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-What is one of the hardest moments you have experienced?
-When you were first enslaved, how were you feeling?
-What has been one of your proudest moment as a slave and why?
-Where do you think you would be if you weren't enslaved?
-Has there ever been a time that you lost hope of ever escaping the plantation?

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-elaborate
-memories
-details
-relatable
-story
-examples
-unexpected

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-personal experiences
-emotion
-lighter side
-moments
-other people
--opinion
-past

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The crickets started to chirp as they hopped through the wet grass. Little sound was heard, other than the loud snores of the master and the cricket chirping. The stars stared down at the ground and the moon beamed down, providing a small amount of light on the fields. The sun slowly rised up the horizon and let out pastel shades of red, pink, and orange. The fresh smell of food flowed through the slight breeze coming out of the crooked windows.

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This scene is about my character Mazi in a forest after she escaped in the fall. One technique I used to show where and when is because I showed the colored red and orange leaves falling on her to show that it was fall/autumn.  Another way I showed where and when is when I said that she could see her plantation that looked like it was abandoned several years ago to show that she escaped already and she doesn't remember it now. Another way I showed where and when is when I said she had scars from the whip. This shows that she has gotten whipped before meaning that she has already been in slavery and takes place after.
My last reason I showed this is by adding old dirt and trees. This showed that it was some sort of place that was involved a lot in nature (something like a forest) These are some of the techniques that I use to establish the where and when setting to make my writing more clear.

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Below the old crooked tree, laid Mazi with a concerned look on her face. She stared at the crimson red and golden leaves falling down to her feet. Mazi's injury only got worse. The wind blew right onto her burning scars from the whip. She could see a small sight of her plantation through the cracks between each branch. It looked as if it was abandoned several years ago. The frigid dirt stood beneath her wrinkled and swollen fingers. It was stained with blood. The few pieces of grass were almost dead. Mazi wondered how she got here. How she ended up in this bleak and dried up pile of dirt that looked about a thousand years old.

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On my Modern Day Hero essay, I think I did a good job. One reason I think I did a good job is because I kept it organized and didn't make it too jumpy. This really helped it make more sense and made it reach the standards. Another reason is because I used good spelling, grammar, and punctuation. This made it more clear what I was trying to say and helped the writing make a lot more sense to the readers who don't know the full story of what happened.

My writing overall was has a good structure and good conventions. One thing I will try to use in my next writings is to make a more structured conclusion at the end. This will make my writing make more sense and leave the reader off feeling more satisfied after reading my essay. My Modern Day Hero interview was not perfect, but I think it is improvement to the next step of becoming a better writer.

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I learned that to be an upstander, does not mean you have to do big things such as saving lives, but to just help people out, small steps at a time just to make the world a bit or a lot of a better place. The size of the impact does matter, but to be an upstander, it does not matter, big or small.

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-Stand up for a weaker slave on the plantation from the master and then become friends with them
-Become friends the master's son or daughter and then escape with them off of the plantation
-Sacrifice their own freedom/escape plan for another slaves freedom
-Try to poison the master to help other people escape and then end up getting caught and watched more closely.
-Secretly learn how to read and write and then teach other slaves so that they can help forge passes and etc.

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-Mazi barely knows what the ocean is
-Mazi felt free from the ocean
-Mazi didn't make any friends in the dungeon of Cape coast
-Mazi stayed silent in the dungeons and didn't want to fight back
-The reason Mazi stayed brave is because she didn't want her parent's and sister's sacrifices to be
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VhbO6lAZBvnI-6-KJ6K0D5g7zzEhdKORMybqG3T_fPc/edit?usp=sharing

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-Magava (Mazi's father) was the one who led the white men to Mazi's village
-Mazi's parents and little sister died from the slave capturing on Africa
-She lived in Ghana in the Ewe Tribe
-She didn't have any friends
-Magava went to the Ashanti tribe in search for a healing ceremony for his daughter, Dela (Mazi's sister)
https://docs.google.com/a/psdschools.org/document/d/1_7L-04OqluHimRTYqmCrmbxjNXSoy0rMcY5O7-z33UI/edit?usp=sharing