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1.Need to refer to correct reference guide.
2.Improve the PEE, especially express strong claim.
3.more explicit for the argument.

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1. use PEE format
2. Be sure to pay attention! Write evidence along with your ideas
3. focus on the conclusion and have an emphasis on the main idea

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Improve the introduction so that it contains all the information
Consider that all examples are closely related to the Keyword discussed in the article
It should be more comprehensive when explaining opinions

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1. some topic need more explanation
2. I need to consider the correct meaning of eassy question, and how let my topic related to it.
3. focus my eassy structure.

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Somehow getting off topic

Okay to come up with Title and sub-title, but hard to brainstorm a paragraph structure.

Need twice check for grammar

Terrible time control

in many cases failed to expand sentences longer

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1. Pay more attention to using academic words rather than everyday words

2. Accurate sentences (more passive voice)

3. Well-organised structure of essay (understand components of each paragraph)

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1. The analysis of the problem is not comprehensive and the angle of consideration is less
2. The understanding of some definitions is vague, so it is impossible to distinguish two similar definitions
3. The words are not academic enough and the way of expression is limited.

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Thematic statements are more specific.
Improve spelling and grammar.
More logical

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1. Enrich my English expression.
2. Make a clear structure of what I have learned.
3. Don't focus on one point and try to broaden my view.

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Citations should be in the correct format.
Note the length of paragraphs and start a separate paragraph for new topics.
Do not abbreviate proper nouns that appear for the first time.
Improve grammatical errors.

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Problems :

1. no clear discussion of key concepts;

2. Some ideas are not very relevant to the question;

3. the conclusion section is too brief.

Ways to improve:

1. explain the concepts while stating the definitions;

2. Ideas should be selected that are closely related to the question;

3. Conclusion needs to be expanded.

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1. Correct grammatical expression
2. Give more detail in some example.
3. Interpreting more in some paragraph.

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1. More specialized wording
2. remember to divide into new paragraphs
3. clearer structure

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1. Add an introduction at the beginning of the article
2. Linking topics at the end of paragraphs
3. Improve the persuasiveness of ideas and add content