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What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 16? 

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What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 16? 

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What is the most effective way to combine sentences 8 and 9?

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What is the most effective way to combine sentences 8 and 9?

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Sentence 32 needs to be revised. In the box provided, rewrite this sentence in a clear and effective way.

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Sentence 32 needs to be revised. In the box provided, rewrite this sentence in a clear and effective way.

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Luka wants to revise sentence 12 in his essay. In the box provided, rewrite sentence 12 in a clear and effective way.   E1.9C

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Luka wants to revise sentence 12 in his essay. In the box provided, rewrite sentence 12 in a clear and effective way.   E1.9C

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Sentence 2 needs to be revised. In the box provided, rewrite sentence 2 in a clear and effective way. 

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Sentence 2 needs to be revised. In the box provided, rewrite sentence 2 in a clear and effective way. 

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Suggested Correct Answer: Regardless of the reason, musical instruments are a meaningful addition to a person's skill set.

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Spring 2023 STAAR EOC, English 2 - #48 Revising Passage (TEKS 9.Dv) 

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Spring 2023 STAAR EOC, English 2 - #48 Revising Passage (TEKS 9.Dv) 

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Sentence 16 needs to be revised. In the box provided, rewrite this sentence in a clear and effective way.

POSSIBLE EXEMPLAR ANSWERS:

The ad said that you are looking for a responsible individual who has pet care experience, excellent communication, and great compassion for animals.

The ad said you are looking for a responsible individual with pet care experience, excellent communication skills, and great compassion for animals.

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Sentence 12 needs to be revised. In the box provided, rewrite this sentence in a clear and effective way. 

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Sentence 12 needs to be revised. In the box provided, rewrite this sentence in a clear and effective way. 

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English 1--Sentence 12 needs to be revised. In the box provided, rewrite this sentence in a clear and effective way.

Readiness Standard 9C. Reporting Category 5

Answer:

Lincoln utilized his knowledge of the writings of prominent figures as well as his developed storytelling skills to help shape his platform for president.

Rationale: Rearranging the wording this way creates a clearer and more concise sentence and places the preposition “as well as” in the correct place.

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What is the most effective way to revise sentence 32?

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What is the most effective way to revise sentence 32?

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In the late spring, the sides of the cliffs echo with the music of tiny tree frogs.

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What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 14?

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What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 14?

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7th grade Writing 20-21

Answer: F

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Correct answer: For some of the slides, Casilly welded together the chutes of old cement mixers.  7th grade 2021 released question.

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Sentence 15 needs to be revised.  In the box provided, re-write sentence 15 in a clear and effective way.

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Sentence 15 needs to be revised.  In the box provided, re-write sentence 15 in a clear and effective way.

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For some of the slides, Cassilly welded together the chute of old cement mixers.

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Spring 2021 7th Grade.              What's the most effective way to revise sentence 15? 

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Spring 2021 7th Grade.              What's the most effective way to revise sentence 15? 

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What is the best way to revise sentence 36?

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What is the best way to revise sentence 36?

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I saved it, I look after it, and I love it.

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What is the most effective way to combine sentence 12 and 13 in a clear and effective way?

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What is the most effective way to combine sentence 12 and 13 in a clear and effective way?

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Answer:

Huge flames shot out of the burner, heating the air inside the balloon.

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Sentence 8 needs to be revised.  In the box provided, rewrite this sentence in a clear and effective way.

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Sentence 8 needs to be revised.  In the box provided, rewrite this sentence in a clear and effective way.

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A shrill scream from the car behind me snaps me out of my daydream and returns my focus to the world around me.

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Sentence 3 needs to be revised. In the box provided, rewrite this sentence in a clear and effective way.

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Sentence 3 needs to be revised. In the box provided, rewrite this sentence in a clear and effective way.

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Answer B: They write essays, take tests, do homework, and attend sports practices.

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Correct answer: We worked with our neighbors to organize basin cleanups in order to get rid of the trash.  2019 released STAAR.

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The meaning of sentence 16 is unclear.  In the box below re-write the sentence in a clear and effective way.

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The meaning of sentence 16 is unclear.  In the box below re-write the sentence in a clear and effective way.

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When the museum opened in 1997, visitors were delighted. 

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Spring 2021 7th Grade.                              The meaning of sentence 20 is unclear. What change should Ben make to improve the clarity of this sentence?

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Spring 2021 7th Grade.                              The meaning of sentence 20 is unclear. What change should Ben make to improve the clarity of this sentence?

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Sentence 9 needs to be revised. In the box provided, rewrite sentence 9  in a clear and effective way.

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Sentence 9 needs to be revised. In the box provided, rewrite sentence 9  in a clear and effective way.

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All I can hear is the whoosh of the wind, the thunder of the car's metallic wheels, and the piercing shrieks of my fellow passengers.