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Hey Sophie, like how you have made use of the original plan and explained the changes you have made, very clear and concise!

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Hey Sophie, like how you have made use of the original plan and explained the changes you have made, very clear and concise!

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Your plan is very thorough to support the learner effectively Tegan. I like the way you show empathy towards your student during this difficult time and you've considered your resources in great depth. Your plan supports the delivery of the curriculum but also supports the student as an individual and that's important when building positive relationships. 

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Your plan is very thorough to support the learner effectively Tegan. I like the way you show empathy towards your student during this difficult time and you've considered your resources in great depth. Your plan supports the delivery of the curriculum but also supports the student as an individual and that's important when building positive relationships. 

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I really like the idea of playing a game to start a lesson, its engaging and fun for a learner and encourages the learner to participate. I also like the variety of resources you are using Daisy. Having the learning activity broken down into sections and also including a break for the learner makes the idea of learning maths less daunting. 

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I really like the idea of playing a game to start a lesson, its engaging and fun for a learner and encourages the learner to participate. I also like the variety of resources you are using Daisy. Having the learning activity broken down into sections and also including a break for the learner makes the idea of learning maths less daunting. 

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I like how thoroughly you have considered your approach Tegan. Comprehensive use of questioning, well-structured and links to Curriculum - Carolen.

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I like how thoroughly you have considered your approach Tegan. Comprehensive use of questioning, well-structured and links to Curriculum - Carolen.

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I like the maths warm-up activity being a fun game to share, this will settle the learner in to understanding the learning objective. Also like the motivational incentive of reward time following on from the lesson - Carolen 

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I like the maths warm-up activity being a fun game to share, this will settle the learner in to understanding the learning objective. Also like the motivational incentive of reward time following on from the lesson - Carolen 

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you have made it very clear which is the new plan and which is the old.
I like it that you have included references to the websites you will use, and screen shotted the resources.

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I like how you have said the pupils will still be assessed and that the pupils can see their achievements.  Really clear understanding of what is expected.

I really liked the screen shots as you know what you should be looking at.

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I particular like the way you have shown the details of the previous plan to indicate how the plan has been adapted to Create the new one.

I also like how you have shown what the new activity looks like with the provided screenshots