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brad: good pics nice and coulorful good work

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MAIREAD HAVE GOOD PICTURES AND SHORT SENTENCES

ED HAD GOOD PICTURES

TOM NEEDS MORE WORK

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macys was well layed out and so was eds

sams wasnt finished

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I think grace s is the best because she has bright colourS and its aimed at 5 year olds. however eds need more pictures not silly ones but its good so far

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JOSH'S WORK WAS GOOD AND HE SPENT ALOT OF EFFORT INTO IT

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I THINK THAT ETHAN HAS TRYED TO REALLY APPEAL TO THE 5 YRS OLD AS IT LOOKS FUN AND ENTERTAING

I THINK TOM NEEDS TO DO MORE BUT SO FAR IT LOOKS SICK

BRAD IS VERY BRIGHT AND COLOURFUL AND THE DERCORATION IS COOL!!

JOSH'S IS HAS LOADS OF PICTURES

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I think ed was colourful and neat

tom needs more infomation

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i think grace allens was the best because it was colourful and simple.
macy had a good one to.

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i think graces was very clourful and

straight forward

and lotties was well presented aswell as charles and emily :)

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Graces looks very child friendly and suits the age group

Ethan needs to be more creative
Make it look more colourful

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joshua fudges work is really colourful however carita should put more colours on :)

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josh had a good layout and a goo way to show ingrediants

connor had to add more it was plain

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Graces was really good because it was colourful and well

laid out

I think Lotties could have had more content

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i think yumnas is very colourful and is very creative

however i also think that Lottie should do more work

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Maireads was the best as it was really colourful and it had simple instructions and it was easy to read however I think lottie could just take the background off of her pictures and finish it but it is going really well!

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ed's was the best cuz
its gt all good qualitys init, ethans cud use sm more wrk!!

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Macy:good pictures and colourful.

Sam: could do with more picture and more coulor

and info.

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I think Yumna has a great idea and a very good sheet.

I think Sam should do more work

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joshua fudge's is very creative

and craita could be more creative and coulerfull

and jakub could be a bit nicer

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WHICH ARE THE BEST RECIPE SHEETS AND

WHY?

WHAT COULD YOU SUGGEST TO SOME PUPILS

TO IMPROVE?