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you don't need encouragement already-
it's 99.99% perfect just that you paused a bit in some parts

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It's really good... no comments on improvement. Awesome breath control!! 100% win the competition :D

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You could try to breathe when you reach the part so that it could be more fluent

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it was really good but i think that you should play slower-?

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The playing felt a bit rushed and could be more careful.

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Overall it was pretty good, but I think you should take more care in your breathing marks because they shouldn't affect your phrase.

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Maybe more practice is needed because I wasn't really sure what was being played.

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It was good but there were some random pauses in the song and I'm not sure about the tempo or rhythm (it was kinda messy)

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It was overall good, but the tempo could be improved. The audio was also a bit soft.

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it was good overall but i really couldn't hear much also maybe you can improve your tempo

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Most of the part except for those part when I couldn't hear was played well, you can try to improve your fluency

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The Zoom audio was a bit soft and some high and loud notes couldn't be heard. The playing was alright overall, however some parts were a bit rushed so a metronome is advised.

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It sounded good but there was some connection problem and i couldnt hear the high notes.. you can improve on your tempo and rhythm

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Nice job but u can do better if you ask teacher for help

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it was really good but the rhythm could be improved

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You play very well, but the rhythm could be improved.

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The notes were pretty good, but the tone can be improved a bit more. The phrases can also be smoother, maybe the air flow can be more consistent.

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You can play really well... you can improve your rhythm and sometimes your tempo is fast then slow (idk if its lag or what)

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Well played with the notes but can improve on the rhythm  and beats.

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Can practice more

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The notes were played accurately however it would be better if the notes were played more accurately as in the rhythm, pitch, and beat of the notes

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his playing was good but if he didn't stop for too long in between the notes it would sound smoother

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Clark played quite well. The tone was quite alright, but I think a smoother phrase and increase of air speed can help make the piece smoother and sound more professional so it matches with the style.

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Good playing but maybe have a smoother rhythm... also it sounded kinda airy