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Par 1
My first day at secondary school.
It was sunny morning in September. My mother and I went to my new school. I was nervous because we moved to the city some months ago and I didn’t know anyone and anything in it.

Par 2
Why is it unforgettable?
First, when I came into my new class I was excited. There were so many new boys and girls, and someone could be my new friend. But then I became upset, when my teacher said to break up into pairs in order to go to the first school bell. I didn’t know anyone and I wanted to cry. Everyone knew each other from the kindergarten, but I was absolutely NEW. I stayed alone and I didn’t know what to do.

Par 3
Happy end
In a couple of minutes a boy came to me, took my hand and we went together to the First school bell. So, I was happy. I had a new friend and my day was saved.

1.       The story is well-structured, and has three paragraphs.

2.       And, because, But, So, Then

3.       3 points for paragraphs, 3 points for linking words and 3 points for the story

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Par 1
When I was 12. I had the first experience in trips for
abroad. I was with my father and mother. It was gist for my Birthday. We
decided to fly to Austria.
3

Par 2
The first we visited The Princess Sisi Palace, then we went to
Hundertwasser House. It was interesting to me, because it was the most wondered
house in my life. Our tour was not long, so we went to drink Viennese coffee
and eat buns. Of course, I did not drink coffee at age 12, my parents drank
it))
3

Par 3
My trip was interesting, despite the fact that I was very afraid of flying. My ears were stuffed and it was unpleasant. But this is all the little things. I was very happy with the trip, and I will never forget it.
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That's all! Thank U!!! :))

9 points together - 3 for every paragraph.

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Par 1
When i was in 10th grade, Lviv
When i was in 10th grade, i and my friends went to Lviv.

Par 2
what i saw there
We stayed there for two days. We saw many interesting historical places

Par 3
what was in the end
In the end, we returned home very happy.

3 points. But it's just plan and some notes to the story.

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Par 1: When it happened and how it started

Par 2: The main part of the story

Par 3: Your feelings about the story now

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9 points
Par 1
It is the story about lesson, which was 20 years ago and it was my first working day at school.

Par 2
I was ready to teach children, but I became very nervous, when so that there are more that 25 children into the classroom.

Par 3
Now I remember any details of that day. First was very difficult, because i was not sure, that I am able to control such many children, but then I became talk with them and everething finished good. It was very stressful experience, but very important for me.

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9 points
Par 1
My first flight was so emotional. it was in 2018 and it flight was from Moscow, around 1 a.m. I was with my mom. I was impressed by very big and beautiful plane.

Par 2
When we took off, first what I saw was so many different bright light of the city, but I started to cry. Why? I don't know, actually. i think the most interesting moment is landing, because moment when plane touches the ground is impressive.

Par 3
Then, we were landed, all from the plane started clapping.  in the end, we were so happy.

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9 points When I was 16 years old, I had disire to have own money, so found advertising about job. First time visited the company of tea "Batic, Ascold" it was braethtaking. With me came more youth.

Manager talk with us some time, after he gave to everybody individual task. My task was with a package of orange juice. For me needed sold it`s to somebody in 2-3 times more expensive.

so I ran and propose it
I was happy and proud what successful completion of the task.

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8 points
Par 1Please delete your questions when you finish the story:)

It was usual work day two years ago and  we were preparing to go to our Warsaw office with presentation. In that day my boss decided to change his plans a few days before the trip. So I decided to go it alone.

This trip was important to me because I was going to present my project. That's why I couldn't miss it. That*s why I decided to made my first time at plane alone

Par 2 this part should be the biggest!

I was without cash and without wifi.

I did not have time to exchange money before the trip. So I have only credit cards.
And the second problem was the lack of internet at the time of my arrival at Warsaw airport.

I agree that it was a bad idea but hoped that all will be ok

Par 3

Yes, I managed to solve my problem with taxi. So, some man helped me to order taxi and paid it.
As a result it was curious experience. But I would not like to do it again.

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Par 1 What was befoure and when and where
It was when I was child. I lived in a smoul town in a house with my perents. I was very afraid of dogs.

Par 2
What happend
First I was afraid dogs, so my mom desided to present for me puppy and one time a puppy appeared in our house. It was little lump, but I was afraid it. Slowly i start

Par 3 What was in the end

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Par 1 We had a vacation, so we decided to go somewhere abroad. First we needed to choose a country we wanted to go. That time many countries required visas, but we had no time to make them.  So we choose Egypt, because we can go there without any visas.
Par 2The first impressions in Egypt were connected with sea. It was great, clear and warm. Also we liked Pyramids and riding quadrocycles and camels.
Par 3 We received excellent memories from our first journey abroad.

9 points