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The best writers will be able to use describing words to show internal character feelings.

Sentence:
I am sad.

How can we change this to add in more describing words? What might it look life if someone is sad?

Sentence:
I am tired.

How can we change this to add in more describing words? What might someone do if they're tired?

Where in your story can you add in  details for how Kee-Sup feels?

I want you to try and do at least one sentence.

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The best writers will be able to use describing words to establish the setting of a narrative story.

Describing and building the setting.

We have been working on improving our A1 writing pieces and that today we are going to continue that by working on describing the setting.

Setting:
Yesterday I went to the beach with my friend, we took and walk and put our feet in the ocean.  We had a good time.

Draw what you think the beach should look like, then you need to add at least 5 words that will help describe the beach.

Where can you add details to the setting in your writing piece?

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You have read a passage from The Kite Fighters about two brothers who try to fly a kite. Pretend you are Kee-sup and rewrite the story from your point of view. In your story, make sure to consider how you feel about flying the kite and your relationship with your younger brother, Young-sup.

Write a well-organized, text-dependent response. Be sure to save time to edit and review your work for complete sentences, spelling, punctuation, and appropriate language.

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The best writers will be able to start a story by creating an interesting lead that establishes the character.

Today we are going to look at the way authors start stories in the first person point of view.

What do you notice these writers do?

Let's see if we can change our stories to engage the reader.

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The best writers can make a story better.

How can we make the story better by adding the characters thoughts and feelings?