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honestly cant find anything you're missing. it sounds great!

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saying "I feel that..." makes it sound less credible

better transitions between sentences

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1. supporting details.
2. grammar
3. voice. Like I don't believe that you actually have that opinion.

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its 2 sentences

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more evidence and grammar

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organization

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I think you have a lot of fragmented sentences that sound good, however, they would sound even better if put together with commas or semi-colons. Otherwise, I think you have a strong thesis

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It looks great to me, good job! If you wanted to make it better you could put more supporting details.

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Some grammar mistakes

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yours was pretty good but you're missing those who dont need school to be successful

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1. more supporting details

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You're missing nothing, please don't hurt me :'(

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There is a huge variety of reasons why a student would drop out of school, but the most relevant one is that school is challenging and many lack the motivation to persevere.

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Why do students drop out of school?

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Students who drop out of school often do not leave school for personal gain; they drop out of high school because of social issues, personal problems, or educational difficulties.

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A lot of students don't drop out of school just because they don't like school. They might be struggling with something personally. Maybe lack of motivation. Work might be more important to them then education. Some might do it for family. If their home life isn't so good or they have to take care of siblings instead of school.

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Students drop out of school for these few reasons; Not intelligent enough in school, bad home situation, finances, and being bullied. They either can't mentally learn or they choose not to pay attention. The kid might have to work and get the money now instead of later in life so he can survive. If the kid were being bullied he would try to find a way around the bully and get as far away from the bully as possible.

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It's not one size fits all, but I feel that when students drop out of school it's because it's too hard. High school is tough, and if you are not one to make goals and apply yourself high school is a waste of time.

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students drop out because high school can be too stressful, they dont have a desire to get an education and can have an experience that makes them not want to come back.

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students drop out of school because, they don't need it to be successful, like Henry Ford.

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Student drop out of school because they have other problems in their life such as family problems, financial problems, and no motivation. I do not think dropping out is the best solution to these problems.

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Students drop out of school because they are having financial problems within their family. Like their parents are struggling to pay rent so they have to get a full-time job to be able to help. Or they just cant afford the cost of schooling.

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Many high schools are inadequate in offering support for students dealing with mental/emotional disabilities, providing for their family, or being in a tough situation like pregnancy.

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Because honestly, some people don't need school to be successful. I know certain people who don't even have college degrees and they are multi-millionaires. It all just depends on the person. Some people need the degree, some people are just creative genius and don't.

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Students drop out of school because they are struggling in academics, personal life, or because they may feel pressure from parents or peers; and many schools do not offer adequate counseling and support for students in these situations.

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Students drop out of school because they don't have the motivation, they are too stressed out, or they have personal issues in their life that they need to deal with.

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Students drop out of school because they are lazy and don't want to do the work.

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Why do students drop out of school? Its because they are either done with all the BS or they just don't care anymore. It could also be because of being bullied. I think we need to be tougher and not be quitters.