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Panel's Comment - Muhammad Aisar Rais Bin Abd Jamil

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Panel's Comment - Muhammad Aisar Rais Bin Abd Jamil

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1. Namakan setiap nodes dengan nama iconic supaya kena dengan identiti.

2. Explain gambar mengikut flow as tourist experience.

3. Hanya menggunakan pokok jenis Palm sahaja.

4. Hedges Shrup (eye level) untuk saperate the area.

5. Buat semula zoning base on current urban plan.

6. Identify fishing spot dalam zoning.

7. Jenis retaining wall untuk elak hakisan tanah.

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Komen dari panel Crit dan Pensyarah

-Dikepilkan bersama fail yang berkenaan yang akan dimasukkan bersama di dalam board final design saya nanti

1. Tambah lebih gambar gambar yang menunjukkan aktiviti yang disediakan (lokasi, aktiviti, target user)

2. utamakan laluan pejalan kaki masuk ke dalam site. Pathway yang direct ke main building( sense of welcoming,attraction)

3. Reorganize building layout and response to the site contact

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Provide diagram/visualisation for the activities.

Detail up the proposal of the activities

Show the connection from the outside and into the site. Especially from the Menara Condong.

Reconsider the type of vegetation and reorganise the suitable location of the vegetations.

Need to show the texture of the road since it will pedestrianised, such as paver block road.

The circulation needs to redesign the flow since to achieve the car free zone.

Show the intergration between hardscape and softcape, then need to balance between both elements.

Reorganise the hierarchy of presentation info to make it in good flow.

Change the graphic into architectural soft colour which blends with nature.

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1) From Landscape lecturer

-Understand what is urban farming vs community garden

-linear farming hard to maintain

2) Comments from all panel

-Outcome proposal still don't reflect concept.

-zoning placement looks separated, instead it should be integrated

- apply 5 urban elements in proposal, such as creating own district in site, creating few interconnected nodes (reflect the issue stated) and connect to existing node-temple

-make pavement between the farm interesting by adding shading.

- people need to walk too far through pavement in order to reach to riverside, should have axis from the corner and spread through the riverside (fishing hut). Fishing hut only concentrated at one zone, should disperse along the riverside from the axis.

-do 1 commercial zoning kiosk+cafe.

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recheck balik issue demographic design adakah ianya dapat disolve atau tidak

banyak program yang diproposed tapi tiada dalam design

jangan ubah arah plan dan north point

design : cari axis dan focal point yang sesuai dengan site

masukkan case study ke dalam design

concept yang diproposed tiada dalam design

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Muhammad Aiman Arif Bin Megat Termizi_ Board

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Muhammad Aiman Arif Bin Megat Termizi_ Board

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Muhammad Aiman Arif Bin Megat Termizi_Crit 4

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Panel's Comment - Muhammad Aiman Arif Bin Megat Termizi 

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Panel's Comment - Muhammad Aiman Arif Bin Megat Termizi 

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1. To indicate section line in masterplan

2. The current issue is okay, but if you can solve the real issue regarding industry zone (waste Management and environmental issue)

3. To provide a program schedule (from morning to night)

4. To propose more programs at eco-industry park area

5. To design layout inside the factory tour zone

6. To calculate car parking capacity

7. To redesign the focal point and intersection point of the two pedestrians exist. (Redesign the platform plaza)

8. To rethink the function of the main building. (To be the center that lead the people to both zones on the side)

9. Reconsider industrial factory tours zone access. Usually at the back of the factory is a waste storage area)

10. Hierarchy of the pedestrian access needed to be clear.

11. To provide more human eyes level perspectives to show activities.

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Panel's Comment - Muhamad Zaky Imran Bin Abd Aziz

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Panel's Comment - Muhamad Zaky Imran Bin Abd Aziz

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Add more pergola/artificial shading to the east of the site

To introduce more elaborated activities as the spirit and soul of the site

To reflect urban fabric (roof) for site's building

To explore more on the strategies to tackle the flood issue

Big trees not suitable for planter box

To consider services and utilities (Toilet, loading area)

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pastikan saiz jalan mengikut saiz yang sebenar ditapak

eco lodge tidak relate dengan riverfront

eco lodge design tidak menggambarkan concept

adakan program lagi seperti restoran pada floating pod

sediakan ruang untuk seasonal activity bagi kegunaan eco lodge

label gambar dan explain kegunaan ruang dan aktiviti

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- Verbal presentation wasn't convincing enough

- Demography study for introduction unclear

- Use SWOT and not SWOC

- Mention your design strategies on your site / design

- Low carbon not only focus on car-free, additional of trees and shrubs can make the area low carbon

- Elaborate the images presented on board

- There's active activities on river, but not enough active activites on land (eg. activities like flying fox, etc.)

- Create landscape where public can do active activities and not just boring lanscape design

- Indicate the addition of land from original site (use dotted line)

- Lack of indicating zoning areas on site

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tukarkan nama daripada bahasa melayu kepada bahasa inggeris

elakkan penggunaan pokok2 colony sebagai contoh di dalam site, jangan guna pokok akasia

differenkan warna between jalan utama di dalam site yang mempunyai basikal dan jalan2 cabang sahaja

jadikan watch tower lebih dynamic dan tidak petak dan industrialised

buat floorplan supaya nampak pintu ssemua, same goes to 3D

repair balik board zoning, jadikan board tersebut lebih "master"

kenakan board lain dengan tema, jangan rojak2

graphickkan semua penulisan, jadikan bagaiakan competition winning

check salah eja dan term yang digunakan

disarankan menggunakan north point standard dan tidak mempunyai kaabah

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1) FOCUS ON THE MAIN IDEA.

Focus more on main activities and programme and why.

2) IDEA CONCEPT & JUSTIFICATION

Fahamkan, justification dan apakah kaitan dengan community and urban

4) PRESENTATION & GRAPHIC COMMUNICATION.

Susunan content untuk presentation

Highlight more on main component of design

Pilih diagram, gunakan perkataan yang bersesuaian ketika presentation dan pakaian yang kemas

4) URBAN DESIGN

﻿More softscape than hardscape

﻿Locate pedestrian walkway

How and why hexagon shape created

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1) CONSIDERATION ON FLOOD.

-Study on how to solve flood.

2) EMPHESIZE THE MAIN IDEA.

-Focus more on main activities and programme.

3) IDEA CONCEPT.

-Study more on concept and try to refine more in execution.

4) PRESENTATION & GRAPHIC COMMUNICATION.

-Arrange board composition properly

to suit our own presentation.

-Highlight more on main component of design.

5) URBAN DESIGN

-More softscape than hardscape

-Shading element