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1. 초안 업로드 기한: ~10/17(월) 23:59
2. 동료 평가 기한: ~10/23(일) 23:59
3. 발표: 10/24~28 2시간 실시 예정

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○ 지문: 2022 9월 고2 모의고사 41, 42번
○ 지문 내용 요약: FOMO는 놓치는 것(소외되는 것)에 대한 두려움이고 JOMO는 놓치는 것(소외되는 것)에 대한 즐거움이며, 우리는 JOMO를 통해 FOMO를 극복해야 한다.

Good morning, everyone. The passage that I chose is number 41 and 42 in 9월 모의고사. It is about what FOMO and JOMO are; FOMO is the fear of missing out, and JOMO the joy of missing out. Since I’ve become very interested in social psychology lately, these two interesting syndromes made me research them more. Today, I’d like to introduce you to how FOMO syndrome affects today’s real estate market.
Have you ever hear about panic buying? Panic buying occurs when consumers unusually buy large amounts of product in anticipation of a high price increase, or a shortage. Since the outbreak of COVID-19, there have been many panic buying events worldwide. As house prices and stock prices have risen at record levels all over the world, many young generations in Korea, especially people in their 20s and 30s, bought apartments or stocks by pulling everything together, which is called 영끌, or by taking out too many loans to invest in the market, so-called 빚투. The anxiety about falling behind others like FOMO is one of the main factors influencing panic buying. As a growing number of loans are taken out by individuals, the unrelenting surge in household debt has become the biggest downside risk to the Korean economy. Due to the economic instability, many people who have been overbuying real estate and stocks due to anxiety are now causing damage not only to themselves but to the entire economy.
Likewise, FOMO syndrome not only has a detrimental effect on our physical and mental health but also influences the property market, and finally harms the entire economy. We sometimes think everyone makes money but me and others might have rewarding experiences that we are not missing out on. Like the solutions mentioned in the passage, however, it will be necessary for us to accept JOMO in our lives, which is to be satisfied with the present and to be aware that we can miss out on anything at any time. Let’s enjoy missing out. Thank you for listening.

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[2123 정해인]
1. 과제 수행
1) 전체 문장의 개수: 15개 이상
2) 번역기 여부: 사용하지 않고 자신의 말로 성실하게 썼음.
3) 서론-본론-결론 3단 구성: O

2. 내용 부합 여부: FOMO의 개념을 경제 분야, 특히 부동산 분야로 연결시켜 소개한 점이 인상적이며 공부한 지문 내용을 심화시켰음. 빚투, 영끌 내용을 소개한 부분을 강조하면서 읽으면 내용 전달이 더 잘될 것 같음.

3. 기본 어법: 본론 첫 번째 문장의 hear을 heard로 고쳐야 함.

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-지문: 자이스토리 N21

-지문 내용 요약: 19세기 후반 인쇄술의 발달로 언론 간의 경쟁이 과열됐고, 그로 인해 자극적인 가십으로 주의를 끄는 황색 언론이 시작됐다.

Hi everyone. I've chosen to talk about the passage N21 of 자이스토리. It explains how "yellow journalism" started in the late 19C. Yellow journalism refers to the press that reports stimulating articles. They often are based on absurd rumors rather than fact. It has been criticized but still exists. Let’s look at some examples of yellow journalism of the present day.

Fake news about scientific fact is a big headache today. Since COVID-19 outbreak, we have faced numerous fake news about the virus. For example, one of them had a tile saying "Cure for Coronavirus Has Been Found". Tempting, right? But if you click it, poor content was waiting inside. It would say drinking alcohol or even bleach can help curing the disease. That wasn't the end. False information about vaccine came out as articles when vaccination started. Panicked by the epidemic, many people read those articles, believed, and followed them. What do we do in this ocean of fake news? To counteract them, the government and scientists conducted fact check actively. They tried to provide accurate information about coronavirus and prevent further happening caused by panic and false one. We have to listen to them.

As Internet civilization developed, spread of fake news is easier and faster than ever before. When we believe them without any reflection, we feed yellow journalism. It is important for us to check if a news is based on fact and pursue journalism ethics. Thank you for listening.

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지문: 자이스토리 G10
지문 내용 요약: Black friday로 인한 영향, Green friday가 무엇인지

Introduction (3)
-Hello everyone, I’m Jihyun. The passage that I chose is G10 in 자이스토리
It is about what ‘Green friday’ are. I was usually interested in
environmental issues, so I looked into the environmental pollution caused
by Black Friday and the effects that Greed Friday can have.

Body (8)
-Have you ever bought something cheap on Black Friday? Black Friday offers consumers a big discount, allowing consumers to consume even things they don't need.
Carbon emissions from these consumption amounts to 400.000 tons and electronic waste amounts to 50 million tons. To solve this problem, Green Friday has emerged. Green Friday pursues responsible and sustainable consumption. I’m going to talk about Ikea and Ecolf. IKEA held a "Buyback Friday" for its members, which pays 50% of the furniture purchase price if they resell unused IKEA furniture. Also, Sustainable fashion brand Ecolef did not participate in Black Friday despite significant additional income. These reduced waste and carbon emissions.

Conclusion (4)
-This shift from Black Friday to Green Friday will reduce environmental pollution and enable sustainable consumption. As the passage says, even if only a fraction of the population makes this change, it will be of great significance to the environment. Let's all try little by little to solve environmental problems. Thank you for listening.

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지문: 자이스토리 O21번
지문 내용 요약: 고체를 통해서 듣는 소리가 더 큰 이유

Hello, everyone. I'm Sunju. My main topic for today's talk is 자이스토리 O21. This Writing is about why solids deliver sound better than liquid. The reason I chose this writing is because ordinarily I was curious about the reason why the sound felt louder when I tapped with my finger on the desk. I'm going to read this, I wanted to know more about the principle of solid transmission, so I looked into it.
Because of The reason why the difference in sound speed occurs is because difference in the number of atoms and molecules. If particles stick together like solids, the sound can be transmitted faster. If the number of particles per unit volume is small like air, the speed of sound decreases. And additionally, Temperature also affects the sound speed. The higher the temperature, movement of the particles becomes active and the speed of sound increases.
For this reason, A solid transmits sound waves faster than a liquid. I'd like to highlight that don't hit the desk hard when your friend sleeps with shes ears on it. May be a problem with your friend's ears.
Thank you all for your attendance today.

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지문:자이스토리 K02
지문내용: 빠르게 얻은 이익의 위험성

(Introduction)

-Hello, everyone. My name is Oh Si Hyun and the passage that I choose is K02 자이스토리.

It is about Sudden success or winning can be very dangerous. The reason why I chose this topic is that I always thought it would be so happy if I got sudden succeed or gain a lot of popularity one day. So I was very interesting about this topic.

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- This paper says that sudden success or prize money leads to neurological excitement and a desire to repeat it, so people become addicted without thinking that luck would have worked, but those who suffer from severe depression because success cannot continue. .A similar disease is panic disorder.

Panic disorder is an anxiety disorder that suddenly feels extreme fear and anxiety and is caused by stress or personal reasons. More and more people are said to be suffering from this Panic disorder. Celebrities who get a lot of sudden attention and get a lot of reviews suffer from panic disorder. So I found out how celebrities overcame panic disorder and got a small answer through interviews with celebrities who overcame panic disorder.

they said that when we suddenly feel depressed or anxious, we have to inner solidity and are interested in new things while doing various external activities.

(Conclusion)

As such, if we become aware of the dangers of sudden success or popularity someday, and learn about the disorders that many people suffer from, such as panic disorder, we will be able to overcome these situations well. We should be careful not to get addicted when we get sudden attention or success. Thank you for listeining.

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지문: 자이스토리 D16

지문 내용 요약: 고등 교육을 받은 사람들은 사람들은 고등학교를 졸업 하지않은 사람들에 비해 확증편향에 빠질 가능성이 커서, 종종 집단 양극화 현상이 나타나므로 이를 방지하기 위한 교육을 실시해야 한다.

Hello everyone!! The passage that l chose is D16 in 자이스토리.  It’s an article that says people can easily fall into “confirmation bias“.  Have you ever thought about confirmation bias? The concept of confirmation bias is that you only see what you want to see, and I really interested in this topic. So I’m going to tell about relationship between confirmation bias and marketing.

Do you know the fact that “confirmation bias“ can be useful tool in marketing? When you want to eat shrimp chips, You are likely to go to the market. In the market, there has various shrimp chips, and I think you're likely to choose 새우깡. The reason of that reasoning is that 새우깡 is the most familiar shrimp chips for you. 새우깡 is very famous chips, but, still, 새우깡 company advertise and market it. The reason why they keep advertising products that we think don’t need to promote is to form a confirmation bias (about 새우깡 is the best of all), by instilling familiarity. This can make us buy products continuously by mistaking them for products we know well.

In this way, confirmation bias doesn’t just increase group polarization, but use to marketing techniques. I think it’s important to grasp the essence of something rather than just thinking it is bad. Just like this case, thanks to confirmation bias, advertisers can advertise more easily now. Thank you for listening!

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지문: 자이스토리 148p K8

지문 내용 요약: 선택의 대안이 많은 것은 좋은 것이 아니다

Introduction
Hello everyone, I’m Hyo Won. The passage that I chose is number K8 in 자이스토리. It is about whether overabundance of option is good. And the answer is NO. Since I’ve become very interested in psychology, I wonder about ‘The Paradox of Choice’.

Body

People usually think the more option they have, the more satisfied they feel. But that’s not true. That’s ‘The Paradox of Choice’. There are many reasons why the paradox happens. To make short of a long story, it’s because of perfectionism. We do comparative analysis of all possibility of choice to make an excellent selection. In this  process, we are worn out. As a result, we give up or delay to choose.

Conclusion

To escape The Paradox of Choice, we should give up to make an excellent decision. Thereby, we can be satisfied with our decisions without being worn out among too many options. That’s all for today. Thank you for listening.

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🐨지문 : 자이스토리 M03
🐨지문 내용 요약 : 우리 몸의 면역 체계가 하는 일

Hello, everyone. The passage that I choose is M03 in 자이스토리. This passage is about the immune system. I have been interested in immunity because of the corona. So I wanted to investigate more about this topic.

The immune system is a very complex operation that regulates the body's response to external threats and internal disorders. The immune system has the ability to learn. So when it identifies an external invader, it makes a specific response element to a specific antigen and remembers the element to counter the antigen.
Briefly, when the immune system senses a virus, the body is mobilized to produce special cells, which are carried by the blood and attacked virus. Usually, The immune system of a healthy person wins and heals quickly. Then, the immune system remembers the particular cell and any following infection by the same kind of parasite is beaten off so quickly that we don't notice it. However, people with weak immunity can get sick often because this immune system does not work well. So we should get rid of unhealthy habits and have a habit of raising immunity. Regular exercise, healthy food intake, and sufficient sleep can increase immunity.

If you have high immunity, you can easily pass even if you get sick. We need to increase our immunity because the corona virus hasn't completely disappeared yet, and the influenza will soon spread. The habits mentioned above are easy ways to practice in everyday life, so I hope you practice them and keep your health. Thank you for listening.

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지문 : 자이스토리 F02  의학기술발달의 양면성
- 평균연령이 높아짐, 질병에서 살아남을 가능성 높아짐
- 식량,주택공급어려움, 공정하게 분배되지않음.

Good morning, everyone. I'm garam. The passage that I chose is number 2 of unit F in 자이스토리. It is about double- sidedness of medical technology development. When I read this passage, I was interested in the sentence 'medical services are still not well distributed'. because at that time distribution of covid-19 vaccines was issue. So today I'd like to introduce you about distribution of covid-19 vaccines.

Have you heard about the 80-20 rule? It means that the top 20%  take 80% of the wealth. This applies to the medical field as well. So-called a gap of 90 to 10. While 90% of the world is at risk of contracting infectious diseases, more than 90% of the drugs are supplied to only 10% of countries. In 2009, The swine flu vaccine was all monopolized by rich countries. To prevent this situation, several countries propelled international vaccine joint projects named COVAX. Their goal was to vaccinate 20 percent of the population participating countries. But the reality was different from that. 90% of the vaccines were sold to the US, UK, and Japan. and as a result, other countries were unable to get vaccinated due to insufficient vaccines.
Mutation called omicron has occurred in Africa, where Vaccination rates are low. The situation had worsened because of that.

As medical technology develops, this inequity distribution will get worse. Therefore, we should attention to negative aspects not only look positive aspects and try to solve them.
Thank you for listening !

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-지문 : 수능특강 11강 01번
-지문 내용 요약 : 관찰과 경험을 이론을 통해 해석해야만 유의미한 증거가 된다.

[Introduction-5]
Hi everyone. The passage that I choose is number 01 in 수능특강. It is about why interpreting scientific theory is important. I had read the book 'A Double Helix', and the content soon came to mind when I look the passage. So, I decide to read the book once again and to consider about interpreting theory.

[Body-9]
Do you heard about the process of discovering a double helix? The process also undergone interpreting. At first, they took a picture of DNA. However, of course, the two-dimensional photograph did not clearly show the three-dimensional structure. All they got was a picture of circle with some lines.
But they knew that was not all. They applied their previous   hypothesis and a well-known theory. Finally, they concluded structure of DNA is the double helix. The fact has become one of the most important scientific discoveries of the 20th century.

[Conclusion-4]
As such, interpretation through theory is a very important factor in scientific history. Rather than accepting the information given to us as it is, I suggest we should think actively about the information and create more meaningful information. It may be a little different from applying theory to scientific information, but it will contribute to the growth of yourself and society. Thank you for listening my presentation.

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지문:수능특강 11강 8번
지문 내용 요약:텔레비전의 끊임없는 장면 전환
Introduction
Hello everyone, I’m dahyun. The passage that I chose is number 8 in 수능특강.
This is an article about children not being able to concentrate on anything due to constant television transitions.
Also, there are scenes that change constantly
It is about maximizing the oriented response and continuing to draw our attention with sensory bombardment.

Body
Can you focus on other things while watching TV?
It is not easy to concentrate on other things while doing something exciting.
Adults also find it difficult to focus on other things while watching television, but children think it will be more difficult.
To attract such children's attention, the producers of children's broadcasting programs use the trick of being late.
In the end, children give in to demands for attention and follow the flow.
At the same time, it is said that it is useless to analyze anything, so it changes passively.
It is also said that television puts some children in a state of learning disability.
In short, it's changing the brain.

Conclusion
As such, television and constant scene switching have a bad effect.
So we need to cut down on television.
Let's increase the time to focus on something other than television.
Thank you for listening.

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[2615이하윤] 지문:자이스토리 G19       지문내용:애완견이 환자에게 미치는 긍정적 영향

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[2615이하윤] 지문:자이스토리 G19       지문내용:애완견이 환자에게 미치는 긍정적 영향

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Good morning,everyone. The passage that l choose is number 19 in xi-story G-19.It is about a pet dogs a positive effect to patient.Since l’ve become interested in human psychology lately,I chose to explore this subject in detail.Today,I’d like to introduce you to how pet dogs affects human physical health.

Do you live with pet dog? Living with a pet dog is very helpful to you.According to thesis by the University of Georgia in the U.S,for children who grew up with two or more dogs or cats have decreased atopic dermatits, allergic rhinits and asthma.however,for children who don’t keep any animals were suffering from allergic diseases.

Likewise, pet dogs not only have positive effect on human mental health but also human physical health.I recommed you keep a pet at home.Thank you for lisenting.

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지문: 수능특강 11-11
내용 요약: 의사 소통의 어려움 - 상징 표현에 관한 경험적 배경의 차이가 해석의 차이를 불러온다.
Hi, everyone. The passage I choose is the number 11 in 수능특강 It explains that differences in personal experience can lead to differences in interpretation of symbolic expressions. The passage was interesting but disappointing becuse content focused only on personal communication. let's expand coverage of the the concept to the cultural domain.

human brains naturally use a symbolic techniques-metaphor- in the cognitive process of concepts. abstract and difficult target concepts are easily understand. by a way of connecting that those to ‘a familiar concept derived from their experience’

but people have cultural experiences as well as personal experiences. it's a important. If some metaphor is based on cultural experience, interpretation differences are come between cultures and cultures, not individuals. for exemple, In Oriental culture area, understanding of emotional concept through internal organs is common. 간 떨어지다 means surprised and 배알이 꼴리다;창자가 뒤틀리다 means piqued. this metaphor based on inferential experience from oriental medicine. So it is hard to understanding in Occident. becuse they can not connect a ‘liver drops’ with ‘surprised’

We lives in a culture. some Metaphor may be completely personal, some are universal, at least in their cultures. but also that is only in their culture so is special. these specificity may be a long-standing task for Not only personal communication, but also translation between languages. Thank you

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지문: 수능특강 unit11 2번
지문 내용 요약: 부모 자식 간의 자존감 수준의 양적 상관관계
부모의 갈등 해결 방식을 보여줌에 따라 자식의 자존감 수준이 달라짐

<Introduction>
Hi, everyone. The passage that l choose is number 02 in 수능특강.
It is about a positive relationship between self-esteem levels in parents and their children.
Since I've become very interested in relationship, I wanted to let you know that parents' actions have a great impact on their children.
Among them, I'm going to talk about the phenomenon of emotional trash can between parents and children.

<Body>
Have you ever hear about emotional trash can? Literally, it is to drive emotions into others, that is, to say and convey all negative emotions.
When this happened between parents and children, children think it's right to listen. So they keep listening, and depression spreads before they know it.
In this case, parents think that showing these negative behaviors does not cross the line of relationships, but in fact, it results in disrupting the children's independent life.
You hate the parents who made you do that, but you end up feeling ashamed of yourself for not loving the parents who gave birth to you.
However, there is no wrong feeling in this world. Like all other emotions, hate toward parents is a very natural emotion.
Most human relationships are accompanied by stress, and it is natural that there is stress in the relationship with others as parents.
If you are still feeing uncomfortable in your relationship with your parents, you sometimes need to be honest with your emotions and gain experience of achievement that raises your self-esteem.
Then, it will be easier to deal with the relationship than before.

<Conclusion>
As mentioned in the text, the impact of parents on their children is huge. However, we hope to grow into mature adults, healthy separation from our parents in our own way for our self-esteem.
Thank you for listening.

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지문: 자이스토리 L20
지문 내용 요약: 우리는 불확실함 속에서 확실함을 찾는다.

[Introduction]
Hello everyone, i’m chaeeun. The passage that i chose is L10 in 자이스토리. This text is about of a human desire for certainty in uncertainty. In some cases, a man drunk with this text dropped his key in the dark, but looked for the lost key in the light.
After reading this texts, it seem that i have experienced this kind of experience, and i decided to look into another case.

[Body]
Have you ever lost something in the dark and found it in the light? When i dropped a small thing like a coin, I looked directly underneath and looked for it in the direction on the light.
Then, have you ever solved a formula?
Like mathematical formulas and physical formulas.
Sometimes we only know the formula and we don't know how that came about. Therefore, it can be confusing when using the formula. To solve it, we can understand and write the formula exactly.

[Conclusion]
In this way, we can see how to ensure in uncertainty.
Even if you don't know, if you think about it, you'll find an easy way.
Let’s find certainty in the uncertainty. Thank you for listening.

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지문: 자이스토리 Q13
지문 내용 요약: 시험에 대한 긍정적인 마음가짐이 필요한 이유

Good morning, everyone. The sentence I chose is "자이스토리 Q13". The passage tell people to think positively, not to relate their confidence to their test scores. I'm going to talk about positive thinking
today.

Health expert and human rights activist Widad Akrawi said, "If you are positive, you'll see opportunities instead of obstades." Have you ever thought of a positive way of thinking?
First, avoid using negative language.
If you forgive negative thoughts and repeat negative words in your mind, it will affect your way of doing things and have negative consequences. So instead of saying like, "I can't do it," Iet's do our best so that we can say positive things like "I can do it" and "I'll try." Second, remember that sometimes it's okay to make the wrong choice. Everyone makes a choice that makes mistakes or regrets.
Even if you make a mistake, it doesn't
mean everything will end. If you realize what's wrong, reflect on yourself, and think carefully about what choice was best, you'll be able to make a better choice next time than last time.

In this way, positive thinking has many effects on our lives. So why don't you try again without being frustrated even if you fail through this method?
Thank you for listening.

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지문:수능특강 unit 11 n.6
지문 내용 요약:간단해 보이지만 실제로는 복잡한 시지각(=실제로는 복잡한 것 이지만 우리 눈에는 간단히 보인다)
Hello, every one
The passage that I chose is number 6 of 수능특강
It’s about “the eye processing” that looks very simple but actually complicated.
In the passage, there is an example of peanut butter.
We just see or get the outcome, so we think it’s just came to us
But if we look little closer, it’s not simple.
The reason why we think like this is “our interface” of product.
Our interface of all the final product is to be a store and money
To you and me, “a store” and “money” are the most important parts.
And that’s all
All the other things are same.
They have been processed many stages and then delivered to us
But sometimes we ignored the facts that kinds of complicated things.
Because it’s annoyed, uncomfortable to understand
But we should know the process and understand the systems
Because the things that sits in front of my eyes are not the things they are.
We should know how they were made of, where they were from, and why did they come here.
I think that’s the rights and duty of product user.
Thank you for listening.

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지문 : 자이스토리 D15 지문내용: 전자쓰레기가 되는 많은 휴대전화.   Hello, everyone, I’m heejeong. The passage that I choose is D15 in 자이스토리. It is about e-waste that we abandoned easily and it isn’t right. Since I’ve become interested in environmental problem, I wonder relations between e-waste and environment. Today I introduce about the effect of e-waste to the environment.
As People buy electronics, Amount of e-waste is increasing. For now its amount  reach 54million tons. Unfortunately, Many e-waste is abandoned incorrectly and Most don’t know how it is abandoned. Therefore The most serious problem is e-waste that isn’t abandoned properly. First, it have harmful chemicals. Burning makes harmful gases and these worsen Global warming and climate change. We are also exposed to the chemicals like heavy metal. Second is pollution of ocean. A lot of waste amount included e-waste is abandoned in ocean. E-waste doesn’t disappear naturally so it can damage ocean life and destroy ecosysems. In fact, A million ocean life died by eating e-waste.
In concluson, E- waste affect both the environment and us. So we shoule use it as long as possible. Also, when we abandon it, we abandon in designated place or give to a place where does e-waste collection. Thank you for listening to my report.

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지문: 2020 3월 고2 모의고사 24번
지문 내용 요약: 식품 라벨의 허점

Good morning, everyone. The passage that I chose is number 24 in 3월 모의고사. My main topic for today's talk is the weak point of food ingredient labeling. If a food contains several different kinds of sweeteners, they can be listed separately. So, consumers decide to buy unhealthy food without seeing.

Not only this trick, however, but there are more surprising facts.  First, do you hear that products don't have dye and preservative? In this case, products contain 'monosodium glutamate (MSG)' with a high probability. MSG is not considered dye or preservative, but it can be harmful.  Secondly, we were tricked by calorific notation. If food contains less than 5kcal, it can be notated 0kcal. But, it isn't actually 0kcal. So, if you eat too much, you may intake excessive calories.

I'd like to highlight that strong dependence on food ingredient labeling is dangerous. Thank you for listening.

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지문 : 자이스토리 F12
지문 내용 요약 : 아이의 행동을 제한할 때 모든 상황에서 효과적이려면 처벌은 간결해야 하며 행동과 직접적으로 관련 있어야 한다.
Introduction (4 )
Hello, everyone, I'm ajeong. The passage that I chose is number F12 in 자이스토리.
It is about what things to consider when limiting your child's behavior are.
I chose this passage because I thought I needed to know this if I wanted to be a kindergarten teacher.

Body (7)
Parents are very embarrassed when their children are out of control.
I've focused on two things.
Limitations must be reasonable in terms of the first child's age, temperament and level of development.
For example, even if you solve a math problem, can you solve it if you give a 7-year-old child a 10-year-old math problem?
Similarly, when restricting your child's behavior, you must set the appropriate restrictions for the child.
Second, enforcement of the limit should be consistent and firm.
Without consistency, children won't even realize that the behavior is wrong.

Conclusion (4)
When limiting children's behavior like this, it should be consistent and limiting in consideration of the child's level.
Otherwise, children will test the limits on their parents.
It takes parental effort for the child.
Thank you for listening.

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지문: 자이스토리 F18

지문 내용 요약: 전반적인 생활 수준의 향상 때문에 최근 수명이 길어짐

Hi, everyone.

The passage that I chose is F18 in xi story.

It is about changes that affect life extension.

The report argues that our life expectancy has increased because the standard of living has improved.

First, medical and public health developments.

Second, the improvement of education, housing, nutrition, and sanitation systems.

Last, the popularization of technologies designed to improve health.

According research data from 2009, most of the reasons for death during the 조선시대 in the 19th century were Cholera and the falling living standards.

Life expectancy is 53 years in the 19th century and 79 years in the 21st century.

Likewise, the development of medical technology and the improvement of quality of life due to industrialization are becoming important variables.

For example, medical interventions such as Cholesterol tests and Statins have significantly improved overall health since 1980 and many people have stopped starving with abundant food compared to the past.

There is also a saying that how long you can live in the United States depends not only on your income but also on where you live.

So I’d like to emphasize that it’s really important to improve your living standards.

There is no end to the development of science and technology.

It will create much more life expectancy than in the 21st century. Because of the development of more technology and the improvement of living standards.

That’s all for today.

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지문:자이스토리 G13
지문 내용 요약: 전투적인 스포츠는 인간의 공격성을 반영한다.

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Hello everyone. I am Hyunbi. The passage that I chose is G13 of 자이스토리. This passage is about the relationship between sports and violence. Because of my desired career path is sports, So I have been research this issue. Today I want to introduce you to the impact of sports on violence.

[Body]-(8)
How do you think sports affect violence? I think sports make people violent. You may have heard that the environment in which children grow up affects their personality. As such, the surrounding environment greatly influences a person's personality. In sports, sometimes extreme situations arise due to the desire to win or passion. This will happen more often, especially if you enjoy combative sports. If such situations are repeated, people's violence will increase. That's why I think sports make people violent.

[Conclution]-(4)
But that doesn't mean that all sportsmen are violent. The general view is that playing sports can promote violence. In other words, as the passage suggests, I believe that intense sports promote aggression in people. Thanks for your listening to my presentation.