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Dear Edanur,

The outlook of your Padlet and the images you picked are really nice.

Grammar: There are some Grammar mistakes especially about verb to be and prepositions. You can use more conjunctions and signal words next time.

Organization and Content:  It's well-organized in general and I like your happy ending but your answer for the second question could be more detailed.

Vocab Table: Please separate the synonyms and antonyms in your table and do not forget to add the forms of the words.

Looking forward to your presentation :)

Ms. OFLAZ

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By the way about valuable diamond that they took the Moonstone back to the place where it belongs.It was the long journey back to the India.After a short time Rachel and Franklin were married in sacred place in Hindu temple because of the diamond's memory.When at the wedding Rachel was staring at the Moonstone and think that all the story.Maybe that was partly upset story but totally it was happy ending.

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I don't want to kill Godfrey.Because anyone doesn't deserve to die like this even if he/she is a guilty.

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I don't want to kill Godfrey.Because anyone doesn't deserve to die like this even if he/she is a guilty.

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Also I don't want to married them in England.I think that the diamond protect mysterious.For this reason, all the people who join wedding have to remember this wedding during all their life.

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Franklin had asked to Rachel to marry with him but Rachel did not accepted for a while.Because Rachel was ashamed because of Rachel's behaviour when she supposed to Franklin was a thief.Eveybody surprised Rachel's behaviour and she refused to talk to anyone about Franklin.Franklin insisted too much so Rachel had to accept Franklin's proposal.

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Franklin had asked to Rachel to marry with him but Rachel did not accepted for a while.Because Rachel was ashamed because of Rachel's behaviour when she supposed to Franklin was a thief.Eveybody surprised Rachel's behaviour and she refused to talk to anyone about Franklin.Franklin insisted too much so Rachel had to accept Franklin's proposal.

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   The next day Rachel had learnt everything what happened yesterday.She felt regret to trust Godfrey instead of Franklin.Although she had seen that Franklin was stealing that diamond,she has never accepted that Franklin was a thief.Finally,the mystery was solved by Franklin and Sergeant Cuff.Consequently this time hundred percent Franklin's innocence was proved.There is no obstacle that to their marriage.

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   The next day Rachel had learnt everything what happened yesterday.She felt regret to trust Godfrey instead of Franklin.Although she had seen that Franklin was stealing that diamond,she has never accepted that Franklin was a thief.Finally,the mystery was solved by Franklin and Sergeant Cuff.Consequently this time hundred percent Franklin's innocence was proved.There is no obstacle that to their marriage.

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Sergeant Cuff and Franklin went back up to room number ten to catch to tall sailor.They had pushed the door until it broke.The tailor woke up because of the noise.Then suddenly Franklin had realized that the face of the man in front of him was that Godfrey Ablewhite with the stone which was stolen.At the first time Franklin did not want to believe that who lay on the bad is Golfrey.His disguised was wonderful.Franklin nearly did not recognize to Godfrey.Godfrey had tried to run away but Franklin did not let him.Franklin thought that he had not seen to Rachel for a while because of Godfey.Franklin punched Godfrey on the face.He thought that maybe it was not enough but Godfrey was not worth to take revenge. In the same morning detective sent him to prison because Goldrey stole the diamond.
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It is a another picture of a Moon God

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This is the yellow diamond which was stolen

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The statue of a Moon God