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http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/conditionals/

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https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2015/12/14/a-transitional-idea-is-missing/

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https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2017/12/03/try-reducing-a-dependent-clause-to-reduce-wordiness/
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http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/verb-tenses-and-time-meanings-5/

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http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/verb-tenses-and-time-meanings-17/

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https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2015/12/14/a-transitional-idea-is-missing/

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You're making too many edits in this assignment. The maximum number of edits is ten.

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see
http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/25/73/
and
http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/27/verb-form/

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http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2012/01/03/articles-determiners-and-quantifiers-25/

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http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2012/01/06/noun-modification/
and
http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2012/01/19/cohesion-with-this-these-such-and-so/

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http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/25/words-word-form-word-choice-and-word-order-10/

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In the article ‘Growing up near green space is good for your mental health as an adult’, Johny Wood provided the readers with a survey made by Aarhus University in Denmark that shows the importance green space for adult's mental health condition. The survey studied 1 million Danes and calculate the vegetation density around their dwelling far back to 1980.

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The conclusion, according to Wood, According to Wood, the conclusion was that green space during childhood affect affects people's mental conditions.

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Wood admitted that the researchers did have difficulties distinguishing the data types and considering the external factors.

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And while the reasons of researching result for researching results were yet to be provided, said Woods, the researchers claimed that their results were consistent to with other similar investigations on this field.

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Before my college career in Unite States, I lived in a Chinese megacity called Guangzhou.

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As a city that has with more than l0 million population in residence residents, the city is crowded everywhere, especially for the city center that where I lived nearby.

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At about nine o'clock on weekdays, if you take a look at the subway station, you can see people pouring out of the station and into the buildings. The design and location of those skyscrapers are also interesting. On the map, all the skyscrapers are built around a canoe-shape park. The park is like the Central Park but just smaller. It is filled with trees, benches, bike lane. artificial lake, and music fountain, There is even a large shopping mall underneath. On weekdays, even if the city center is crowded and noisy, this park is always quiet and peaceful.

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Whenever I felt a little bit stress out stress-out, I would came come downstairs and took a walk in the park.

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I could smell the fresh air, listen to birds' singing, and take a look of the fountain show. Normally, after a round trip, all the bad mood and pressure in my head are gone. That is the magic of this park, that in a fast-living city center, there is still a quiet place for people to take a deep breath and relax.

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When I took a trip to Chicago to see my friend this winter, he showed me around the city and took me to well-known scenic spots such as the financial district, Willis Tower, and Cloud Gate.

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While enjoying the view, I was very curious to find out that the design style of urban areas among U.S cites are quite different from Chinese ones. In big cities like New York or Chicago, you won’t see a single tree on the street. Instead, you can find a park which takes about ten-minutes on foot whenever you are.

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Since there is are no trees beside the road, the layout of the streets are streets' layout is more organized.

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What's more. you have specific regions (parks) for people to relax, which is more quiet and peaceful.

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The main idea of Tulsa Remote program is to let people that have remote-work jobs come and live in Tulsa. Have you ever thought about that before? What's your choice? Personally, I prefer to have offline work rather than remote-work that based in another city, especially in the States.

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To me, the problem is that America has 4 different time zone, and jet lag is going to be an issue. For example, if If I live in LA but have a remote-work job in New York, that means I have to start working at 6 in the morning.

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Another major issue is the efficiency.

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I always believe that meeting people in-person is the fastest way to solve problems. On the contrary, if I choose remote-work, a lot of time will be wasted on online-communication.

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Do you want to live in New York? Why or why not? Personally speaking, I want to live in New York.

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Because comparing compared to other cities in the nation and even the world, New York is much more diverse.

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When you walk on the street, you can hear several kinds of different languages.

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When you take a the subway, you can find those street artists performing in the station.

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Things like wearing special costumes in subway only happen in New York. If you are hungry. you can find every cuisine you want. from high-end French restaurants all the way to Mexican food trucks. This city is so inclusive that you will find a sense of belonging wherever you come from.

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I put "According to Wood" in front of "the conclusion" so that the sentence is clear. I add an "s" behind "affect" since "green space" is third person singular.

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I change "of" into "for", "to" into "with" because these are the correct way to use prepositional phrases.

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I rewrite the first part of the sentence to avoid miscellaneous. I use "where" to replace "that" because it is about the place I live.

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I use "stress-out" instead of "stress out" because stress-out is a special phrase. I replace "came" with "come" because would is a modal verb followed by a verb prototype.

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I rewrite it because the first sentence in my original context is not a complete sentence, replace "show" with "showed" because it is past tense, and get rid of "and so on" since it is informal in essay.

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I replace "is" with "are" because "trees" is plural. I change "layout of the streets" into "streets' layout" since it is more compact and less complicated.

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I add this since I am going to write an example I made after that.

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Spelling mistake.

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I change "comparing" into "compared" because it is a passive voice, and compared as a past participle has a passive meaning.  I replace the period after "in the world" with a comma because the sentence does not end.

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I use the because "the" refers specifically to the New York subway.