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Chillssssss!!! Awesome poem/rap u rok

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Dear Macbeth,

These past few months have been horrible. Our actions have played on my conscience, and I'm finding it hard to cope. I have realized that the path we had chosen was the wrong one. Even though i accepted it from the beginning, the consequences of that choice and the voices in my head screaming murderer are too much to handle. I was pleased to hear that you had become the Thane of Cawdor. But I'm afraid that my ambition will lead to your downfall. The idea of being married to the king was so great that I lost touch with reason. When the idea of killing the king was put forth, I did not hesitate one bit. i pushed you and now i realize my persistence only harmed you, and I'm so sorry for that. Maybe if I let you decide for yourself we wouldn’t have come to this point. Ever since the day of Duncan’s death we have been slowly drifting apart and all I ask is for you to forgive me. i never planned for us to part this way. So i must leave you now; only hoping that you know how I much I love you, and that i am truly sorry for all the pain i have caused you. Goodbye.

Sincerely yours,

Your loving wife.
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Omar Al-Gethami

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Absolutely LOVE the tone of voice you used! I could almost hear you read the letter, no kidding. The sarcasm also plays out really well throughout the letter. Props to you for adding the twist of Macbeth's conscience at the very end! Can't think of any pinpoints for you, great job.

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Abdulla AL-zarouni - Feedback on Mesanvoic's Letter 

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Abdulla AL-zarouni - Feedback on Mesanvoic's Letter 

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Your letter/poem is fine. It requires rhyme and better connection in the stanzas, connection as in transitions among the stanzas to move on from one to the next . Never having transitions causes awkward pauses in between stanzas. Also, fix line 4 of the first stanza. Instead of "young Macbeth the brave",  say: "Macbeth the brave" since Macbeth's age is not mentioned in the play.

-A.Zarouni

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Best rap song there is.

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I really like those rhymes man, it also emphasizes the main idea knowing Macbeth is guilty. Your choice of words is also pretty impressive, to come up with something like this. Nice.

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I loved how you turned your letter into a poem.

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Akash- Feedback on Abdulla Saleh's letter

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Akash- Feedback on Abdulla Saleh's letter

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Excellent. That is wonderfully written, I like the way you used Irony

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I believe that you put time and effort into your work. you gave macbeth quality advice and information on being a better in a non-comedical way. awesome

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LIFE IS ALL ABOUT THE MONEY 🇮🇱💸💸💸💸

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Justin- Feedback on Abdulla Saleh's letter

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Justin- Feedback on Abdulla Saleh's letter

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I like the way you made the letter full of guilt and remorse. Your letter made Macbeth want to take everything back from the time he murdered Duncan. I like how you praised him but at the same time, degrade him. Perfect use of sarcasm.

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Dear Macbeth,

I do believe that you thinking that you can become king is completely irrational. Like for real dawg what are you on? Do you actually believe that you're going to be able to kill the king and get away with it. Ill tell you what's gon happen.

You gon kill the king

Niggas gon know

You gon get murked.

Good luck with your life buddy. Might wanna re-think the decision of killing the king. You're already the thane of two spots chillout.

Yeet!

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Best letter out there, Good job bbe <

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You have great punctuation, grammar, vocab and interesting thoughts. You conveyed the message through a well written poem to macbeth

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Loved the sarcasm , and the irony that you have used in your letter.

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Your letter is very well written; you are giving Macbeth advice on how he should have dealt with the situation. Your advice could be applied to most situations in life. You did an excellent job writing it.

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Very eloquently written. I do believe that his letter is one of the best I have read so far. You used literary devices correctly and in good moments! Great job fellow! Congrats on the kid!

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Dear Mac Baby

My Dear baby you are one of the most courageous people i have ever met and i hope you are proud of what you are doing, but i personally think that you can be easily manipulated you always listen to your wife and in life you will have to be the person you are you should never listen to anyone else other than your heart you have a goal in life you go and do it if you don't have a goal then go back to sleep .

sincerly,

your papiii (:

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Youssef Ahmed - feedback on Waleed's letter

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Youssef Ahmed - feedback on Waleed's letter

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You used a good format but need to work more on listing new ideas instead of using inappropriate words like idiot and all etc.

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Youssef Ahmed - feedback on Waleed's letter

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Youssef Ahmed - feedback on Waleed's letter

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You used a good format but need to work more on listing new ideas instead of using inappropriate

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I love reading your letter, it was funny and i also loved your sarcasm that you used in your letter. Its awesome

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Dear Macbeth,

What you did was not smart

you have a weak heart

Your wife, the manipulation

caused the elimination

of your friend, your good friend

all that, came to an end

because of your weak heart

what you did was not smart

you are in danger

are you happy?

you’re not a stupid teenager

what you had was enough

now look who’s after you

The thane of Fife, Macduff

you look like a kangaroo

you little stupid foo

Whos gonna save your lifey?

is it your depraved slutty wifey?

what you did was stupid

you ignorant piece of

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Yousef Al-Sharif's Feedback to Hamood Noor's Work

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Yousef Al-Sharif's Feedback to Hamood Noor's Work

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With every single movement you've done in your dance, you've expressed millions of thought and feelings trapped in Duncan's soul. I appreciate your great talent and creativity!

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Dear Macbeth,

I hope you're proud of what you have done. All it took for your wife to change you was an insult to your manhood. You have a weak personalty. How you have managed to survive these battles is beyond me. You are the Thane of Glamis and Cawdor. You should not allow anyone to deceive you like an infant.

Now that you killed Duncan in cold blood, how do you feel? I bet you're filled with guilt and dread after that horrible thing you did. The people loved Duncan and had great respect for him, even though they did not know him personally, unlike you. You of all the people had to ruin it. The people will seek revenge. I wonder what you will do next. Will you go into hiding as Duncan's spirit haunts you? Or will will clear your conscience by admitting your crime? I suggest you choose your next move wisely.

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Dear Macbeth,

I’m writing thing because I think you’re trying to be funny, but unfortunately it’s not working. I hope you improveyour sense of humor by avoiding jokes. Just state your facts without making it sound funny cause we’re not enjoying it. We’re reading your d story only cause our future on the line, otherwise I wouldn’t care. You think the king’s a joke? Well he’s not I don’t know what to say, but just stop….

All the actions that you’ve taken during the play are pointless, go sit in a empty and think about what you’re doing.

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Youssef Ahmed - feedback on hamood and jibrael's video

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Youssef Ahmed - feedback on hamood and jibrael's video

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Love the beat box and the rapping of Jibrael great work. work harder on writing your own rape song and sing it.

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Dear Macbeth

Oh!! Macbeth I heard you became the king ,that must have been really tiring and to reach to that position in a night what a miracle . Oh!! also miracles at your castle that's a gift from God because of your pure heart that never murdered someone . Your wife is such a light hearted lady . She never thought of a bad evil thought . That's why she is not blessed with a child because of her pure heart that's free from sin . Also did I forget to tell you that your friend banquo is such an evil man that he has a better future than you, OPPS the three charming fairies didn't tell you that too . I envy you because of your bright future that is lead by a bright child oh I forgot you don't have children

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ABDULLA AHLI-FEEDBACK TO YOUSEFF AL HALWAGI

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ABDULLA AHLI-FEEDBACK TO YOUSEFF AL HALWAGI

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Very interesting letter full of honesty. I didn't expect to be that honest and it also took a modern style in writing. I appreciate the honesty and I loved the symbolism.

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Dear Mac-G

I am going to start off my saying that you are a complete idiot, you are also very gullible. You believed what a couple of dumb witches told you, and you've slain your own king/friend whom you were loyal too and whom also fought for his side in the battles that you call yourself a "hero" in, I advice you to stop doing stupid decisions before you kill all the people around you and especially the people you love

Sincerely,

Your Homie-G

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Letter to Macbeth

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Dear Macbeth,

I salute you my friend, for having that totally manly courage, but I do not blame you, any other weakling.... I mean soldier would be afraid when they're about to kill their beloved king. I also love that bond between you and your wife, I'm impressed by the way you control her, I mean seriously you need to teach me that sometime. I got to point out though the way you reacted and handled those witches, you had to see the look on your face, I mean Banquo was legit staring not at the witches no no no he was staring at your hilarious face, and you call yourself a warrior. I always wanted to ask you by the way, how in the world did you become Thane of Glamis in the first place, I really wanna know, is Glamis like an empty place where ponies exist and poop rainbows? Bottom line is that I congratulate you, apparently you decided taking a deadly shortcut to becoming a king, trust me when I tell you my friend, you won't only regret this act, you might even find yourself begging your precious witches for mercy.

Yours sincerely, Osama

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Youssef Ahmed - Feedback on Abdullah AHli's letter

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Youssef Ahmed - Feedback on Abdullah AHli's letter

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Your poem is pretty well creative. You used a lot of negative aspects, but like the new words you used. It was proper but should work harder on following a poem's outline with better rhymes.

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Dear Macbeth,

Unrightful King of Scotland, Thane of Cawdor, Thane of Glamis, Murder of the late King Duncan of Scotland, and Wimp

I know what the witches told you. You know, that you would be come king, right? Is that why you killed Duncan? I can’t even start to explain how to much of dimwit you are. You have no idea what is coming to you. And now you are blaming his on his children? Just because they ran away?! Give them some mercy for god sake! You just killed their father, they are just running for their lives.

Now that you are king, it won’t make things any good. First of all, no one would like you. Oh and you think that's the only murder you will commit? Pffft yeah right! You will end up killing more guards, comrades, mothers, and children won’t be safe under your rule. What about your wife? You think she will be fine? Well if you do, you are a complete moron. She will probably end up killing herself from the guilt.

Next time, say no to peer pressure, and if someone can guarantee you will become king, just sit back, relax, and let it play out. I mean it’s going to happen anyway, right?
Your advisor,

-Mahmood

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Dear Macbeth,

I salute you for the man that you are.

Now your life is full of scars.

Guilt, Regret, Guilt.

Destroying your life that you worked so hard to build.

The people aren't complaining though.

Your life is at an all time low.

You being the King will make Scotland blow.

You're mentally weak; you just can't rule

Just step down bro, you're making yourself look like a fool.

You messed with the innocent

Pick on someone your own size.

Get ready to meet your end

Congratulate yourself on a life well spent.

Sincerely,

Justin C.

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Your words were written very accurately, perfect tone to address a criminal. You were cruel yet offered mercy and presented him with solutions. The letter depicted a deeper significance, the adjectives used allowed the dangerous message to strike so excruciatingly. As I read the letter, I felt the guilt myself, as though it was addressed to me. I enjoyed how the letter flowed so easily, getting more serious and frightening as it continued, a perfect way to drag the reader to the threatening conclusion.

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Flawless! Absolutely Flawless! Your reprimanding tone was on point and reality corresponding. Your writing is just incomparable; humorous, yet serious; enjoyable AND straight to the point. I wholeheartedly applaud your style!

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Excellent usage of Humor! It was absolutely hilarious , and I didn't want it to end . Your sense of humor is natural . well done!

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lama I loved your letter. Also I liked the way you used irony and sarcasm in the same time.

It's awesomeeee, you wrote a perfect creative funny letter.

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I love how informal you wrote the letter. Even just the way that the letter is written shows a great sense of humor. Also, I admire the bluntness and sarcasm you added. Good job!

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Absolutely love the humor and tone of speech! Very creative in regards of Macbeth's conscience. It reveals much about his inner self as it does about his surroundings. Extremely original!

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i loved your letter, i love the sarcasm and the way you wrote it.

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Absolutely hilarious! I loved reading your letter, I couldn't stop laughing the first, second, and third time I heard it. Sarcasm is high profile! This is talent right there. Great job! Young money cash money

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I loved how you threatened Macbeth at the end of the letter! You used sarcasm wonderfully. Your letter started hilariously and you ended it in a serious tone by threatening to expose him to the public.

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I loved every second of the 5 hours it took me to read your letter - hella long - I love how you wrote your letter and your nails looked really good typing it (I see everything). great job 10/10 peace.

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I loved the humor that you used in your text. I love how you tried to frame/proof him guilty. The message was clear and simple.

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Letter to Macbeth

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Extremely creative! I loved the way it was written, very professional. I feel like a teacher rn, good job mom! Thou art quite fustian of thee.

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Dearest Macbeth,

Let me cut the formalities and hit right to the point, you boy, need some manning up to do! Starting with your wood pecking wife who's on to your throat, get your sleeves up, walk up to her, and tell her who you are. You didn’t come into this world to be a puppet of anyone but yourself. I say, be your own puppet, your own spoon, your own self. And regarding the murder, they say behind every great fortune, there is a crime, your crime sweetheart, is the murder of Duncan. Every good thing comes with a price; your price darling is a hunch of blackness in the heart, though that isn’t much to pay for someone like you, now is it?

Love, Anonymous

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Dear Macbeth:

Have your parents ever told you “Don’t listen to the strangers”? If they do, then certainly you didn’t listen to them, since you just trust in the words from three witches who came out from no where. I believe that there is nothing you could do to save the situation, and the miserable and terrible crimes you’ve committed could cast you straightly down to hell. Are you haunted by all your guilt and remorse now? If you want me to make a comment, I would say “you deserve it.”

But despite all the horrible things you’ve done, I have to admit you do have some useful aspects, for example you just prove that none of the greedy or cruel ones like you will have a good ending.

Sincerely, Zhanru Wang

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Dear Macbeth,

Hey Mac, listen. I know what you heard from the other witches the other day; about you becoming king, and all. Its going to happen whether you you kill Duncan or not, its your destiny. Stop listening to your psycho wife, and just be patient!

Look, I’m a witch too, and I can see the future. The other witches left out parts of the truth. I’m actually trying to help you ( Don’t tell anyone, I’d like to maintain my bad reputation.). If you kill him, you’ll eventually be killed as well. The truth never stays hidden, people will know about what you -and your crazy wife- have done. There is just one up side to the outcome of your unthought out plan; Your wife kills herself -so you don't have to.

I’m out, witch.

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Your letter is humorous, entertaining and creative. I loved how you personified karma and used sarcasm. I enjoyed reading it. You used great vocabulary which added a lot of twists to your text. You've got outstanding writing skills. Excellent work! Keep it up

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Dear Macbeth,

Power can consume a man in measures so corrupt, there’s no return. Do not allow your desires to lead you to your disgrace and dishonor, especially after gaining such respect from your people. Your thirst for power seems to have consumed your consciousness, driven by personal ambition and encouraged by your very own spouse. Indeed, I have been tracking your events, and I am fully aware of your actions. As for your wife, you must take control; she is leading you to your failure. I write to you with words of pity and disappointment for your future is inevitable, but then again I'm here to turn the tables. I will not offer you a set of decisions, although it might seem merciful; often the wrong choice is taken. Thus, there is merely one way out for you; the spouse you hold so dear to you is causing your own destruction. Sometimes you must leave the things you love most; however, without a doubt I can fill her place much to your delight. I will be a great partner, I can wash away the blood on your hands with the ideal of purity that I carry. I will free you from your curse of authority and desire. Give me a chance, otherwise you have none, for I am sure the people would only dream of hearing the news that I behold of you. Lastly, do not sense this as a threat, I am only offering my heart and a new love that can build our country a new and powerful king.

Sincerely,

Your Secret Admirer

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Love the writing Marah, the sarcasm is very evident. Great ideas, keep it up!

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The way you addressed the letter was very good. i love how it relates to the events of the play. I also like the way sarcasm was used in your letter.Great Job!

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I LOVEE your letter MARYYY!!! I love the sarcasm. Great job bbe <3 You used great vocabulary words and i like your creativity in writing and wonderful, outstanding ideas!

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Letter from Macbeth's secret lover

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Letter for Dear Macbeth

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Letter to Macbeth

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Letter to Macbeth

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Letter from Lady Macbeth to Macbeth.

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This is the letter Lady Macbeth left her husband after committing suicide.

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WOW!!!

A formidable Duo!!!!

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Please, check out the amazing work of Khalid, Jibrael and Hamoodi! You guys were amazing!!! I am SO proud of you!

DANCE DANCE!!!!

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Seniors 2016,

I was impressed by your CW today! The ideas and perspectives you took to write the Twisted letter to Macbeth were extremely creative! Virtually post your text here for a quick check up so that you can finish your Twisted Letter to Macbeth Poster.