die and also the earth.  There is a doctor that say that we can not live with not water more than 3 weeks.

3. Give two ideas about how to save water:
So, if we want to be part of the change we could:
1.  Less time of showers.
2. Water the plants with recycling water.
4. Closing
In conclusion I invite you to ..... Save the water to don t die I am so kid to dieeeeeee.

https://voca.ro/1hirK5llM35U

FEEDBACK:

Dear Emi you did a great job! Your reasons supported your ideas. Be careful with the pauses and the linking words you use to connect your ideas, it will help the reader to better understand what you mean. Lastly, please try to be more specific when exposing the proposals you have for saving the water.

Keep up the good job! DL

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Hi  everyone, thank you for being here. Today I will be talking
about water power and the ways we can save it.

You might be wondering why water could save the world, well there are two
main reasons I would like to share with you:
1.  we need water because for example in the amazonas need water to the plants and aimals that live there
2. We need to save the water because the people use water to survive

So, if we want to be part of the change we could:
1.   Dont leave the water tap open when you are washing your hands
2.   when you are shower no last more dan 15 minutes

In conclusion I invite you to be part of the change
You want to see in the world. Let`s save the water together.

thanks for wathching :)
https://voca.ro/13jZLzDtEEpY

FEEDBACK:

Dear Gabe, you did it great! You were able to provide some reasons why we need to save the water and were also able to provide some ideas about how to save it! Great pronunciation and intonation. Your speech is really engaging!

Keep up the great job! DL

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Hi  everyone, thank you for being here. Today I will be talking
about water power and the ways we can save it.

You might be wondering why water could save the world, well there are two
main reasons I would like to share with you:
1.  we need water because for example in the amazonas need water to the plants and aimals that live there
2. We need to save the water because the people use water to survive

So, if we want to be part of the change we could:
1.   Dont leave the water tap open when you are washing your hands
2.   take showers that do not last more dan 15 minutes.

In conclusion I invite you to be part of the change
You want to see in the world. Let`s save the water together.

thanks for wathching :)
https://voca.ro/1CDPosKWmxU0

Feedback:

Dear Vale, great for taking the risk and speak up for the planet! Your ideas are well connected and structured, you were able ti provide some reasons why we need to save the water, as well as exposing some ideas about how to save the water. Nevertheless, we need to keep working on pronunciation, because there are some words that can not be pronounced in Spanish. We will keep working on it!

Keep improving! DD

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1. Greeting and introduction:
Hello to everyone, thank you for being here. Today I will be talking
about water power and the ways we can save it.
2. Give two reasons why we should save water:
You might be wondering why water could save the world, well there are two
main reasons I would like to share with you:
1.  Because  is one of most important elements of  the world
2.because  is helthy to humans and animals.
3. Give two ideas about how to save water:
So, if we want to be part of the change by:
1.   Stopping wasting water
2.  Being more calmed with plastic
4. Closing
Message to raise awareness: In conclusion I invite you to be part of the change
You want to see in the world. Let`s save the water together.

https://voca.ro/1dGKWMyYIdSt

FEEDBACK:

Dear Juan Se, you did a great job, your speech is clear and fluent, you made some changes that contributed to the strength of your speech. Great! Next time try to be a little bit more descriptive with your proposals.

Keep up the good job! DL

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1. Greeting and introduction:
Hello to everyone, thank you for being here. Today I will be talking
about water power and the ways we can save it.
2. Give two reasons why we should save water:
You might be wondering why water could save the world, well there are two
main reasons I would like to share with you:
1.  We need to save the water because with not water we will die and also the earth. There is a doctor that say that we can not live with not water more than 3 weeks.

3. Give two ideas about how to save water:
So, if we want to be part of the change we could:
1.  Less time of showers.
2. Water the plants with recycling water.
4. Closing
In conclusion I invite you to ..... Save the water to don t die I am so kid to dieeeeeee.
https://voca.ro/13KOI4jlE6gK

FEEDBACK:

Dear Juan fer, you did a great job! your pronunciation is great and your fluency too, but it is important to keep working on the pauses, the intonation and specially how engaging your speech is, you need to make everyone interested on what you are saying. I am sure you can do it!

Keep up the good job! DL

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1. Greeting and introduction:
Hello to everyone, thank you for being here. Today I will be talking
about water power and the ways we can save it.
2. Give two reasons why we should save water:
You might be wondering why water could save the world, well there are two
main reasons I would like to share with you:
1.  The water power is so important because old (ALL) the day I use like old (ALL) the people in the world
2.  the water  is important because if we do not have it the world are (will be) a rock without live.
3. Give to ideas about how to save water:
So, if we want to be part of the change we could:
1.  we can saving the water (yes.. but how?)
2.  we can save water if we conservate (PRESERVE) and not contaminate her.
4. Closing
Message to raise awareness: In conclusion I invite you to be part of the change   You want to see in the world. Let`s save the water together.

In  conclución the water is important because old (ALL) people use the water to live we invite to save more the water.

FEEDBACK:

Dear Atha your voice is so engaging, your tone and the pauses you did make the audience feel connected with what you are communicating. Nevertheless, it is important that when talking about the reasons you use "because" and you provide more details about the ways in which the others can save the water.

You are improving! DD

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Hello to everyone, thank you for being here. Today I will be talking
about waterpower and the ways we can save it.

You might be wondering why water could save the world, well there are two
main reasons I would like to share with you:
1.the water its berry (very)important beacouce (because) without the water the animals can die
2. the water its important beacouce the water its the  biggest part of life in the earth.
3. Give two ideas about how to save water:
So, if we want to be part of the change we could:
1.to save water we can reuse water
2.two save water we should stop contaminating the water.
4. Closing and conclusion:
Message to raise awareness: In conclusion I invite you to be part of the change
You want to see in the world. Let`s save the water together.
https://voca.ro/1m4jvhgUnx7O

FEEDBACK

Dear Isa you did a great job! you were able to provide some reasons why water should be saved, and you could also come up with two ideas about how to do it! Great speech we need to keep working on pronunciation and fluency, next time please try to practice in advance.

Keep up the good job! DD

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Greeting and introduction:
Hello to everyone, thank you for being here. Today I will be talking
about water power and the ways we can save it.
Give two reasons why we should save water:
You might be wondering why water could save the world, well there are two
main reasons I would like to share with you:
1.  To the other species like humans need the water, other species they don´t deserve live with the humans because they waste your (their) food or your ecosystem.
2.  Because for the Earth can be healty
Give two ideas about how to save water:
So, if we want to be part of the change we could:
1. When take a wash that wash take no longer than 2 or 3 minutes.
2. Don´ t make many ¡¡¡waterwarship!!!
4. Closing
The water is necesari to the life in the Earth. That is a resource that you need give thanks to had to it that is a big recouce.

FEEDBACK

Dear Mate you did a great job! Your speech is well structured, it is coherent and it shows the reasons and the ways we can save the water. I would recommend you to double check your spelling, and try to give your speech in a more fluent way.

Keep up the good job: DL