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Pollack boiled in spiced soy sauce - Becky Anne

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Pollack boiled in spiced soy sauce - Becky Anne

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Do you know pollack? Pollack is a large salt water fish that you can eat. Pollack's habitat is Korea's East Sea, the Sea of Okhotsk, and the Bering Sea. Pollack has a lot of names according to the way it is processed such as Frozen pollack, Dried pollack, Half-dried pollack in Korea. There are a lot of ways to cook pollack. One of my favorite kinds of pollack is Half-dried pollack. Actually I don't like seafood, but after I ate Half-dried pollack in the restaurant I like, I started to like pollack and I tried to eat other seafood. The restaurant I like serves Half-dried pollack and noodles.
Nowadays I usually go to "Pollack boiled in spiced soy sauce" when I go out with my family. First of all, it is just around the corner from my house. As for me, the easy accessibility to the area is important. Although my neighbor rood isn't popular area - just a residential area, it's easy to transfer to anywhere in Seoul. I think it is a cozy restaurant. I don't like crowded places. This restaurant has a calm and restful atmosphere. Their service is also good. For example, we ordered the wrong dish which is similar to what we wanted to eat, so we didn't complain about that and ate it, but they apologized and gave us an extra dish. One of the best reasons I recommend this restaurant to you is they have a special chili sauce. I think that makes us addicted to the restaurant. When some people get stress, they want to eat spicy food, so do I. If you eat this dishes, you can feel it's nice to get rid of your stress. I ate pollack boiled in spiced soy sauce in other restaurant when I traveled, but that made me disappointed. I guess they use slimier sauce but there isn't enough to make the restaurant special. Anyway, while writing the paper, my mouth is watering. Before the end of this week, I'm going to go to this restaurant! Would you join me?

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Gohyangjip(Hometown House) - Hyunseok Jang

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Gohyangjip(Hometown House) - Hyunseok Jang

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Gohyangjip is not fancy and the tables are not comfortable. Nonetheless, I'd like to recommend it as my favorite restaurant.
At Gohyangjip, there're no secret recipes or decorations on their food. They have only served great-tasting Korean dishes for over 30 years.
They serve various dishes such as Bossam(Korean pork wrap), Suyuk(boiled beef), Bindaetteok(Korean pancake made of ground beans, vegetables and meat), and Chungkukjang(soybean soup). Above all these, I recommend Hwangtae-gui(grilled pollock). It is chewy and full of flavours. They serve you half in a mild flavour and half in a spicy flavour.
Personally, my father-in-law is a regular customer to this restaurant. Even his photo is displayed on the wall of this restaurant. It's also a historic place for me since I met my parents-in-law for the first time here.
There used to be mostly old customers in their 50s and 60s, but young people have started to visit here after it was aired on TV about a year ago.
It is located in Nonhyun-dong, Gangnam and it is closed on Sundays.

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Money makes the people divide society into layers. One criterion that divides society into hierarchy is salary and prosperity. Especially, if people want to get married, they nomally want their partner to have conditions which are similar or better than them. However, money can be a motivation for a better future. We try to get a well-paid job and work hard. When I earn enough money to enjoy my life, I'd like to move house to Austria or The Chech Republic with my mom. The Chech Republic's prices are about 20% lower than Korea and the age of welfare survices is about 55 based on women.(But tax charges are 40%) Besides, the tuition fees and expenses for art at university are all free! I love the relaxed ambience of those countries. My mom also loves it and going  to small vintage shop in every nook and cranny of Europe. I made a promise with my mom that i should donate some part of my salary. And i'd like to repay my grandparents for taking care of me when I was a baby. At this time, Money is a truly indepensible part of my life. In my childhood, It wasn't significant, but i feel importance whenever I think about my future job. In any case, Money is really important. Altough, it can be a way but not a purpose.

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Since money appeared in society, it has been necessary for people to live well. Money is one of the most important factors that decide the quality of our life. However, I think that the most significant thing is how wisely people spend their money when you think about money.

Although there are a great deal of methods to spend money meaningfully, I would like to write about ‘sharing money’ in this essay. People can share their money in a variety of ways by donating some money, paying reasonable salaries and buying products. On the one hand, some good companies donate a lot of money in spite of the economic recession. They try to overcome the crisis by investing in society in order to encourage their employees and improve their image and skills. Moreover, individuals help others who live in poverty to make a better world. On the other hand, there are many companies which hold on to their finance and pay unfair salaries to survive only by themselves. However, these ideas threaten the whole of society in the world. People have to live together. To separate oneself from the world is not a good idea to advance toward a better future.

In recent years, we have already witnessed a few critical incidents all over the world. Our society is on the way to ‘closing’ from ‘being open’. I mean that ‘sharing money’ is one way among diverse means. I also hope that we can share many things beyond money and successfully get over economic and political difficulties.

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I think money is not the most important thing to people, but it's necessary to live. Without money, people can't buy food and clothes but also can't find a place where they can stay or live.
Some people chase money, and they aren't interested in helping people in need. Money can change people into greedy and selfish individuals.
If I earned a fortune, I would travel to America, Africa, and Europe. I like to experience something new, not familiar to me, because those kind of things make me thrilled and bring me inspiration. And I would donate some money to charity, and then I would give my parents the rest of the money.
Now I'm having a holiday in my life, I can't travel around the world, learn English at the British Council, or buy books to read. Thus, money is important to me now.

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Hi! My name is Sang Hyeon. I'm university student, and my major is Visual Communication Design. I used to be interested in art, design and movie since I was at elementary school. Beautiful things, including movies, paintings, cartoons, always give me an energy, especially when they are hiding interesting story. I love to reading art history books. When I read them, I feel that background of the paintings makes them more gorgeous and lively. And there are some animations which deeply impressed me, like Moana and The Spiriting Away Of Sen And Chihiro. Their character, music, and story are geting along with together, and give the unforgetable impression to me. These kind of experience always thrills me and make me stand still when I was at hard moment in my life. And they were opportunity for me to set my way to the future
There are so many things which ech at fitst and I like ato gave a xis.

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Hi! My name is Sang Hyeon. I'm a university student, and I major in Visual Communication Design. I started getting interested in art, design and movies while I was at elementary school. Beautiful things, including movies, paintings, cartoons, always seem to energise me, especially when they are hiding an interesting story.
I love to read art history books, and when I read them, I feel that background of the paintings makes them more gorgeous and lively. There are some animation films which make a big impression on me, like Moana and The Spiriting Away Of Sen And Chihiro. The characters, music, and story all come together to make an unforgettable impression on me.
These kinds of experience always thrill me and make me stop and think for a moment when I am going through hard times in my life. Also, they present an opportunity for me to choose my path in the future
Comment: A well-written self-introduction - well done! To improve, check your spellings (especially in the last sentence!) and your use of the word 'impression' and natural English collocations.

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Hi~ glad to meet you

my name is Rebecca Anne(call me Becky). I used to live in Indonesia for volunteer work. I lived with a home-stay family. my American father named me "Rebecca Anne". Every name has some meaning. Before he gave me my name, I said to my father "I just want to be 'lover' and my Korean name's meaning is God's grace." It is perfect name to me and that's why I love my English name. I hope I do live up to my name.

I major in nursing. I guess It seems that many my friends study to earn their living in the future. Definitely, there are other reasons that motivate them to study. Actually I didn't have dream and I have no idea what I wanted to with my hole life. so I stopped out of my university and I went to Indonesia. It was not easy to make the decision. But looking back, it was one of my best place is decision I've made before. Now I have my own dream and I think I can have so many more opportunities If I study English as a nurse. That's why I'm here

I love watching film in my spare time. I find it really difficult to choose my favorite movie. one of my favorite movie is 'midnight in Paris whose director is Woody Allen'. I love all of his movies. After watching this movie, I determined someday I'll go to Paris.

I also like traveling. I try to travel more than once a year. one of the best city is Kota Kinabalu in Malaysia. because there are so many beautiful and crystal-clear seas and white sand beaches. you can also enjoy many water activities like snorkeling, sailing, scuba diving. I'd like to go to Europe next year with my sister, so I'm looking for part time job. I think I have to work a year to go to Europe.

Thank you^^

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Hi~ glad to meet you. My name is Rebecca Anne (call me Becky). I used to live in Indonesia where I did some volunteer work. I lived with a home-stay family. My American father named me "Rebecca Anne". Every name has a meaning. Before he gave me my name, I said to my father "I just want to be a 'someone who is passionate about her life' and my Korean name's meaning is God's grace." It is the perfect name for me and that's why I love my English name. I hope I can live up to my name.

I major in nursing. I guess It seems that many of my friends are studying to earn a good living in the future, but I'm sure there are other reasons that motivate them to study too.
Actually for a while, I didn't have any clear dream or ambition and I had no idea what I wanted to with my whole life, so I dropped out of university and I went to Indonesia. It was not an easy decision to make, but looking back, it was one of the best decisions I've ever made.
Now I have my own dream and I think I can have so many more opportunities as a nurse if I improve my English and can speak it very well. That's why I'm here

I love watching films in my spare time, although I find it really difficult to choose my favorite movie. One of my favorite movies is 'Midnight in Paris' whose director is Woody Allen. I love all of his movies. After watching this movie, I determined someday to go to Paris.

I also like traveling. I try to travel more than once a year. One of the best cities I've been to is Kota Kinabalu in Malaysia. because there are so many beautiful and crystal-clear seas and white sandy beaches in teh surrounding area. You can also do a lot of water sports there like snorkeling, sailing, and scuba diving.
I'd like to go to Europe next year with my sister, so I'm looking for a part- time job. I think I'll have to work for a year to save up money to go to Europe.

Thank you^^
Comment: A very well-written and personalised self-introduction. To improve, use capital letters at the start of a sentence, check your spelling and your use of natural English words and collocations.

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Hello.
My name is Batenkh. I'm from Mongolia. I came in Korea in August and I love this country.
Now, I'm running out my little business in Mongolia. It doesn't make lot of money, but I really like it. Sometimes I do my job at home.
7 weeks ago, I had a baby and my baby growing up too fastly.
My hobbies are watching football and basketball. I usually play basketball with my friends.
Nice to meet you guys

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Hello. My name is Batenkh, and I'm from Mongolia. I came to Korea in August last year and I love being in this country.
Now, I'm running my own little business in Mongolia. It doesn't make lot of money, but I really enjoy it and sometimes I can work from home.
7 weeks ago, I had a baby and my baby is growing quickly.
My hobbies are watching football and basketball. I usually play basketball with my friends when I get free time.
Nice to meet you guys.
Comment: Nice, brief self-introduction. To improve, try to link shorter sentences to make them longer and check your use of prepositions ('out', 'from' and 'grow' vs 'grow up').

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Hello. Nice to meet you.
My name is Doheon. I live in Ilsan. I live in Ilsan more than twenty years. Ilsan is really nice place to live. Ilsan is similar as Seoul and nearby Seoul with less people living compare to Seoul
I am university student. I am studying psychology. I really like my major except about biology and neuron. I want to continue studying after graduate and at least I want to get master's degree because I want to be a psycology researcher.
In my free time, I usually read a book and watch baseball game. I like most kind of books. I usually read science fiction, thrillers, history and science. I even read romance. But I don't like reading fantasy novels. My favorite book is 'The Taebak mountain' which writen by Jungrae Cho. And in summer I watch baseball games. My favorite team is Doosan bears and sometimes I go to the stadium to watch match.
I also like travelling. I want to travel abroad but It cost me a lot so I occasionally travel abroad. I usually travel in Korea. I travel different cities of Korea. I like Jinju most. I like view of Jinju castle and foods in Jinju.
I am really happy to meet teacher like you. I am really looking foward listening your classes. Have a nice day

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Hello and nice to meet you. My name is Doheon and I live in Ilsan. I've lived there for more than twenty years, and I think it's a good place to live. In many ways, Ilsan is similar to Seoul and even though it's a suburb of Seoul. It's like a city in itself just with fewer people than in Seoul.
I am a university student who's majoring in psychology. I really like my major except for the modules on biology and neurons. I want to continue studying after I graduate and I'd like to get at least a master's degree because I want to be a researcher in the field of psychology.
In my free time, I usually like reading or watching baseball. I like most kind of books including science fiction, thrillers, history and science. I even read romance, but I draw the line at fantasy novels - they're not my thing. My favorite book is 'The Taebak Mountain Range' which was written by Jungrae Cho.
As for baseball, I tend to enjoy watching games in summer the most. My favorite team is Doosan Bears and I sometimes even go to the stadium to watch a match.
I also like travelling. I want to travel abroad but It costs a lot so I only occasionally travel abroad. I usually travel domestically around Korea, and I travel to different cities in Korea. I like Jinju the most, and I especially like the view of Jinju Castle and the foods there.
I am really happy to meet a teacher like you. I am really looking forward to attending your classes. Have a nice day.
Comment: This is a great self-introduction with a lot of interesting details. To improve, link short sentences to make longer ones, avoid repeating the same subject ('Ilsan' and 'Jinju') and try to use more expressive vocabulary.

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Hello.

I’m Soojin and I work at an architectural company as a part-time researcher. Also, I’m preparing for studying in the UK so recently I’m searching for various ways to study English such as reading books, watching movies, which I have watched many times, without subtitles and chatting in English. If you know any other good, interesting ways to study English, please tell me about them.

These days there are three main keywords in my life; Architecture, English and Ballet. Above all, as you know, Architecture is my major. I’d like to be an architectural curator or planner to make events like exhibitions and festivals. I hope that public people enjoy architecture in their daily life. Although some people are unfamiliar with architectural events, you can enjoy various architectural exhibitions and festivals in Seoul. In September, Seoul Biennale of Architecture and Urbanism will take place at DDP and various places in Seoul and I hope you enjoy it. I already mentioned English so I’m writing about Ballet. I have learned ballet since 2007. I started doing ballet because I thought that ballerinas and movements are beautiful. It’s my hobby and a way to relieve stress. I also watch ballet videos on the social media in my free time.  Sometimes I cannot do ballet because of work or study but I will keep doing ballet for my health.

I briefly introduced myself with three keywords. I hope that we’re getting to know each other better in the class. Bye~~~:-)

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Hello. I’m Soojin and I work at an architectural company as a part-time researcher. Also, I’m preparing to study overseas in the UK, so recently I've been searching for various ways to study English such as using English readers, watching movies - which I have seen many times, without subtitles, and chatting in English. If you know any other good, interesting ways to study English, please tell me about them.

These days there are three main keywords in my life; Architecture, English and Ballet.
The most important thing for me, as you know, is Architecture since it is my major. I’d like to be an architectural curator or planner who helps to set up and ensure the success of big events like exhibitions and festivals. I hope that the public can enjoy architecture in their daily life. Although a lot of people are unfamiliar with architectural events, there are often a variety of architectural exhibitions and festivals that are held in Seoul.
In September, the Seoul Biennale of Architecture and Urbanism will take place at DDP and in other locations in Seoul and I hope you enjoy it.
I already mentioned English so I’ll write about Ballet now. I have been learning ballet since 2007. I started doing ballet because I thought that ballerinas and movements are beautiful. It’s my hobby and a way to relieve stress. I also watch ballet videos on social media in my free time.  Sometimes I cannot do ballet because of work or study but I hope to keep up doing ballet as much as I can for my health.

I've briefly introduced myself with three keywords. I hope that we can get to know each other better in class. Bye~~~:-)

Comment: That was a very well-written and comprehensive self-introduction. To improve, pay attention to your use of tenses (especially 'present perfect') and your use of natural English collocations.

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Hello.Nice to meet you.
I'm Deul re Min. It means "Dandelion".It is very unusual name in Korea. So,when i was in teens,I used to had many nicknames about name.
Now I'm working as a accessary designer and I'm runnuing my shop in the wholesale market.Many foreigner custmer visit my shop. That's why i want to speak English well.
I love to travel. Before i got married, my husband promised that i travel alone.So, I traveled to London in UK 4 years ago.I expect if i'm going to watch football match, I thought i would drink beer with British young people arms each other's sholders.But,I've heard most old people swear at Anfield.Nevertheless,I hope that i want to travel again with my son when he grows up.
I also like swimming.I used to go swimming pool when i was 20's 3 times a week.A few years ago, I won a bronze medal at the swimming contest. Luckly,there were only 3 participants. It is my funny and also sad story.
I'm glad I met nice teacher with good guys. Take care of catch a cold!

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Hello, and nice to meet you.
I'm Deul re Min. My name means "Dandelion" in Korean. It is a very unusual name in Korea, so when I was in my teens I used to have many nicknames based around my name.
Now I'm working as an accessory designer and I'm running my own shop in the wholesale market. I have a lot of foreign customers who visit my shop. That's why I want to speak English well.
I love to travel. Before I got married, my husband promised that I could travel alone, so I traveled to London in the UK 4 years ago. I expected to go to watch a football match, and I thought I would drink beer with young British people with our arms around each other's shoulders.
I've heard most old people swear at Anfield - the home ground of Liverpool. Nevertheless, I hope that I can travel there again with my son when he grows up.
I also like swimming and I used to go to a swimming pool 3 times a week when I was in my 20s. A few years ago, I won a bronze medal in a  swimming competition. Luckily, there were only 3 participants! It is my funny and also sad story.
I'm glad I met a nice teacher and friendly classmates. Take care you don't catch a cold!

Comment: You've written an interesting and personal account of your English goals and interests. To improve, you need to check your spelling, you linking with 'so' and 'but', and your punctuation : 'i' should always be a capital 'I' in English.

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Hello, My name is Ji yoon Son.
Nice to meet you! ^&^
I'm preparing for IELTS test to admit university in austrailia.
I've been AUS two times in my life.  At first, i stayed there for 10days. The second visit that i stayed for one month in october was more impressive to me. I visited Mildura TAFE in Vitoria State to study hoticulture. I could learn about  farming of AUS. Such as how we fertilize each machine, when we harverst each crops. and so on.
I met two professors at school, also they are farmer. One of them invited us in his house with garden to have dinner! That was very nice.
Also my older brother is studying in TAFE. He's interested in fix a machine. He might get a job in Austrailia after graduate. And my mother also wants me to go abroad. She often says, "I love travelling and i hope my children would live other countries." I need to study hard. ; ^;
Fortunately, i met great teachers in BC.  I'm so glad to study english with you guys. I think i make a lot of mistakes in my writing. Teacher  would change it to correct one. Thanks!

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Hello, My name is Ji yoon Son.
Nice to meet you! ^&^
I'm currently preparing for the IELTS test to be admitted to university in Australia. I've already been there twice and on my first visit I stayed there for 10 days.
The second time I visited was in October for the whole month and it was more memorable for me. I visited Mildura TAFE in Victoria State and studied horticulture there. It was a great opportunity to learn about  farming in Australia.
I was able to find out about how we fertilize the land using different machines, the best time to harvest each crops. and other useful things. While I was studying there I met two professors at the school, and they were also farmers. One of them invited my student group to his house with a nice garden to have dinner! It was a great experience..
My older brother is presently studying at TAFE. He's interested in fixing machines. He might get a job in Australia after graduation. My mother also wants me to go abroad. She often says, "I love travelling and I hope my children will live other countries." I need to study hard. ; ^;
Fortunately, I've met great teachers at the BC.  I'm so glad to study English with you guys. I think I make a lot of mistakes in my writing. Teacher  can correct my errors if you find any. Thanks!

Comment: This is a well-written and informative self-introduction - well done! To improve, you need to focus on using correct spellings and verb forms (be interested in + verb-ing).

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Hi~ I'm EunBin and I'm living in Eunpyeong-gu in Seoul. It is nice place to live because autonomy is trying for citizen and anywhere can see Bukhan moutain.
I study film and media in University. I like my major when I watch other's doing but when I see my work I want to hide and hope to disappear. I love to watch films especially that are hiddenforeign-movie. These days I download movies illegally. I worry that if I'm a director in future, I will be punished for downloading my movies unjustly.My favorite movie is 'Pianist' of Micael Haneke. It teaches me each person's border of understanding is different.
Also I like to read novels. My reading speed is low so I can't read many books. But I feel joy when I finishing a book. I usually like Minumsa's the complete series of world literature because their books  are light and simple, also we can see world celcebrated painters' picture on books' cover. My impressive book is 'Ferdidurke' of Polish novelist 'Witord Gombrowicz'.
He was fun and frank to deride  people nature. I think he was genius. Someday I will go travel to Poland to visit his home.

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Hi~ I'm EunBin and I'm currently living in Eunpyeong-gu in Seoul. It is nice place to live because there is a sense of freedom and you can see Bukhan mountain from anywhere in the town.
I study film and media at university. I especially like my major when I observe other people's work, but sometimes when I look at my work I feel embarrassed and feel I need to improve. I love watching films, in particular those that are lesser known foreign movies.
These days I download movies from illegal websites. I worry that if I become a director in the future, I will be punished for downloading movies illegally. My favorite movie is 'The Pianist' from Michael Haneke. It teaches me that each person's borders for understanding others is different.
I also like to read novels. My reading speed is slow so I can't read many books, but I feel happy and get a sense of achievement when I finish a book. I usually like to read books from Minumsa's complete series of world literature because their books  are light and simple, in addition, we can see the pictures of celebrated painters around the world on the books' covers.
My favourite book is 'Ferdidurke' from the Polish novelist 'Witord Gombrowicz'. He enjoyed directly making fun of people's nature. I think he was a genius. Someday I will go travel to Poland to visit his home.

Comment: A great self-introduction with plenty of interesting and personalised details. To improve, check your linking between clauses and improve your use of natural English collocations.

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Feel free to contact me at my email address if you have any questions, feedback or comments.
colin.thorpe@britishcouncil.or.kr

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Hello there!
I'm Colin and I'm from near Norwich in the East of the UK.
I work in education as an English teacher to foreign learners. I work for the British Council in Seoul and I like my job because it's dynamic, interactive and rewarding.
In my free time, I love travelling and learning new languages - I speak some Korean too. The best place I've visited is probably Bhutan in the Himalayas because it was so unique and surprising - their national dish is a kind of very spicy cheese soup!
I also like watching films - both Korean and international. Recently I've enjoyed watching La la Land and I liked the Korean film 'Agassi' last year. My favourite Korean actress is Moon Sori - I recommend her performance in Hong Sang Soo's film 'Hill of Freedom' because she speaks in good English in the film.
I hope to get to know you all better and I will try hard to help you improve your use of English during this course.

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Welcome to Colin's Pre-int B WI 2 Padlet page