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I really liked the plot of your video it was really cool how you did that.

What if you had added music to your video it would have made it better.

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i really liked that you got some good video of the students with costumes on.

what if you muted the sound on some of them like when they were playing the games and put like some kind of music.

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Becca , I really think that you did a good job on this movie and i liked when you showed off the costumes.
What if you got a picture of a lot of costumes then added it to the movie.

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I liked how you took pictures of peoples halloween costums.

Can you do the same on chrismas?

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Becca what I liked about your movie was when you were walking through the office .

What if you maybe added more pictures?

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I liked how you showed some of the activities and you showed the ice truck.

What is you put in people's thoughts on the activities?

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I really liked when you showed us people's costumes.

What if you added some music?

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I really liked that you showed one part from the carnival and how it was like a sponsor. I also really liked how you showed a bunch of people with their costumes on saying "Happy Halloween". Along with showing someone with a bacon costume, that was one of my favorite parts.

What about if you showed more of the carnival though? That would definitely be cool to me. Along with that, I would also recommend renaming the video to "Halloween 2017" instead of putting "Halloween 2018". You also should of filmed Mr. Calvert quickly reading the contract in front of the office.

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I liked how everyone was saying happy Halloween.

What if you added some music?

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I liked how how you put Spooky in the title.

What if you knew the date before you put 2018 it would've been a better title and more profesional.

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I really liked how you sped it up when the kids were walking.

What if you put a bit of music in?

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Becca, I liked where you put all the kids and teachers that were wearing costumes to say, "Happy Halloween".

What if you put a bit of music during the viewing of the  Willy Wonka projects and items?

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I really liked when you took us through like a small tour of the office.

What if you add background music when you go into the office, so we don't have to hear the conversation in the back.

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Becca I like the part when everyone was saying happy Halloween.

What if you added Halloween effects to make it more scary because its for Halloween.

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I really liked that when you pick people to say""HAPPY HALLOWEEN"
What if u added Halloween affects to make is more spooky?

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I liked how you sped up the class walking in the main office. I think maybe you should've made the editing smoother, and maybe so more transitions! What about adding music in? Maybe some short music from a Charlie Chaplin movie when you sped up the people in the main office?

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I really liked  how you showed the room with candy.

What if you took more time on filming Mr. Calvert?

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I really liked when you went and recorded the people in costumes.

What if you cut out more  unnecessary scenes?

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Becca I liked when you filmed in the lunch area where everyone was at with their cool costumes.

What if you filmed the rest of the parts of the carnival like in the gym and if you put spooky music in the backround?

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I really enjoyed how you filmed student and staff's costumes, they were mostly spot on.

What if you used a tripod, to stabilize the shots more.

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Becca I liked where you sped up the film when the kids were walking.

What if you used a tripod?