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But you were asked to write about a personal story . You can rewrite the same story but you can be one of the characters .

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Well-done ! Don't forget to add the conclusion

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Well-done ! Don't forget to add the conclusion

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The mixture is poured ....

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You don't need to write a heading for the advantages and the disadvantages .

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Great Job ! Beautiful interesting ideas !

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Great Job ! Beautiful interesting ideas !

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Things to consider :
Leave spaces between paragraphs.

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Nice work Kawther ! Don't forget to add the conclusion.

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Finally , you can get the best ...
Don't use short forms such as "cuz " ,use because instead

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We have already done this question together , you should do the other question .

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Good work Fatima ! Please check the followings :
Use capital 'S ' and "M' for Sir or Madam,
I would like to do your English ...
Instead of writing " tedious duties " you can ask : Are there a lot of assignments to submit ?
Paragraph 3 , instead of " I think I can do it at any .." write : The advertisement says that drawing is available , but does the cost ....
Write " Best Wishes " in a separate line .

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The story is a bit short and not very organised . You should write minimum three paragraphs , and try to avoid translating from Arabic into English .

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I saw an advertisement for your course  “ English for a better life “ magazine . I am interested in doing this course. I would be grateful if you could provide some further information .

First , it says in the advertisement that the courses are one month , I would  like to know how much your courses cost exactly and how many teachers I would  have  .

Secondly , I would to know where your school is located and could you tell me if I would be staying on my own ?

Finally , I have a question about the accommodation I will be staying in and if there is  a gym to play sport because I am very keen on sport .

I look forward to hearing from you .

Best Regards
Zainab  Sayed Hashem

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Online shopping has become very popular recently. And there's been a lot of famous online shopping apps such as: shein, Namshi, Fordeal etc, they allow people to get there things when they stay comfortably at home. However, there are two sides to a coin, and the same goes with online shopping. In this essay we will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this topic.
On the one hand, there are many advantages to online shopping. First of all, online shopping is a helpful way to do shopping without getting out of house, Another important benefit of online shopping is that it's safe way to do shopping even in situations like covid-19 pandemic. Finally, it's helping to find the product you want to buy by just search for it and choosing the details you want  in the products.
On the other hand, online shopping also has some drawbacks. One of the most important disadvantages of online shopping is that it's can hurt many people's eyesight because they will spent long time in searching and choosing the products they want, Moreover, many people can be antisocial because they will keep shopping online without getting out of the house and this will affect their social level because they will be less in public.
To sum up, online shopping is a mixed-blessing. It has both positive and negative effects on people. In my opinion, it depends on the way we use it. we should use it smartly and also we should do some traditional shopping to help being in public.

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Write headings for the arguments for and arguments against, and you need to rewrite the conclusion . In the conclusion you can focus on the opinion of the majority and add your recommendations and suggestions .

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C- Arguments against the new runway

The majority of local residents (83%) said they were against the plans for the new runway.  The main and most important reason (which 75% mentioned) is that it will cause great damage to the village and will disturb many families and cause traffic congestion.

, goes back hundreds of years.  Another important reason is that the runway causes traffic congestion and inconvenience to the residents of the village.  D- Arguments for building the runway.

On the other hand, a minority of the population (17%) felt that a runway would benefit the village and would facilitate things and provide job opportunities for citizens

E- Alternate Amphitheater Sites

However, 96% of all residents thought a better idea was to build a new runway at one of the other airports in the area.

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The diagram shows milk chocolate making steps. And it includes 6 stages.
In the first stage, To begin with, The beans are roasted at 135*C. Then, the beans are crushed and the shells are removed, After that, the inner parts of the beans are pressed and liquid chocolate is produced, Following this, Milk and sugar are added, After that, the mixture is poured and the moulds are cooled down
In the final stage, The bars are warped, foiled and papered.
Making milk chocolate is a complex process, we started it by roasting the beans and end it with papering the bars.

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Last week, a company called me for a job interview, and I was very nervous, but I started preparing some things for the interview, for example, practicing speaking without tension or fear, writing some ideas, collecting a lot of information from friends and the Internet, and on the day of the interview, improving appearance, arranging clothes and perfumes, Improving the appearance of hair, arranging the external appearance  Walk with confidence and without fear and tension

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In recent days, online shopping has become more and more popular.Online shopping is one of the most modern ways of influencing the world trade sector. It has contributed to the development of many commercial tools through the transition from traditional commerce to modern electronic commerce, which relied entirely on the use of the Internet.
It saves Time and effort to consumers, and helped them to identify the nature of products put on the market. Online shopping is based on a set of requirements that must be met so that the consumer can handle this kind of shopping correctly, and also follow special shopping tips, so that he can make the purchase correctly and with great care and caution.Benefits of shopping onlineFind out all the details about the products:
it is one of the main benefits of online shopping. It is possible to see detailed and complete information about the products offered for sale on websites, such as prices, specifications, ingredients and other details, and this helps the consumer to choose the right product for him.Online shopping saves time and effort The damages of online shopping Delay in shipments and delivery and tearing of some clothes and goods Ease of fraud, some online shopping sites may be fake or unsafe and steal customers' money.  One of the major drawbacks of online shopping is shipping and delay issues, as it takes a long time to deliver the product to the customer’s home from two weeks to one month.  Finally, the product may not meet your expectations, the product may not meet your expectations in terms of shape, size, etc.  In the end, there are many advantages and disadvantages of online shopping.  But in my opinion, I think that regular shopping is better than online shopping, because it has more benefits than drawbacks.  For example you can try out products.

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The diagram shows the process of making chocolate milk.  There are 6 stages in the production of chocolate milk.  First, the chocolate is roasted at 135°C, second, the bean husks are crushed and removed, third, the inner parts of the beans are squeezed to produce liquid chocolate, fourth, sugar and milk are added, fifth, the mixture is poured, and the molds are cooled, sixth, chocolate milk is placed, foil and paper are glued, and finally they are wrapped

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an introduction.
The objective of this report is to summarize the results of a recent survey among local residents of the village on the topic (plans to build a new runway at the local airport), which was commissioned by AEB Research to conduct the survey by a local working group.  All data was collected through a questionnaire and interviews with 400 local residents between 6 and 17 October.

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The aim of the report is to summerise the findings of survey on plans to build a shopping mall in Hamad town . The survey was carried out by ABC Research  company . The data was collected by interviews and questions 2,000 people participated in this survey between ( Jan 12-20 )

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When I was 8years old, I would go to the farm with my father, play with the ducks and meet his clever friends, but when I grew up I couldn't go with him anymore, and I wasn't used to sitting alone, and I wasn't used to going somewhere alone because of my age

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a very beautifully organised essay ! Brilliant !

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a very beautifully organised essay ! Brilliant !

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I'm so proud of you

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Recently, online shopping has become very popular. Online shopping website and application such as SHEIN, Amazon, vogaCloset, and the most famous is Amazon are widely used. However, there are two sides to a coin , and this holds true with online shopping. As we discussed this topic, we will look at both the advantages and the disadvantages of this issue .
when it comes to the benefits, online shopping has many benefits:

First of all, costumers can shop from home without having o wait in long queues .Another good thing about online shopping is that online shopping saves money, as stores can offer customers discounts on a lot of products by selling them online for less money . As a final advantage, customers can by stuff at any time without worrying about closing the site.
However, online shopping has also some drawbacks. One of the biggest drawbacks of online shopping is the order takes a long time to arrive. It usually takes about 1-3 weeks to reach the customers door. Moreover, many people feel that the experience of going shopping provides a lot of fun. Finally, when shopping ,the customer does not get a chance to know what he is buying and may accidentally click and buy something he does not get a chance to know what he is buying and may accidentally want.

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Wonderful work Zahra ! Very authentic and natural language .

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Wonderful work Zahra ! Very authentic and natural language .

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Things to consider :
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Don't put a lot of ideas in one sentence, instead give supporting details for each advantage or a disadvantage .

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Great Work ! Your essay is very organisd and well-written !

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Great Work ! Your essay is very organisd and well-written !

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The diagram describes the process of making milk chocolate, it consists of 6 stages showing what beans go throw to be convarted into a chocolate, following by the last touches.

To start with, beans are roasted at 135 C°. Next,  they are crushed and their shells being removed. After that, inner parts of beans are being pressed to produce liquid chocolate from them. Following this, a balanced quantity of milk and sugar added to the chocolate. Subsequently, the mixture are poured into a bars molds, then they cooled down. Lastly, bars are wraped in foils and paper.

Now that you know how complex and long process is to produce the chocolate from the normal beans, and that what makes us enjoy the chocolate taste with all its several flavors.

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Process writing: task: making milk chocolate 

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how to make milk chocolate
... 6 steps in milk chocolate production
liquid chocolate is produced
the mixture is poured
moulds, wrapped, starts with roasting ...and ends with wrapping bars in foil and paper .

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Writing Process: Task: Make milk chocolate 🍫:

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Fatima Hussain

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Write an essay describing the process of one of the following :

1. How to plan for a birthday party.
2. How to plan for a trip .
3. How to prepare for final exams .
4. How to prepare for a job interview .

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Chocolate is one of the most delicious and amazing things you well ever taste it , and now we’ll learn how to make milk chocolate

At first,  we put the beans at the oven to get roasted at 135 c , next, we put them the into a machine to get the beans crushed and the shell removed .

After that , the inner parts of beans get pressed to produce liquid chocolate . Following this, we add milk , sugar , after all of that we pour the mixture into moulds to cool down.  Lastly , the bars get wrapped with foil paper .

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Last weekend my cousins and I decide to have a movie night at my house we made a popcorn and we played horror movie everything was normal and great before one of my cousins was missed
First we thought that she wentt the bathroom and she will back after two minutes the movie was so scary and we were holding each other and shaking .Then suddenly we see a white creature behind the TV and it was moving we started to see scream and Run but it was so dark we couldn't saw anything because the light suddenly went out .We were terrified thought that its was a white ghost and it come closer to us I was screaming so loud and we were all crying when suddenly the ghost removed the white cover and guess what
It was a prank my cousin pranked us and she succesded to be honest in the end we laughed a lot and so far my cousin and everyone else are making fun of all the time us.

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1- Having fun
2- Good pay(money)
3-Opportunities to travel
4- Good managers
5- Friendly colleagues(people you work with)
6- Learning new skills
7- A well-known compony

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?What was your life like when you were 8 years old

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?What was your life like when you were 8 years old

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When I was Eight years old I used to get up early morning. I used to have my breakfast and go to school. I used to be careful about the way to school . When I back home and have my lunch. After that I used to do my homework. Than I used to play with my sister. I had a great time and fun.

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Process Writing : Task : making milk chocolate

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Process Writing : Task : making milk chocolate